In a quiet town like Ponyville, many stories take place within a single day as ponies go about their daily lives. One such story follows the day of a certain Apple farmer as she takes her wares to market and her interactions with but a handful of Ponyville's residents.
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So yeah this is my first story and I didn't think I'd be writing it the same day as I finally made my account and it's 3am and I did the cover art for it at the same time, so I hope it's still an enjoyable read.
And yes, I did base it off Avatar's Tales of Ba Sing Se and I'm sure you can guess which tale I mirrored for Applejack. May or may not add more chapters, up in the air. Anyways enjoy and let me know what you think.
Chapters (1)
This was a nice read! I liked how you portrayed everypony in it. Love it! Good work, friend
7461931 Awww, thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed my first ever romp into the world of fanfiction.
"Okay! Later, Applejack! Bye!"
...Or something along those lines.
7462080 Blargh, thanks for the catch.
And fixed it.
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The pacing is also a little weird, but it makes sense in that you hit the highlights of that day.
7462135 I can see that, but yeah, my intent was just for highlights, otherwise it'd be longer as we possibly explore what complex philosophies go through AJ's mind and at 3am there was just no way I could do that anyway. XD
For a first story that you wrote at three in the morning, you did a great job. I always love little slice of life stories like these.
7462584 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Great story !
7463439 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
You got a thumbs up from me, keep it up!
7468659 Shweet, I'm glad people you dig what I'm writing.