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Corah Il Cappo


A gibbering mound of horseflesh who has learned to hate.

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A Spin-Off of Living the Dream by Kickass222urmom. Thanks again for your blessing in creating this mess.

A big thank you to Princeling for the cover art.

The Gryphon Kingdom of Kleinkrieg is preparing for war. Prince Blueblood is determined to prevent it. Unfortunately, doing so requires him to work with the local population of Bronies who have cropped up in Equestria. Out of options and running out of time, Blueblood must find common ground with these outsiders and journey to the heart of enemy territory to stop the war before it starts.

Things don't go as planned.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 12 )

Blueblood’s horn glowed as he used his magic to roll up his sleeves. The pockets of his coat jingled as a flurry of sparkling shards emerged from within. Twenty fragments of meteoric platinum hung quivering in the air around him. “Fine. Let me put this in a way you’ll understand.”

Great to see a Blueblood that can fight, most stories, even the one portray him as good always let him be a coward and hide from fight

The words, “I miss you” lingered unsaid on his lips.

Interesting.

“It's no trouble. This isn’t the first time I’ve been punched in the face by a subject. It’s why I never leave home without a bit of makeup to cover up any bruises.” Blueblood followed Greg down the stairs and the others shadowed him. “Your chambers are in this room to the right, if you want to settle in. The galley is right here, and dinner will be served in about an hour and a half.”

no wonder why he's so good at fighting

First time reading this and the Brony is such a manchild

It's understandable to be annoyed that a stranger is in your bedroom but to purposely ignore the news of war coming?

Tbh with Blueblood's title as Prince
How many gold diggers have he met?

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You'd have to be if you were in his very expensive shoes.

“That’s what scares me. No one seems to know. Black rumors are circulating about him. They say that he was a dead man drawn back to life by an unfinished battle. A fatal revenant here for one purpose.”

I really hope this is who I think it is. That would be so fucking funny.

I'm liking the story so far. I'm invested in this.

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I can neither confirm nor deny that it is who you think it is. But trust your gut on this one.

Incredibly proud that my work has reached the preeminent Living the Dream scholar of our age. Thank you so much for the kind words. :heart:

“Richard.” Frederic snarled through his teeth. “How?! I banished you to the core of the earth!”

Yes! I knew it! Richard fans keep winning.

“After years locked in a box beneath the earth, something reached out to me. Something ancient, primal, and fucking angry. It had been defeated once, back when the universe was water and firmament, and it hated. Oh, it hated. It was a kindred spirit to me. Whispered in my ear through the silence of my prison. Made me an offer I couldn’t refuse.”

Ah okay that clears some things up for me. I was wondering when this happened in the timeline. Guess the events of Nightmare Night either happened differently or didn't happen at all.

I don't know how far into the OG LTD you are, but it's fun seeing how this differs to the mainline story.

“Raging Breaking Dawn!” Lance screamed his name and countless voices bellowed from within his throat. He surged forth like a bullet, striking Richard with a punch so hard it threw him from his feet. Quick as wildfire, Lance looped back and dove on the Gryphon again, pummelling him with a furious barrage of blows.

Speaking of, I guess Lance isn't an angel in this universe. God must've not liked this one as much.

“My name isn’t Peter, bitch!” He snapped, spattering Blueblood’s cheeks with spittle. “I’m Violent Inferno now.”

“You don’t look any different to me.” The prince shrugged. Thankfully, Peter’s rage had been turned on Richard, and he jetted off into the fight.

I'm glad someone called him out. The canon appearance of Violent Inferno does not live up to the name.

Peter was frozen solid on the side of a road, the tarry stink of asphalt, burnt rubber, and motor oil miasmatic in the air around him. The flicker flash of police and ambulance lights nearly blinded him but couldn’t erase the yellow streak in the highway that painted him with cowardice. He didn’t need to be told that his friend wouldn’t make it.

This story has some deepcuts. I like the references that play out here, like I was not expecting Lance's war book to come back.
(TBH I'm half surprised that Peter's nightmare wasn't his guitar breaking.)

Blueblood's eyes bulged and his tongue protruded as he convulsed. His mind screamed with one alarming thought.

They were going to die here

What a classic LTD fight. The bronies and friends get whooped by the current strong guy. Feels like home.

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It's funny you mention it. I actually reached the Nightmare Night arc of LTD as I was writing this. I considered trying to update everything to add in Lance's angelic form and powers, but eventually settled on leaving things as is just for the simplicity.

Richard will always be my favorite LTD villain. You've gotta be one hell of a dedicated hater to follow your son into another life to kill him again. I respect his grind.

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Bit risky to write for a story you haven't finished, but still a fun story in the end. I've accepted this as a full on AU.

Richard did nothing wrong.

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Sometimes you've just got a dream and need to write it, even if there's approximately 200 or so chapters you've gotta get to first.

An AU is about what I feel I was aiming for. I definitely drew a lot on my own personal Equestria lore for this story. I still wanted to capture the vibes of Living the Dream as best I could, and try to nail how the characters act. I can only hope that now that it's finished I wrote them all well. :heart:

Twilight had just dropped Spark and Faun-

Don't want to sound like a nitpick, but it's spelled Fawn. Though knowing her adoptive parents I wouldn't be surprised that they would forget how to spell it.

Twilight burst into a snowy forest of aromatic spruce and pine with a blinding corona. She wasted no time, clobbering a gryphon with a punch so forceful she threw him back through a dozen trees. Her horn burned like a newborn star as she stood in the clearing, catching her breath.

This edition of Twilight is much more competent than her housewife counterpart, and much more physical. She doesn't know the story she's in. Women don't get story relevance until part 3.

Rolling to a stop against a snowbank, Richard panted for breath. His body shrieked with pain. Blood loss made his head feel woozy. The power that sustained him was trying to repair the damage, but it was too much. His one eye fluttered as he stared up at Twilight, who leveled her blade inches from his throat. Blueblood and the bronies hobbled their way over, standing beside her and glaring at Richard with haggard faces.

I like how this implies that she could've solved every past conflict without issue, but chose not to for whatever reason.

Taking powerscaling into account, she is stronger than Luna. Cause Luna got oneshot by a weaker Richard, yet Twilight is obliterating him here, even if he's battle damaged. Yeah no wonder Kickass nerfed magic so hard...

...Not like powerscaling made any sense in LTD anyways.

“After all he’s done, after all the times he’s hurt me and the people I love, he’d deserve it.” Frederic broke his makeshift spear and dropped both halves in the snow. “But I think what he wanted in the end was for me to kill him. He always thought I was weak, some sort of coward for not being the man he wanted me to be. If I kill him, if I cross that line, I’d just be following in his footsteps.”

Frederic knelt beside his father, running a hoof across his feathers. “I won’t become him. I’m not that kind of man.””

Freddy, that went horribly last time. Not every villain will turn out like Cody.

Also, fuck you Fred.

Lance extended a hoof. “Brohoof on it?”

Blueblood sighed and gently tapped his hoof. “Brohoof.”

And that's that. It's a nice short story to add to the LTD mythos. I enjoyed my time reading this one, and from what I can tell Kickass is too.

The characters were pretty spot on, excluding Twilight of course. Felt like just another day in the life of Lance.

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