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Don't spend your whole youth saving up for your old age, instead spend your youth doing what you want. Deal with the rest later. You'll be forgotten in 100 years, so might as well enjoy life now.


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If some one really wants me to continue this, give a full detailed reason why.

I do :3 this story was good

Thanks XD I'll think about finishing it XD After my other one is done.

I do it was interesting and I would love to see more

i like it. i think it would be interesting. finish your other story first, but i am interested on how people would react to being put into equestria.
nice opening. i like the rapture play.

Thanks, I like the idea of the rapture also. Its a new way to start a story of this kind.

I am going to continue this story soon, check it in a few days

Only recommendation: Show emotion

Yea, I know. I read through it and noticed, I'll show emotion in chapter 3

awsome so far...keep up the good work.:pinkiesmile:

KEEP WRITING THIS!!!!!! even though your grammar isnt the best, im loving it. and that takes a lot for me, specially in the face of imperfect grammar. please keep writing!!:applecry:

I'll keep writing and sorry about the grammar. I'll fix it later.

AWSOME STORY !:pinkiehappy:

Thank you. I made a cover picture for the story.

Also, how am I doing with this story?

Dash, I'm disappointed in you... :rainbowderp:

Haha, I like the story, I'm horrible with reviews but I think its good, a tad bit fast but whatever. Great story so far.

OH NO SHE DIDN'T!:rainbowhuh:

lol you took the title Ciroton planed on using for his next fic after he finishes for want of a dawn. I think his work is only on deviantART though.

42743 I think you're doing pretty good with this story, I think Dash is simply HILARIOUS XD. Can't wait to see how this turns out, keep up the good work! :D

hahahaha still lovin it dude :pinkiecrazy:

I bet no one expected that to happen :rainbowwild:

Damn you cliffhangers!!!! :fluttercry: D: Awesome chapter though :D

Wow dude that sucks he barely got there and he is already dieing again :facehoof:

one of the best oc pony human in equestria stroys i have read the only one that i can think of right now that is better is "through the eyes of another pony"

Wait dash is a rapist ... When I die I'm not going to this universe/dimension :derpytongue2:

EMOTION there is many:heart::heart::heart::heart:

all i have going through my head now is a bloodhound song witch is related to sexual activity

giggity :twilightsheepish:

Please dont tell me this was the end

Don't worry, this isn't even close to the end. :twilightsmile:

i want this to happen to me if the world ends in 2012

I know right? It would be awesome.

Also, here comes chapter 6!

i wonder what celestias reaction will be when she read lance's mind wjen he is thinking about molestia:pinkiegasp:

I like that idea, I may use it :trollestia:
It may turn out good, but I won't be able to add it for a while. :twilightsmile:

Huh :rainbowhuh: great fic so far but to be honest your username put me off a bit :derpytongue2:. He is one lucky pony/man, but why was he the only one to go to equestria? not to be picky just kinda wondering. i know i would :rainbowkiss:!

46362 also, could be kinda interesting for him to meet another human/pony thing, though you probably already thought of that :twilightsheepish:

So far this story is pretty interesting. On to the next chapter!

U JELLY rainbow :twilightsmile:

There's others, in fact, there was two human ponies in the chapter 6. :rainbowwild:
can you guess who they are.

dude im lovin your story. there's a few subject/verb agreement issues, but aside from that its great. :pinkiecrazy:

I was wondering if any one would like to be the new brony I meet. You can tell me what he looks like, personality, and which one of the ponies from the show you want your character to be with. Just message it to me, I'll chose the first well thought out character.

Celestia can read minds?!?!
Damn it! now my plan for invading equestria will fail!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Anyways.... keep up the work!:moustache:

OMG YOU USED MY IDEA:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
(you probably thought of it from the start but still) YOU ARE NOW BEST PONY

Actually, I never would have thought of that. Thank you for giving me the idea :twilightsmile:


fixed it *not to self read comments before posting new one*

I may, but my character isn't that strong of a flier. But, I might later on :trollestia:

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