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Don't spend your whole youth saving up for your old age, instead spend your youth doing what you want. Deal with the rest later. You'll be forgotten in 100 years, so might as well enjoy life now.

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The Doctor always travels with a companion, usually a human. But when he appears on a world that he has no prior knowledge of, he picks up a new companion. One that is not human, but a pony named Twilight Sparkle.

Now that the Doctor has a new companion, what crazy adventures will they encounter in space and time?

Note: The Doctor being used in this story is the tenth incarnation, and he is not a pony, he is the humanoid Doctor. And this is not a romance, it's an adventure story.

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Comments ( 275 )

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Wow, this is really a good Tennent-esque episode. I really enjoy this.

I'm wondering if this is a planet, or different universe that the Doctor and Twilight are in.

Doing a Doctorfic? I am intrigued....

You posted this too fast. I still haven't talked to my Doctor Who obsessed friend.

Here comes the tidal wave.................

Interested as fuck, and slightly bothered by the proportions in that picture. Will read.:twilightsheepish:

Proportions seem correct, in a way. Ponies are supposed to be 4ft, so it does seem very legit.

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you've just been blue shelled.


thus starts the beginning of another great adventure by none other than austin himself

Congrats, you've made it to spot #93 on my read later list. Expect feedback in a few months.

This is relative to my interests.

A Doctor Who fic with a.... Human? No, Timelord? But Doctor Whooves is still a Timelord! Whatever. This is an interesting concept.

Two good Doctor Who(oves) fics in an hour? Damn, it must be my lucky day!

Now if only this was an episode or better yet a movie.

The Doctor had set the Tardis to arrive in London, 2028, but instead, it seems that he had arrived in a "Unknown location". The period should be inside the quotation marks

the creature then shrugged, “No matter... but wait.”
“Hmmm?” the creature said as it looked down at her again.
it asked as it bent down again to face her.
“Me?” it asked as a smile spread across its face.
“Doctor who?” she asked as she cocked her head.
“Equestria?” he mumbled as he rubbed his chin,
“Eh, yes, where else would you be?” she said.
How did I miss this one?” he said as he began to pace in front of Twilight.
“Ah, what was your question?” he asked.
“No need to yell,” he said with a chuckle.
“A Time Lord? What’s that?” she asked as she cocked an eyebrow at him.
“Ponies, of course!” he said, slapping himself in the head.
“Wait, this planet isn’t called Equestria?” the Doctor said as he looked around again.
“A library?” he said a loud. (aloud)
“Interesting. Do you live alone?” he asked, curious.
“So, where did you last see this quill of yours?” he asked as he stopped his walking and looked at her.
“Dragons?” the doctor said with a sly smile,
What is it?” he said in a calm, normal voice.
“This world is simply amazing!” the Doctor exclaimed.
“Do you want to see the inside of the Tardis?” he asked in an excited voice.
“But... how?!” she asked,
“Tell you what?” he asked in a smug tone.
Did you steal it from somewhere?” she asked as she cocked her head
“Have you ever wanted to visit those stars?” he asked,
“Well, would you like to see them?” he asked,
I can’t just come up with a place all of a sudden!” she said,
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“It’s the ships chameleon circuit, ship's


Now that I've finished pointing out errors; this looks really promising, how soon til the next chapter? :pinkiehappy:

I'm not going to lie when I say I would have prefered Derpy. But fuck it because I'm enjoying this story!

887382 well he did give some input. it's kinda a thin line that hasn't been addressed

887318 there is a rule though. be careful with the "first" posts. if you think it can get you banned, don't post. but I'd say this post is fine, barely.

now time to talk about the story haha.
I haven't watched much Dr. Who so I'm not sure how the Doctor would act, I'll netflix it later. but I'm sure you got his personality kickass :D

L4

:heart: I wuv you so much for this XD

As much as I love DR.Whooves being Doctor Who...

