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Ponyess


I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP

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A choice comes with consequences, and a tiny miscalculation is exacting the price. Once the scene play out, there is no changing your mind.

Why Chrysalis had chosen this white mare at the specific time, but when a certain Dragon sets his eyes on her, it is too late to change your mind.

Feeling the love emanating from the Dragon known as Spike sets off a chain of events, not calculated; but with consequences, just the same. Crysalis tries to ride the Bull, the best she can, answering his call.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 18 )

is this a story about chrysalis being rarity

6697671 At the moment, she was in Rarity's guise.
Once she faced Spike, she found herself stuck as her; so I guess that would sum it all up, yes.

Well this looks interesting. More, Chrysalis X Spike, is always a good thing. Keeping an eye on this.:moustache:

6698201 Both characters certainly do deserve more love than they have been given up to date.
I have planned for more, and am already working on the next chapter.
Just have a few ideas I need to work out, before I can complete the chapter as it is.
6697789 Hopeit does make sense, but it is fun to work with this situation for her.

Huh, I don't think I've read a story from Chrysalis' POV.

6698335 I have a few stories with her POV, and it is the second in a series of stories with her POV as focus as well.

I´m not a huge fan of Spike, but Chrysalis is my favourite Villain, and so far I like this story.

6703952 Spike has never been played in a light where he is given all that much.

Chrysalis is interesting to play, based on the little light she was initially give, even if we had a new and fresh glimpse of her at the end of the season.
I have the impression that Chrysalis is playing to win, and for keeps; even when she has a weak hoof.
Thankfully, either she herself, or her Chengelings has been featured on and off, mainly in season Five. Including the one invited at the wedding in Ponyville. One actually did turn up on the invitation, too. Do I sense a new Irony in the face of the Changelings and their relation with the Ponies here?

With a mare in the bed, it is actually she who is going to have the aches in her tummy, not I. On that note, I just hope she is not giving birth to a monstrosity, but that is still for tomorrow. This is still how I am reacting, even after my previous bout with my future self.

I accepted the idea that he is more mature, than he looks like, but it is a reaction I can´t stop, t is just weird to image him that mature.

6724435 First off, she is intoxicated, and thus not exactly in her prime; while deling whit what is before her.
He, on the other hoof; is just trying to accept what he is offered, even when it is what he was hoping for all along. Aside from having Rarity, Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie as his mentor on the way.
Finally, there is the small detail as to how we all deal with things, both emotionally and physically. He still is the same Dragon, and would be better equipped to handle emotions that one who needs to harvest them, merely to survive?

They will both get something good out of this. :pinkiehappy:

cool kip up the good werk I enjoy this story

:twilightoops: Spikey STOP! that's not Rarity!
:moustache: Sure it is
:raritystarry: No Spikey poo you're banging a bug!
:pinkiegasp: A Roach!
:applejackconfused: A June bug
:fluttercry: A lady bug
:derpytongue2: you don't know what went wrong!
:rainbowlaugh: the last batch of baby bugs looked like Shining Armor!:facehoof:

Man I love the idea, but...

… woe is me who can't find chrysalis x spike fics that last :fluttercry:

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Sorry about the delay, I should have published this earlier; much earlier.

I did not know this ship was a thing, but when I had an idea, I started wrighting the story you now have before you.

Now I can only hope you will enjoy the story and stick with me here. There should be more to this, but at least I could publish something, without unreasonable delay; once you reminded me of the story.

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