Party of Two-Point-Six

Pinkie Pie has noticed something about Princess Luna that no pony else seems to see, and she wants to do something about it. And what does Pinkie do?

PARTY TIME!

This is a special party, designed just for Princess Luna, meant to cure her of the main problem that Pinkie has seen. Sadness.

The second of three stories I promised to write from my blog contest.

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PacotheTac0

PacotheTac0 #1 · Sep 20th, 2013 · 2 · ·

I liked it, although I wish you didn't end it on an "Earlier" segment. You made me leave the story with a sad.

DuctapeAssassin

DuctapeAssassin #2 · Sep 20th, 2013 · · ·

Oh my god... What, in my opinion, started off as a somber story quickly escalated in a humorous yet raunchy story between Luna and Pinkie Pie. My favorite part was when the context made it sound like the had uh... "relations" but informed us it was a dance contest... But lastly turned out to be something along the lines of sex. I mean, great way to unnerve us, confuse us, then make us all blush! Great little story...
5 / 5 stars

iamli3

iamli3 #3 · Sep 20th, 2013 · · ·

luna looks more worried than relieved in the cover art lol.....

PrincessLunaMoon

PrincessLunaMoon #4 · Sep 20th, 2013 · 1 · ·

I give it 4/5 stars, and the last star shall be kept to myself. It was a wonderful story, but i do wish it hadn't ended on a sad "Earlier" note like it did. you should make a second "Add On" chapter describing the whole LunaxPinkie Pie section in further detail. I mean, if you want to

Neko Majin C

Neko Majin C #5 · Sep 26th, 2013 · 3 · ·

This is the first MoonPie story I ever read. Celestia has never been good at telling when her sister is sad. Hell, the last time Celestia failed to realize Luna was sad, Luna came down with a bad case of the Nightmare Moons. Great story, Nom, here, have a Pinkie ahegao.

SongCoyote

SongCoyote #6 · Oct 22nd, 2013 · · ·

This was just wonderful!

While I do somewhat echo others' comments that ending on a sad note was not what I would have preferred, the story itself is such fun that it is only a minor point.

Luna and Pinkie is not a pairing that my mind would normally leap to, and it's not even necessarily something that would continue (either in this story's canon or my own head)... but the "logic", if such can be applied to Pinkie is sound and not only makes sense but is touching and feels in character.