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Oh no you don't get the first comment! This is MY story!
um... please tell me what you think...if that is... if you want to...
Second!
I thought it would have a sex scene, but it's still good.
Short story, not really much. I kind of wanted more
Also it's "of course" not "of corse" or "ofcorse"
Weird prank...
I hope it doesnt get too strange
needs a proofread
I think it's interesting, and we need more parts to see how badly this can all go!
funny very funny. but u are writing more right. dont want to track if thats it.
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
That was harsh man well still pretty good wonder what happens next.
Might wanna do some proofreading before posting.
I find this to be a funny story, so i will keep an eye out for where this goes. Keep it up ^^.
...No comment.
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Huh, okay. Might as well see what happens next.
THUD!
Great sound effect!
*German mad scientist voice* Interezting... veeery interezting...
I find the use of first-person from Rainbow Dash's point of view somewhat odd, and it also seems unlikely that RD and PP would pull such a serious prank on Spike.
Interesting story though. Looking forward to the next part.
* Tracks *
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Many lols were had
Thankyou all for the wonderful comments, there will be more.
and yes, there will be a sex scene
Thank you all!
Why?
Uh...
What did Twilight ever do to you.
Do you think before you type or do you just rip a hole in your chest and let the locusts fly randomly into the keyboard?
.....Well spike went batshit. Yay.
.............k then
im a little dumbfounded by this. it a little unforgiving compared to how lighthearted the first chapter was. while this isnt my cup of tea, there has to be somepony who likes it. i guess my only compliment is that you have some literary skills and the story was well written, but maybe try writing something not as perverse.
Ill admit I've seen the best and worst of the internet. The weird and the normal, and I can't make a lick of sense from this
Hey guys, I am really sorry that this chapter wasn't as good, but don't worry. It will all be explained and everything will start to make so much freakin sense that you will want to read on!
Lol.
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The scary part is that I can't stop reading
Interesting, how will A.J deal with Spike.
341761 ikr!?... LOL "hold your humans"
Um....
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Spike suddenly raping Twilight out of nowhere is strange enough, but what's even stranger is... WHY IN EQUESTRIA WOULD HE PUT ON A CONDOM WHILE DOING SO!?
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However cheesy the plot may be, this is utterly hillarious.
* Pictures Spikezilla stomping around town equipped with Pinkie's BDSM gear *
First! I like the story
it's very good!!
....Somehow I expected the Granny Smith thing...Whatever. Still cloptastic.
May be he has to rape Rainbow Dash to stop this :D
I am so confused
Good chapter.
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>It's even funnier when you find out that this guy's completely serious.
What makes you think that?
This really doesn't seem to be intended to be taken seriously.
Personally, I prefer it that way.
Because, let's face it, however boner-inducingly sexy it may be, the idea of cute candy-colored cartoon ponies engaging in all sorts of (delightfully) depraved acts of sex and violence is pretty damn hillarious in itself.
1st for this chapter ;)
Please add RD Spike rape
"He mouth was filled with cum" -
"He mouth could only pronounce the word" -
Does the day that disables unicorn power also cause dragons to go nutso-rape-lord-maniacal?
"Spike wondered through Luna’s dark night" - What was he wondering about?
"and started lciking faster" -
"Ofcorse, I never knew" -
"“Ofcorse” Rarity happily cheered." -
"“MY toy box!” pinkie Pie growled" -
Okay, I'm bored of posting correction thingies.
Keep it coming this is too damn funny XD
Rarity's 'HANDS'?
Also, I thought Scoots was the chicken
Funny! :D
Nice, very nice. I could catch up with the story and just give my full comment there, but I think you'd prefer a comment for each chapter, like it's meant to be.
Anyway, very nice, this actually makes a lot of sense, and I can see Rainbow and Pinkie Pie doing this. I wonder how it will affect Spike? I must read onward to find out.
Seriously guys! You are sick minded.... I like the story.... 5 Stars...... But God! Sick, Sick, Sick
Nice chapter, but:
"It was not long since Rainbow Dash and Rarity started touching pussies and Cumming together with lots of moans of pleasure coming from them." - That has got to be the most anti-climactic ending to a sex scene ever.... I mean, really. It started of fairly decently, and then that...
Anyway, great work! Keep it up!
"Remember the times we would secretly meat" - Did you mean meet?
"Do you want to torcher me some more?" - Did you mean torture?
"Can we please come back her again sometime?" - Did you mean here?