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Inspired by Rainbow Factory and Rocket to Insanity.

Scootaloo gets nightmares about the Rainbow Factory. She does not believe them until things start coming to life..

(Sequel; Brainwashed)

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 14 )

(coments deleted by accident) Sorry about the coments everypony, I deleted them all, but I didn't mean to... well... I had a comment which said that Rainbow Dash has no story/explaniation to her actions. Well, I thought that the rainbow factory fic has explained it all. If you'd like I can creat another version of Dash's story in another chapter. :heart:

wait so scootaloo just joins her like that......... well she killed my coltfriend and wanted to dis-embowel me but i think ill work with her now

130085 well... she had no other choice, she didn't want to die, did she?

awesome keep it coming

People without choice tend to panic... Not sign up with their butchers.

It could`ve been spun better with a dash of Stockholm syndrome, maybe.

132133 yeah... well just go on with the story dude, I think that everypony would have a different reaction, Scootaloo has mine :scootangel:

I figured those letters would come back to bite Scootaloo in the flank.

This should be interesting, I wonder if Rainbow will notice Scootaloo's change.

^ same, keep it coming. wait is it over?

138591 eh.. yeah but I will be writing a sequel :pinkiehappy:

You my friend are a saviour of my Psyche. :D Dashie is my fave pony and Rainbow Factory nearly ruined her for me. Thank you so much for writing this wonderful piece of FanFic. Youve reinstated this Bronies faith in his Dashie. :3

130094

with Orion dead my mind is 50-50 of those choices. But I'd rather have her alive then brutally murdered or I'd get crazy and make Rainbow Dash suffer like Scootaloo.

:pinkiegasp: Story idea :pinkiehappy:

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GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!! THOSE BASTARDS! :flutterrage:

Nice story by the way.

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