This is even awesomer because in the series I'm sick and tired of his compagnies always being girls (or humans) at best. FINALLY INTERSPECIES HAVE ARRIVED!

I hope one day Doctor 12 or 13 will have a non-human compagnion

888020 Agree Completely! XD

Le continue...

This is brill i love it :pinkiehappy: one of the best ive seen:derpytongue2:

You messed up slightly... When he says "Oh you know it." after she says that he's mad, he should respond "Oh yes!" instead.

I have read several MLP/Dr Who fics, but this is the first one i've read where he comes to Equestria as a human, and that is a rather pleasent change.

What about Doctor Whooves?

"Brillant! I have my own pony self!"

this fic isn't just awesome...it's fantastic!

Why is it that everyone in the Whoniverse has say, "Doctor who?" It's funny, but overused.:twilightangry2:
Also: 'It was around 3/4 her size.' That means Twilight would be a giant pony, and wouldn't be able to fit inside the TARDIS.:moustache:

This one is a bit more... "intriguing" than other doctor fics.:trixieshiftright:
I shall continue to read this if it's updated any more.:pinkiehappy:

887318 I, for one, celebrate your first-ness! Here, have something adorable to counter the haters.
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887387 I don't even play mario!~ So this means nothing to me! :pinkiesmile:

I was expecting more facehooves from Twilight. Allow me to demonstrate:

Twi: What's that?
Doc: It's my screwdriver!
Twi: Don't lie to me. I think I know what a screwdriver looks like, and that's not-
Doc: It's sonic.
Twi: Say what?
Doc: It's a sonic screwdriver. I use it to open things.
Twi: Who carries around a sonic screwdriver? Scratch that, who invents a sonic screwdriver?:facehoof: Seriously, of all the technology who have at your disposal, you carry around a something similar to a mini-flashlight!:facehoof: What kind of doctor ARE you anyway? I doubt you even have a bachelor's degree!:twilightangry2: I doubt you even went to college! Did you even pass-
Doc: Everything.
Twi: Pardon?
Doc: I'm a doctor of everything. Name it, and I know everything about it.
Twi: (Glares)
Doc: Is there something wrong?:trollestia:

You got Tennant's Doctor really well here, though I missed his british-ness a little. Far too few "blimey"s and such.

Still, fundamentally good job. Keep it up, you got yourself a fan ;)

I've always like the 9th and 10th Doctors best. 11th was always a bit too weird for me (fish custard and all.) Tennant is always going to be best Doctor in my book. So a new DWA sans Doctor Whooves... should be interesting.

Before I read, I need to watch Doctor Who, shameful, I know.
And I don't want to pirate it, just watch it for free online, where I don't have to sit through tons of adds and possible malware.
Any help you can provide would be appreciated.

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:rainbowlaugh: Do you mind if I use this? Not the same wording, but something like it?

887385 The Proportions do seem legit, it just creeps me out that Twilight's eyes are about the size of Tennant's head...

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:rainbowlaugh: Well, that's "My little pony" for you. The show where the ponies have huge eyes.

Also, I couldn't make it look any better. The first image was... creepier and had a fat Twilight.

889996 I frequently write my own scenes in the comments bar in hopes they get used in the next chapter. It... would be an honor. Especially since it looks like this story's gonna get featured.
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890625
:twilightsmile: Well, you're lucky. I used it in the beginning of the chapter :pinkiehappy:

Also, the next chapter will be up later tonight, or tomorrow.

You forgot to capitalize illusion in the title I think.

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I was going to, but it looks like this: Illusion. I didn't want to confuse some people :rainbowlaugh:

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Well, only illusion looks like that. And Ill.

I don't know about anyone else, but I liked this chapter. It wasn't great or anything, but it reminded me of a filler, or short episodes of doctor who.

I have no idea what's going on.
Seriously, someone explain what the hell just happened.

"Ill" usion's. XD

Continue the mad but enjoyable idea! :pinkiehappy:

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