• Member Since 9th Dec, 2013
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I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP


I need to have a suit for tomorrow, since it is Halloween. Only I haven't anything yet, not as much as an idea, and the feelings creeped me out.

Then a friend told me she had a spare suit I could use, for this big event. She was to present it, later in the night. I just had to wear it overnight, she had told me, and I promised to.

Now, this was a bad move, since this isn't just a suit, and Halloween isn't just a Holliday, if you know what I mean?

The coming day, I woke up, but it isn't me, it is the character I had been given for the day, or it is what she told me, but?

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I'm kinda iffy on keeping this in EH.

Do you have spell check on your browser? You have a lot of spelling errors (I know Firefox spell check.)

3835776 EH?
I'm working on the spelling, and edit as I go, but in the original file.
I have 'Spell Check', but it is constantly missing a few words.

I'll be requesting an editor on a group soon. it takes time.

I hope the story still is enjoyable.

Equestrianize Humans.

It could be enjoyable. I'm actually a bad speller, and I keep on my guard whenever I have to write stuff, so it can be a bit of a nuisance whenever I find one (I'm still haunted by the misspell I made for a video; sadly, I can't correct it.:twilightblush:)

3835936 hmm, as in HiE?
the two characters started out as humans, yes.
Now, since it was Halloween, and the costume apparently was more sophisticated then she could have realised, she ended up a version of Flutter Shy, as Bat.
Just that none seems to notice.
I hope it will be as enjoyable as she intend to make it.

there is always the chance/risk of a few confusions and misunderstanding in stories like this.

Good thing this isn't a vidio, but a story. Now I can continue correcting spelling untill I feel I have the story finished.

No, no, no, no, no. Equestrianize Humans is my group which focuses on humanized ponies, but still have their unique features (wings, magic, ect). I try to stay about at least 70% human which might be something like this.
The hooves in the story seem a little bit much and I'm confused on the character walking pattern (biped or quadruped).

3836105 that's the reverse of what this story is about. with me, it is more likely I turned the human into a pony, then a pony into a human.
I guss there are ideals, on which level you take/leave from the respective sides? All depenidng on what your goals would be?
In this story, they're fully quadruped, which is why she wear the Saddle Bag, (may have ben explained later)
I commonly grant them hooves for feet, even if I choose to allow them to have hands, when it had a purpose in the story.
I commonly try to keep all the 'Atributes' such as wings/horns, with the effect s that came with them.

I'm in a few groups on this line of concepts, on various changes or level of Poni/Human.

You should type with both hands.

3846291 I'm confused, what is it you're trying to say?

3846291 that or at least have someone edit it my typing gets like this when i type to fast for my computer to keep up

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