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Corah Il Cappo


A gibbering mound of horseflesh who has learned to hate.

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What do you do when the world moves on, but leaves you behind?

Roseluck asks herself the same question when the world industrializes, burying her nature beneath a web of stone and iron.

If anyone can find cover art for this, I'd be very pleased.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

We raped the earth

Good way to start reading a story... nope!

Such a powerful story in just 1,000 words!

Very nice! Very thought provoking, and an intriguing idea. Couple of odd phrasings, but for 1000 words? Amazing.

I simply just cant wait for the next chapter.

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So sad and beautiful :applecry:

This deserves way more attention than it has.

4333672

I'm glad you think so friend.

Sigh, progress.

This evoked an emotion from me, going on my fav list.

I agree, It should be more popular.

6022802

Its ironic. This is the fic I really put my heart and soul into writing, yet I think its my least popular. Ah well.

6022828

C'est la vie, my friend. Same as this story, which might also explain the less than warm reception. Some peeps want their pony fics to contain less of reality. This prolly hits a few too close to home.

But, like I said, it made me feel. I think, in my crazy philosophy at any rate, that evoking feeling is the true purpose of art. That makes this story quite exceptional in my mind.

Roseluck makes for a strangely good melancholy character. I rather liked this. These kinds of pieces are often overlooked but really well-crafted. Thank you for sharing.

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I'm not sure what it is about her that makes her suited to this sort of thing.

Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad to see this story still gets the occasional view.

It's always a treat to read a story that paints such vivid images. Bonus points considering how short this story was. Roseluck is often portrayed as either a love interest or a whacky conspiracy theorist/professional rabble rouser. It was also nice to have something different.

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