DarkRyu
Joined 23rd Jan, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- ipwnlocks · 1.6k words · 31 11 · 2.2k views
- Queuefka Palazzo · 1.1k words · 68 53 · 2.6k views
- PhoKingAzn · 1.4k words · 55 68 · 3.6k views
- thesilentpony · 4.2k words · 125 137 · 11k views
- AlliePastel · 6k words · 64 17 · 3.2k views
- CircusHorse · 3.8k words · 75 12 · 5.6k views
- kainofthesand · 8.8k words · 81 12 · 3k views
- Osper · 3.3k words · 67 9 · 2k views
Stats
Page generated in 0.143 seconds
Total duration
1,063 users online
1,934,088 hits today, 1,822,946 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I really enjoyed this. I'm so sick!
Great premise and great writing style.
While I enjoyed the context of the fic, I didn't really enjoy how Flim went about getting what he wanted, I mean it makes no sense that he would commit rape and bring up forced prostitution just to get a night with a mare, it makes me sick thinking about it.
I thought I would enjoy it entirely but boy was I wrong.
3463182
I admit, this is a bit darker than the stuff I usually write. But he didn't want just any mare. He wanted Applejack. And how else would he get a night with Applejack except through blackmail? She absolutely hates him. It was either blackmail or outright rape, so I went with the lesser of two evils.
This. I like this.
3463281 you went with the latter of the two, I see the sense of it, you were trying to show that revenge can be sweet at times but to me revenge is a double edged sword that cuts both ways, bringing a fall to both, therefore I never swore to have revenge against anyone unless it was just a friendly joke that I will give in return.
I should shove my M9 bayonet deeper into you than any anal probe could ever reach.
Flim...
You fucking dick!
...I couldn't finish it. I didn't want to see what happens to AJ. There are few things I don't tolerate and two of them are blackmail and rape!
In other words, I liked it but I didn't want to read anymore.
Wtf did I just read??
Good story but would have gone better with both brothers double teaming AJ. Lots of DP and spit-roasting.
I honestly feel like this should be continued. I didn't think I would but I like this pairing. Good job
Meh. Could've been worse.
You torture me by bringing up impregnation, and then dashing those hopes shortly after!
But...what did she do with the cider squeezer?
Jesus. AJ sure changed her tune quickly, didn't she?
I'm sick for reading all of this, aside from the, well, you know it was sweet at the end how she made sure it would not get damaged
3467360 same
do a sequel, where he knocks her up and stuff
Not going to lie, nothing has gotten my heart racing this fast since I read the chapter of 'My Little Caboose: Blue is Magic' where it was a parody of 'Cupcakes'.
Applejack is my one and only waifu, and although I am fully aware she is a fictional character, and there are a wide number of fan fictions of her hooking up with other ponies/creatures/humans, this one hit me hard. I know how much she detests the Flim Flam brothers, as do I, and to read a story so well done, simple but believable as this one, it nearly broke my heart. I couldn't even force myself to read the, er, saucer parts. I skipped ahead to the end (I never, ever do that) but I had to know what happenes. 8 half expected Flim and Flam to pull a double cross on Applejack and have been recording her or something to use in another scheme. I dont know if I feel better or worse that she in this story was actually happy with Flim.
But I have to say this, good job. Very well written. Even if this story smashes my heart on an anvil, it was well done.