• Member Since 17th Oct, 2011
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Mazzyrazzy


Don't be a stranger now. I won't bite.

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Twilight Sparkle is whisked away to the utopian city of Canterlot, where she has been invited to participate in the legendary Aura Bloom magic competition. While there, she runs into an old nemesis.

Chapters (6)
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Very nicely done, although the pacing was a little fast. Sometimes love does take you like that a whisk you off on a grand adventure. I look forward to reading anything else you publish. :twilightsmile:

There is never enough TwiLuna stuff and this is a good one.

Twilight, y u so oblivious? :facehoof:

I normally am kinda lukewarm towards shipping... so I keep telling myself but this was super sweet and well done and it really had me rooting for the girls!

PS Yay :yay: happy endings and such beautiful imagery in it as well

Enjoyed it, though I did feel the relationship moved a bit fast. :twilightsmile:

14197 Thanks for reading. :)

It was a bit tricky to have them go from enemies to lovers in a week. I tried my best to make it seem like not a "love at first sight" story and give it some logical process.

Alright, I haven't read this chapter yet, but I am physically having to force myself to bed because it is 4am simply because I could not stop reading! :fluttercry:

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That's a good sign though. It'll be here tomorrow for you!

Pacing was a bit fast and the love story was very very sappy but I liked it on the whole.

Bravo! There really aren't enough straight-up romance stories lately. Well done fixing that. :3

Right, well I finally managed to read the last chapter, and frankly, I am extremely impressed, we need more romances like this. Overall, this is now tied with Soaring Hearts as my favourite fanfic :pinkiehappy:

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I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it so much!

You have captured.... TEH MAGICKS! :coolphoto: :heart:

Tee Hee

Its cute..

Like.. Wuna Cute

Its been such a read with this reminding me of those TV dramas my sister watches. Not in a bad way of course and yet has that MLPFIM feel to it. What I am trying to say, it is a beautiful read! :twilightsmile::heart:

:pinkiegasp: Holy jeez! So, Nick, best TwiLuna shipping story ever? Yes, Nick, I belive it is. Please give us mooooooooooooooooar!!!!!!!!! :heart::heart::heart: :rainbowkiss:

17952 I'm glad you enjoyed it!

this fic was just one long cheesy sunday night romance flick. i love those.:twilightsmile:

My only criticism is that some of it was hard to read... DUE TO ALL THE TEARS IN MY EYES! This is one of the best fics I have ever read, it was amazing. PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES PLEASEEE :heart:

Can never be enough Luna and Twilight.

sniff, so true.
Twilight x Luna forever.

Great story. Simply Romantic.

the premise for the story is wonderful, therefor it is such a shame that it's full of grammatical and spelling errors :fluttercry:

try and work on that if you can, i would love reading more stories like this (not too short and believable)

keep it up:twilightsmile:

I've read through this story a bunch of times already and it's still fun to come back and read it again. Even with Luna's proper personality having been revealed in the show, this is still my favorite Twilight x Luna story ever. It's amazing.

The only real complaint I have, aside from some grammar errors, is that, except for a brief mention in the last chapter, Spike seems to disappear after Pinkie Pie and the other girls show up at the library to see Twilight off. I can understand why he might not be around when Luna arrives in Ponyville, but after the fuss he put up about Twilight going to Canterlot without him, it was kind of surprising that he didn't get some kind of mention when the rest of the girls arrived in Canterlot. It's not even implied that he came with them. I realize that it's a minor complaint overall, but it's just something I noticed.

Other than that, I really love this story. You're an amazing author.

That "Wait a minute" at the end of chapter 2 was priceless :yay:

You just gained a new follower :pinkiehappy:

46772 welcome to the fold. :P

#29 · Dec 2nd, 2011 · · · Chapter 3 ·

wow. ... ... . . . yep, thats it

wow, the story was sooooooo good that I actually read everyponies comments about the story! That's a new on for me! Congrates on your success and to many more!

i read this as i play assassin's creed runnin' round like a ninja and throwin' knives past 2 building and stabin' some archer in the throat or jumpin' of a roof landing on someone gettin' back surronded by like 12 dudes armed with swords as i murderize all of them and then LOL as the last guy cowers run and i go after him tacklin' EVERYONE in my path, just to stab and kill him then hide for a minute and go about my day, and ya know why? 'cus the better the story the better i play, that being said this is one of the greatest mlp fanfics i've ever had the pleasure of read AND I HAVEN'T EVEN MADE A DENT IN IT!

#32 · Dec 5th, 2011 · · · Chapter 3 ·

that. was. perfect.

#33 · Dec 5th, 2011 · · · Chapter 4 ·

yay love always wins :heart:

*stands up*
*clap...clap...clap*
*clap--clap--clap--clap*
*clap clap clap clap clap clap clap*
:pinkiehappy::scootangel::eeyup::moustache::twilightsheepish:
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YAYZ I love this.:pinkiehappy:

I cried. This story was one of the most beautiful stories ive ever read. The moment celestia said that sometimes you have to forget logic and reason, and listen to your heart because you know it cant lie to you. I felt the tears started to come down my cheeks :D :fluttercry:

:twilightsmile: <-- THIS FACE.

I adore this story; I'm sure I've read it almost a dozen times already!

Not sure why, if Ponyville is only 30 minutes away by air, Luna couldn't just commute to Canterlot by chariot every day but still! Perhaps she will!

I must say this is the best Twiluna fanfic I've ever read. It's beautiful how they express their own feelings to each other, and to Celestia. It's just wonderful. Congrats Mazzyrazzy, you should be proud of yourself. :twilightsmile::heart:

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Thank you, I will admit that I'm pretty shocked at the amount of praise it has gotten. Proud yet shocked.

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Which means you know the story probably better than I do. :derpytongue2: :twilightblush: I think it would less about how far they'd be, and more about how they wouldn't truly be together.

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Yep, they wouldn't be trully together, even if Ponyville is 30min away from Canterlot.

OOOH THIS IS BAD. HEAVY IS SAD.

sorry, it won't let me rate this 12-star :pinkiesad2:

Lol "books on't say anything about this!!!" :twilightangry2:
:twilightsmile: "Princess Celestia, why does my heart beat faster around your sister?"
:trollestia: "Why don't you both get drunk and find out?"

oh no... here it comes... i can't sto- D'AAAAWWWWWW!!!!!! :yay::yay::yay:

Has been and always will be my favorite fiction here.

I should be ashamed of myself, this is the 3rd time I read your whole story and I had yet to leave a comment.
Thank you kindly for this wonderful story bro ^__^ manly tears were shed when I first saw the story had come to an end.

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