Feeling lonely and out of place so close to Hearth's Warming Eve, Twist wishes she had never been born.
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I fooled you. I fooled you. I got horse stories. I got horse stories. I got all horse stories.
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I am a horrible human being.
3652985
You're just now discovering this?
good shit, OP/
Hah, this was priceless! Y'know, I love you for stuff like this
I actually like Twist, but this was hilarious!
I feel terrible for liking this... ... ...
P.D: I don't like Twist
This is some sick shit.
3654130
Whoever wrote this should never be allowed near a computer again.
3654134 YEAH
(but seriously I didn't like it. This just isn't my humor)
Whoever wrote this I must marry him
3654294
Sorry, Bok has but only one love.
And it's Twist.
3654369
Damn!
There needs to be a term for this that's as catchy as Scootabuse.
"Just Desserts," perhaps?
Some things:
won't be doin'
"to ask a variety of questions," perhaps?
"I wasn't imprisoned for a thousand years!" or somesuch.
Oh poor Twist.
And yea, mwahahahaha.
How does Luna not getting banished even WORK?!
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As with all things, including typos, I blame Twist.
Oh lord, you actually carried through with this.
That was... really, really unpleasant, I'm sorry. Oh... Oh wow.
I realize that this was a parody of some sort, but the message that the world would be a better place without Twist is really, really... mean. Yeah, that's the only word for it: mean. This was incredibly mean-spirited.
Apparently, Twist is such a terrible pony that her existence reverberated through time and space, spreading ruin and sorrow throughout the timeline. I'm amazed that she isn't responsible for the existence of windigos.
I feel guilty for laughing at this so much.
Guilty laughter is best laughter.
oh my god that was epic, I loved that ending though of the princess killing twist.
From the image I was expecting Twist to find the mirror pool, go on a rampage, then because no one knows who she is and how... Twist she is, they simply elect to banish all of them to the mirror pool. Either that, or a clone survives and everyone is better for it.
This was better than that though.
I'm not angry with this story because Twist died, I'm angry because you didn't go far enough with this... Couldn't you show Diamond Tiara being nice and have all her bullying being Twist's fault too? Or how about have Twist be the reason that Fluttershy is shy? OR how about let's have it all be Twist's fault that Spike doesn't know his birth family? There are many possibilities that you just didn't tap into and for that I'll have to give your story my harshest score yet: 6.5/10
Do better next time
Your friendly neighborhood Critic
Slicing Shulk. Handsome. Husband. Hero/ Bitthatbitchologist
Per the ending of Season 5, what if the reason Twist has caused so much bad stuff in Equestria is because Apple Bloom ditched Twist after she got her Cutie Mark?
Apple Bloom is the real villain.