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Nimnul


Too much nostalgia.

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Minor spoilers for MLP: The Movie

Her plans are foiled, nopony seems to bear a grudge and the Friendship Festival is in full swing. Tempest isn't in a partying mood and keeps to the sidelines, where she encounters an earth pony mare who knows a thing or two about screwing up your own life.

Takes place before Twilight Sparkle talks Tempest into showing off her horn powers through firework.

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I really want a sequel where the corkscrew is constantly brought up creepily apropos of nothing by Berry as a running gag. I have no idea why that was my first thought after finishing this but there you go.

Good stuff. Have a follow.

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Came for Tempest, stayed for Berry. Is she from another story or something? Because you've come up with quite the original character for her.

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Well, my previous Berry Punch story (Drastic Measures) is set somewhere between Tirek's defeat and Starlight Glimmer's redemption, so I kind of extrapolated forward to post-Stormking invasion for this story.

My version of Berry first started taking shape in my meandering Slice of Life/EverQuest crossover mess (Norrath etc) but I wanted to use her in some stories not bogged down by Crossover/semi-HiE stuff, so Drastic Measures and this are the results so far.

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I will check that out!

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Oh, I'm also glad you enjoyed my story, and my narrative being weaker than my dialogue, as you mentioned in your blog, is something I've long suspected/assumed.

Still, forgiveness is a real rookie mistake and really separates the scrubs from the pros. Never forgive, and never forget."
"Mom!"

Now that would be a fun 'friendship lesson' to send to Celestia, wouldn't it? :trollestia:

I was told nopony is as normal as they pretend to be. That really helped!

That one would have to be written be either Pinkie or Discord. :pinkiecrazy:
...And now that I'm thinking about it... where WAS Discord during the movie? :rainbowhuh:

"Well, alright. Nopony wants to be measured by the dumbest thing they did, I guess."

Truly, this little one-shot is full of pearls of wisdom. :derpytongue2:

Nice work, well done.

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Thanks, had a lot of fun with this, was kind of trying to extrapolate Berry and Pinchy to a point where they'd sorted through Berry's baggage, personality-wise.

This was a pretty nice character piece, veering into the unexpected and painting a splendid portrait of Berry Punch.

I should check out your other story.

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