Nurse Redheart has always wanted to help ponies, and help ponies she has! But when she's assigned to be the "sober companion" for Berry Punch, a mare with whom she has history, things might get a little more complicated than she expected.
Thanks to Flint Sparks for the idea and Auramane for some advice/prereading!
Ruby Berry Daiquiri Pinch
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now I need a mixed drink
Oh, this is going to be soooo god! I have loved Berry Punch all since I read Forecast, and while I still haven't read a single story where I love Berry Punch more than I do in Forecast, this is looking really good!
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Your. Avatar. It precisely made my day!
Interesting. I like the characterizations and contrasts of Redheart and Berry Punch so far. I'd like to see where this story goes.
3945347 Mmm that looks good!
I do happen to like "Berry gets help" stories, so I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
I really like this premise, thought the golden rule of showing vs. telling needs some work. Would've liked to see their relationship and history unfold instead of having it outright explained. But still, I'll be tracking this one.
I'd like to see where you take this
Finally, a new chapter!
I thought you where dead or something!
Lay.
Also, this needs more. (And I will haunt you until it has.)
this is an amazing story about a real world issue, love it.