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crowscrowcrow


I was introduced to MLP by a friend in S3. At the time I teased him about it a little, but I guess the joke is on me as here I am now, writing Trixie shipfics. Feedback is always welcome.

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This story is a sequel to Daisy Chain Part 1: Fluttershy x Maud Pie


The second story in a new shipping prompt series.
Now with handy group: Daisy Chain (It's a link, click it!)
Should you wish to learn more about this series you can check out any of the blogs written by myself, fimfic4ever, UnlicensedBrony, and dramatic_spoon
If you wish to join our group of writers for the prompt series, send fimfic4ever a message.


Applejack has been sneaking out, and Apple Bloom can't take it anymore. Who is that weird mare that keeps glaring at her sister? Why does she never smile, even when her sister spend so much effort being nice to her?!

Mystery's really don't work too well when the tags give it all away. Have fun anyway. ^^

<<<Previous Entry Fluttershy x Maud - Next Entry>>> Applejack x Teddy Safari

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Comments ( 33 )

That was pretty good. But two questions.
1. How long will this “chain" be going on (how many stories)
2. What is your fav ship.

4600454 I'm sure their favourite ship is... Trixie X Fluttershy... if I am not mistaken (Sorry if I'm wrong Crowscrowcrow) Because we dicussed it in a PM :twilightsmile:

As for how many stories, I'm pretty sure it will last for as many writers there are, unless it goes into a pattern. Then... the number wouldn't be able to be determined.:trixieshiftright:

Sorry for answering your questions Crowscrowcrow, I just couldn't resist!:rainbowlaugh:

Pinkie Pie, knows about them rules.

You do realized even assuming that Pinkie and Maud are related to Applejack, there is soooo much distance they might as well not be related.
I did the research when that episode came out and while i forget it was something like one of their great-great-great-grandparents had a kid with the other's great-great-grandparent. Something like that.

THEREDR IS BACK!!! Awesome, absolutely awesome. Though I prefer Trixdash.:rainbowdetermined2::heart::trixieshiftleft:

4600454 basically smga is correct, we'll keep going through the writers in a pattern, we're also trying to add as many writers as possible so we get a nice variety in style (we currently have like 7 or 8 writers)

As for favourite ship:
1: appledash
2: trixjack
3:trixdash

4600823 YAY red's back :yay: it's been too long my friend :ajsmug: as you can tell, we've been busy

4601286
I still haven't gotten around to reading everything I've missed. Been visiting my brother.

Very nice work on the maudjack mate, first maudjack ever I think :pinkiehappy:

Clever thing with Pinkie Pie referencing our rules :rainbowlaugh: but like you said, I consider the pies honorary Apples, so no incest here :ajsmug:

Teddie Safari? Really Crows :rainbowlaugh: I could not stop laughing when I saw this, have fun UB :rainbowlaugh:

4601478 Yeah there's a lot to catch up on :twilightsheepish: still at least that means you've got a lot to read :pinkiehappy:

"Who is Teddie Safari?"
*looks it up*

Cross on a Christ, we really do have names for everyone.

4600454

Right now?
TurnerDash, OctaDash, and something else that I'm keeping secret.

I think my fourth wall is still broken...

4600454

I see people were so kind as to provide you with answers while I was asleep.:twilightsmile:

I guess i just have the ship question left.
Between the mane6: FlutterDash
Other: TrixiexShy

Suffice to say, I think Fluttershy is really cute and I like seeing her with either of the two biggest ego's around. :rainbowlaugh:

4600756
You are correct of course.
I would have dedicated some dialogue to that as well, but i was on the word limit so I settled.

Given how far back the relation from Pie to Apple is, I am pretty sure all of Equestria is related like that, so no(thing but) incest there.:rainbowlaugh:

It was just a joke.:pinkiehappy:

4600823
Hurray, welcome back Red! :pinkiehappy:

Pinkie will throw you a party when I get to my pc, or earlier if she gets help elsewhere. :pinkiecrazy:

Thanks for the kind words.:yay:

I look forward to your reactions later once you are catching up.:trixieshiftleft:

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Breaking new ground. :rainbowlaugh:
I am a little tempted to write more if it, but I would need another year to write it. :scootangel:

Next time, i think i will keep it a little simpler, so i dont have to rush any of it.:unsuresweetie:

She needs her own story darnit, look at her! :rainbowlaugh:

Good luck UB.:trollestia:

4601939

I know right? It is crazy. :pinkiecrazy:
I wonder how that is decided. Just whoever edits the wiki first gets to decide? :trixieshiftright:

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Honestly, you would think by now Pinkie Pie would have installed a door in that wall so she wouldnt have to keep damaging it. :pinkiecrazy:

4602051 Yeah, a year to make a fic seems about right for ya :rainbowlaugh:

Don't you find it kind of ironic that you broke the word limit that you set :rainbowlaugh: I remember when we were first setting things up, we were like: oh yeah, no ones really gonna need to go beyond 4000 words :facehoof:

So this means that the next 2 stories will involve Teddy, one with Applejack by UB, and the other with someone else by DS, should be interesting to see how it goes :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by crowscrowcrow deleted Jun 26th, 2014

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Yes, very ironic. :facehoof:

Of course, planning ahead is not my strong suit. :trixieshiftleft:

However, it was probably for the best, because otherwise i would have added a zero at the end. :rainbowlaugh:

Yes, i look forward to seeing what they come up with. :moustache:

4602085 Any chance you can set up a group where all the chapters can be found?

4602414

Oh, that's a great idea!

