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Average Joe from the deep south who discovered the wonderfull world of ponies.

Comments ( 17 )

Aloe is the pink spa pony, lotus is the blue one. other than that i enjoyed this fic

Thanks for the heads up on the color confusion. I really shouldn't write at three in the morning. :derpytongue2:

3468580 Thanks for the heads up on the color confusion. That is the reason why I shouldn't be writing much less posting anything after midnight. :twilightblush:

3469026 oh its fine anything that gets me off is still fine in my book, though it sucks that it was a cock tease in the end and poor braeburn is blueballed

3469494 I fully intend to write a sequel.

If it's a oneshot, why is it incomplete?

3470305 I just forgot to change it to complete. :facehoof:

3470940:rainbowlaugh: I didn't even think about reading it to music. Now I must find the tune to go with the fic.

Hahaha, i loved this big time xD

"See AJ, told you Braeburn wasn't gay" Favorite part... other than the obvious parts ofcourse.

But also a bit of a thing irking me aobut this, his name is spelt with the a after the e, not the other way around as his name has an "ay" sound in it not an "Eah" sound. Not being a jerk, jsut pointing it out. didn't really even take away from it either, loved this fic either way!

3486019:facehoof: Totally missed the name mistake. Thanks and I am glad you liked it.

3486123
No problem, and hey we all make mistakes like that! Also this fic is better than anything I've done as of yet so that's always a plus! :twilightsmile:

3486139 It was my first attempt at a clop fiction. After reading quite a bit of others works I decided that I would like take a hack at it.
I prefer a good adventure or Rom/Com but I tend to suck at writing them. I just don't have much patients but, I derived a lot of satisfaction of writing this little ditty of a fic.

3486179
I actually know the feeling. I rather find it hard to write anything, but i find one only gets better by doing it, and this one was pretty good regardless.
I personally suck waffle ass at clopfics though. working on that for one I'm kinda writing Hahaha

3486819 My problem is putting my thought into words. I can never quiet do a scene justice. Something I do sometimes is either go out and people watch or watch a movie. Then try write down what I see. If I do this with a movie I try to work up scenarios involving people/characters in the back ground. It's also fun to go out and look at different places trying your best to describe what you're seeing. As far as clop goes you either have to have some experience in that department or have read/watched a lot of Clop/Porn. I prefer reading because it offers so much more back ground information about what the characters are experiencing and feeling. Same goes for any fiction focusing on interpersonal relationships.

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Yeah true. Might be why i like the idea of writing them so much, or atleast just romantic scenes.
But at any rate, thanks for the chat but I think if we would continue it'd be better to jsut pm one another, haha.

But those are some good things to do though and while i have no experience with it i think my main weakness is i don't do well in conveying emotion.

Anyways, have a nice night and all days after until next we talk :twilightsmile:

Not a bad story. Only disappointment was they got interrupted when it was getting GOOD!!!! XD

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