• Member Since 9th Feb, 2012
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The Young and Free Dragon


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I wonder which one he is either lust or gluttony

Quite chilling and well done. I look forward for what you're gonna do with this :pinkiehappy:

The new cupcakes? or something close to it?:derpyderp2::moustache:

Hmm, good job, continue this little game of Spike the killer. Though, you should've had the picture with him in a cape when he looked evil on the episode where the Owliscious comes.:twilightsmile:

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I might add that one actually, but the point of the story is that Spike isn't really evil per se, he's just gone nuts, and the other ponies have gotten themselves placed in clutches, as Rainbow Dash has here.

Overall this is a good story,however there is a typo that I noticed. She left her legs going weak. She fell to her knees and felt tears rolling down her cheeks. Everything else is good I like the idea. Keep up the great work.

It's so gory, it's ... beautiful.

FUCK, Spike is so dark hearted and I love the Saw movies. But what does this have to do with the sins? Anyway, maybe you could give a bit of a prequal of how this all happened, I mean, while I enjoy it I wish to know why Spike is so cruel, heartless and awesome! (I'm a very sick, dark hearted person if you have not known by now) I'm hoping to see more of this, hell maybe you could even put a bit of Spike/Twilight roamce in there before he went all Jigsaw on everyone. You have my support good sir or ma'am. Until next time. :applejackunsure:

Nooooo!! Rainbow dash noooo!!! Who is goin to run the rainbow factory!!:pinkiesad2:

This is pretty much cancelled huh?

If you're planning on doing another chapter I'd like to give you a torture for the next victim....rip of the skin

Keep up the good work

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KillERRKAI

Good gore, but I want a back story.

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