4602414

And we're done! :pinkiehappy:
Daisy Chain Group!
We'll have some blog posts up later to alert folks to it's presence. :rainbowlaugh:

oh now my head is thinking of ships.... SO MANY SHIPS!! also

“What? No, I totally like you together! I have never seen Maud look so happy, just look at her!” Pinkie pointed down at Maud, who looked completely stoic as ever while she observed her sisters insanity in full swing. ”But it’s against the second rule!”

THIS:rainbowlaugh: Oh Pinkie:pinkiecrazy:

4652021

Oh what kind of ships? :trixieshiftright:


Also, yes! Totally one of my fav parts. :rainbowlaugh:

4652078 pinkie x Luna, pinkie x Celestia(this one would be fun), Luna x Aj.

I feel like that worked out a lot better than the first in this series, that one felt a bit cookie cutter. Maybe you're getting better with practice.

5321953
I'm glad you had fun. ^^

However, I feel I should point out that this series has different authors for each story, so the style will be quite a bit different from story to story. For example: the previous story was writen Fimfic4ever, the next is writen by UnlicensedBrony

Unless you were refering to something else?

5321986
Nope, that'll teach me not to doublecheck the author's name after following links, I suppose.

Maud's my favorite pony and she's pretty difficult to right for (an understatement), especially for ship fics yet you captured her personality perfectly :twilightsmile: . I loved this fic and would love to see another longer version outside of the Daisy Chain or even a different Maud ship from you. Sorry if I'm gushing but this is seriously something I never thought I'd see :pinkiegasp: . I'd even go so far as to say it could easily be another show in the series if not for the target demographic of the show :pinkiecrazy: . Also, even though I've yet to fact check the information regarding rocks it at least sounds like you did your research. All of it just seems so well thought out. And from the comments I read on the last one in the chain you wrote this all very quickly too. I honestly can't help but want to thank you for this, so I will. Thank you for writing such an amazing fic. :pinkiehappy:

4652091 Interestingly enough I've only seen two Luna x AJ fics and neither is complete. Another pairing you might try is Celestia x AJ, of which I've yet to see a fic that isn't clop/mature, not well written, or uses it as a starting ground for them to break up and start seeing other ponies even though at the very least Twilight, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy have had a good Celestia ship fic :ajbemused: . I've yet to look into Luna x Pinkie but probably will after I get through what currently exists of this chain. :yay:

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Awwh, thank you. That was wonderful. The perfect pick-me-up I need while I'm home sick. :pinkiesick::yay:

I absolutely love Maud. :heart: She's a very close second fav to Trixie in my book. So you can be sure I'll do another story with her one day. (Maybe with Trixie.:trixieshiftleft:)
The tough part is that, as you noted in previous chain story, Maud is like a rock, slow to change and pretty difficult to deal with socially, so if I am going to do a story with her it needs to be long, and I don't have time for that until my main series comes to a close. Though, I am pretty happy with how this little cheat worked out in the story to skip into the middle of the relationship, I don't think it works twice. I would really want to be able to take my time and write something long enough to see Maud actually grow into a relationship, and more importantly to have her partner grow to understand how Maud works. That last part is especially important for Maud.

Although this story was written really quickly, that is only because I already had a very solid idea of how I wanted Maud to be, but I never had the time to write a story with her until this prompt basically forced me to. After that it was easy since heck I'd wanted to do this forever. :rainbowlaugh:

6361421 I hope you get well soon. I honestly have a ton of patience and more than my fair share of things to tide me over.
I'm in community college and work at a Denny's myself so I can understand how busy schedules can get :ajbemused: . Good fanfics take serious thought, time, and effort. They're rarely if ever something you come up with on the spot. I'm currently working on a rather large fic based off of Fallout Equestria myself and even a couple months in I haven't gotten past the first chapter because I keep making adjustments. I may well not finish it for two years but it'll be worth it in the end :twilightsmile: . Of course I've also never posted any of my own content online and have only recently gotten into the idea of writing fanfics myself (a few months back) so it's a bit nerve racking since I really want it to be good. I'm also wondering if I shouldn't take a break from that for a while and work on a few smaller fics to pace myself. Plus I'm distracted by various other media from fics to movies to games to webcomics, novels, cartoons, and more. In a manner of speaking I have far too many irons in the fire. :twilightblush: Anyways, take all the time you need, I'm looking forward to seeing what you're able to do with more time and no word limit restrictions. :coolphoto:

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