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Bad End Twilight

Twilight goes off to investigate the stories behind murder in Ponyville. (This is a story based on Vocaloid's Bad End Night, BTW... and has a surprise ending... enjoy!

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MasterT231

MasterT231 #1 · Jul 23rd, 2012 · · ·

Not bad, a few spelling mistakes here and there but not bad for a slash fic
And I did not see that twist coming but I thought you could went into more detail about the clocks, or how the ponies behaved on the days leading up to the murders, you know a bit more characterization,but other then that great fic

epicdonus1123 BOT

epicdonus1123 BOT #2 · Jul 23rd, 2012 · · ·

I skipped the whole story just to see the ending. For realz...it didn't have to end like that Anyways, great fic for one that I didn't read.

Pale Storm

Pale Storm #3 · Jul 23rd, 2012 · · ·

……………… WHAAAAAAAAAAATTTT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

Periapsis

Periapsis #4 · Jul 23rd, 2012 · · ·

I was really expecting everyone thinking Twilight as the murder, and she was sentenced to death or a crazy house. Or she found out none of that really happened and she was the real murderer. The ending really caught me off guard.

SweetieStar

SweetieStar #5 · Jul 23rd, 2012 · · ·

956922 heh, well I had the same Ideas, but because I couldn't decide which one to pick, I just did a random ending Oh well, what's done, is done and I'm happy I got you interested