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TheKing2001


Only by studying the past can we win the present.

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This story is a sequel to Civil War


When her mom suggests a family only trip, Sunset and her sisters are on board. The nine family members learn a lot about each other and conquer their own individual fears in the process.

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“You’ll have to tell me more about it when you get back,” Derpy said and I nodded. It was the second day of October. Lyra and Bon Bon were expected back a week before Halloween so we could get the group together plus my family. “By the way, my answer is yes.”

Yes to what?

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May I point your attention to what was discussed a couple of stories back that comment about getting drunk and going to las Pegasus getting married? I got a feeling the answer was yes to that

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You and me both my friend you and me both

Do I have permission to make a sex story between Derpy and Sunset? I really like this pairing.

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Sure I guess. I'll have to read it first before I consider making it canon. As long as it's not a rape or foalcon story.

“Thank the lord,” Ruby yawned as we left the bathrooms and I examined the map on the wall.

I smirked as I had a idea. But first, I had to get the rest of the girls opinions.

Would a kid Ruby's age really say that?

Also, am curious to this idea, lol.

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I mean she is eight lol. By the time I was nine, I already knew what sex was because of school and was cussing

Supporting theory about sunset and derpy

Not surprising really, I mean seriously. Would you like somebody poking around in your head?

Am I sensing a CHS world take on Sleepless in Ponyville?

I REALLY like this, I just feel like Scoots would be more willing to share her fears after everything she has gone thru in this universe.

Yeah something's definitely up here with scootaloo

I got comfortable in the sleeping bag as I realized I still had to pee.

A perfect comedic ending after the drama of the chapter, lol.

I’m liking the story so far, also do you take story requests?

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Yeah as long as they aren't foalcon, rape, etc

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Okay, well basically it’s a what if story about applejack becoming the opposite of who she is, either applejack staying with her aunt and uncle orange and growing up to be an orange instead of an apple or by being corrupted by someone like filthy rich or her own aunt and uncle into some spoiled money and fashion obsessed brat. Or something like that, but that’s just a few ideas in the end you can do whatever you want with it

Well, I suppose there's one way of telling the headless horseman of sleepy hollow's story in a lot more child friendly way

I understandable for scootaloo to hate the woods but but a very funny way to end the chapter

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I'll fit it in somewhere in my schedule

“Hey Mom?”

“Yeah?”

“You’re not actually doing a small party for Sunset, are you?” I asked as Mom gave me a large grin.

“Oh of course not.”

Good, after how much she has changed, Sunset deserves a huge party!

Oh boy I just hope they don't go overboard and overwhelm the girl

I think I see where this story ends and oh is it going to be sweet

This chapter was funny, adorable, wholesome, and just YES!

LOVED IT

ANother wholesome chapter!

This whole story is basically just a wholesome trip, and I LOVE it so much!

Oh the bane of every adult and every teen's existence the dreaded talk

“Alright class,” Principal Celestia said and I looked over. Right when I was going to start working too. “Since this is health class, who here has had sexual intercouse?”

That was blunt... LOL

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Yeah this story is meant to be much more lighter than the other ones in the universe have been

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That is fine, I just find this funny.

Oh, question, we know when Sunset's is, but when is Ruby's birthdah?

Like figure out which flowers worked best with Sunset and her cousin. Maybe get the Movie Club involved.

Maybe snapdragons. I'm not really big on choreography but depending on your look on things, some people believe it means deception and deviousness. But also on the positive aspect it means power and strength. Also, it's supposed to ward off dark magic if you want to get into this supernatural aspect

“Which lasted about two weeks till he got arrested for dating you, remember dearie?” Sunny Flare asked casually. “It will come to you, don’t worry.”

Wait, what?

Applejack reached into her backpack and slid a cd across the table with a card. Sunset picked it up and examined it curiously.

“It’s for her from all of us,” Applejack explained. “It has us doing covers of various Thomas songs. Skip track five though.”

“Why?”

Really Dash?

I hope Sunset can remove the song off the disk or something.

I probably don't even want to know what rainbow Dash did, with track 5

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The only thing I can think of is a VERY poor George Carlin impression, saying some of his bits and modifying them to better fit Thomas

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It's actually a prank. Rainbow didn't do that. Youll see

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Oh, I see, hmm, interesting

Blueberry and Tennis huh?

I like them, they seem nice.

(If my mind is blanking and we have seen one or both of them before, sorry.)

“That felt good, didn’t it?” Tennis Match asked as we both smiled.

“Yeah, yeah it did.”

Also, this does not surprise me.

In my opinion, it always feels nice to do something kind for someone.

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Tennis Match is the girl Applejack saved from falling in the hole during the friendship games

Oh man that was heartfelt

I gulped nervously as Lyra nodded. The look in Sunset’s eyes made me slightly uncomfortable. And I don’t get uncomfortable.

I got a feeling this should be a fun conversation. Pity no one can read sarcasm

Did Cherry Berry suddenly forget about Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon being her nieces as well?

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