Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Luna and Sarah and exceptionally adorable,
I look forward to more!
Ahh Moira......your a damn spaz.....but i cant hate ya.
Ehm. Very nice, but I'm afraid a wild shipping tag will appear on this story!
the most*
bye*
You're going to make me type porn of this later, right? Wandering Moon side stories?
I liked this chapter. Not much to really comment as to why, but, I liked it. Maybe 'cause a few things were brought up that will be adressed in the next chapter.
You heard the general, I demand more hugs!
3669005 Getting a little bored in the desert?
3669188 Indeed I am, but adorableness always helps.
I personally lose interest with Nightmare's comments about Luna and Sarah. sorry.
If it progresses further I'm not going to be interested anymore.
Don't mind me though, I'll just leave quietly if it happens.
Oh my gosh I love Moira.
You know you write it well when I can see Moria actually doing that.
...
Is this turning into a romance story as well?
Because damn, you're certainly throwing enough hints that way.
Was that a "The Maw" reference in the title? I mean I get the pun that she sort of rode luna into town but still.
I freaking love Moira, everything about her is so great. Even if you destroy megaton, you can't get rid of her of her happy attitude.
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I wants shiPping and letsbian sekcks
PUT THE GOD DAM ROMANCE TAG IN THIS IT NEEDS IT!!! LUNA x SARA FTW!!!
XD Moria, the wasteland's Pinkie Pie. You got her down pat.
3670158 Coupled with a dash of Twilight.
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It might, it all depends on a few things in story... if it does I know I'll lose a few people (Sketchy Markks) and others but I'm prepared to deal with that and hold nothing against you. I'd just like to say that if I do go all the way with the 'romance' aspect of it I'll do my best to keep it as a side plot and not shift the main focus. Remember, at the moment there isn't anything big going on in terms of 'plot' and this is the point in the game that's used to do whatever side quests are available (or at least one of the points) so you could think of it like that. Anyways, I hope you enjoy it regardless and if you do leave then I wish you didn't but it's alright.
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Awesome, I was worried that I might have taken her a bit too far... I'm glad I didn't and that you guys enjoyed her!
Anyways, thanks for reading guys
3670255 I personally don't care what you do, as long as it isn't obscenely convoluted, herectically weak, or blasphemously something or other, I'll come up with a word later.
3670255 If the story Elevates to a sex scene do it off screen. I could Care less about the romance at this point as long as it isn't shoved in my face.
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If it happens I'll do it in a bonus chapter/other story made for that purpose, I know how people react to random clop being shoved at them
3670564 it's not about the Clop in my opinion, it's the human on pony. just not the biggest fan of it is all.
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Ah, that's fine too
3670255 Ha, your not the only one that writes her being a bit spazy, i'm doing the same thing in fanfic. (it has nothing to with ponies btw.)
edit: Holy shit i had the best idea ever......MOIRA...The Time Traveler....(ok probably one of my worst ideas but what ever...)
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Please, yes. All the side stories.
Also, Wadsworth is best robot.
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Well, my vote is in for the sexy Sarah sidequest plot. Heck, just keep up the mental innuendo and I'd be pretty happy.
Wadsworth and Doc Church were hilarious by the way, excellent writing good sir.
All Moira wants is some research!
I liked this chapter. It was a nice change of pace from the usual action-y stuff, and I especially loved how you portrayed Doc Church. I almost couldn't handle how much sas he was dishing out. You wrote Wadsworth nigh perfect, and I do hope that you include some of his jokes (Not too many though, or else his humor array would require recharging.) Oh, and then Sarah and Luna in the same bed. Are you trying to give me a heart attack?
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I'm happy you enjoyed them both, I do like writing snarky characters and they're both exceptionally snarky so it works ut wel.
Too cute for you?
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Hell yes, it's too cute for me! The hopeless romantic in my mind is frothing at the mouth and mumbling incoherently!
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I sure wasn't expecting it going into this story, but if it happens I'm definitely not leaving. That would seem a bit extreme, or harsh, no?
If it's kept to the side, like you said, I have absolutely no problem with it.
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Timey wimey wibbly wobbly (I think I changed the time while writing, just think of it as sunset )
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Ah well that's good to hear; some people have a very negative opinion towards romance popping up and have left me nasty comments about it (not that yours was by any means). Anyways, thanks for your continued reading
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Okie-dokie-lokie!
3671573 *Wibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey
Huh Luna and Nightmare seem to be splitting off from each other more and more.
Interesting! Usually I can't stand humanxpony ships, but this is tolerable! Oh, who am i kidding-- this is more than tolerable, this is wonderful!
Love what you did with Moira, BTW. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
I really want to see a romance tag on this story!!! Please!!!!
3671585 I would rather you not have it although it is your story, I do find the current situation quite funny though with Nightmare constantly (for lack of a better word) ogling Sarah while Luna is indignant.
A true work of art good sir. How you're slowly integrating the shipping in has caught my attention, wonderful!
Although I hate lesbian ships, as long as it's subtle and the story still keeps priority I'll continue to read it. Though I do not mind the 1 way shipping going on here, I can't see Sarah really becoming sexually attracted with another species since even in Fallout's society, its based on 1950's America after all. However Luna comes from a world of multiple sentient species thus it would not effect her.
The other thing I wonder is if NMM is the true reason for her sexual attraction to Sarah seeing as prior to NMM's rise, Luna seemed uninterested in mares, at very least her friend.
Loved Wadsworth and Moira. Moira actually has an Easter Egg, if you spawn another Moira in the shop, she'll actually say "Hi, Moira"
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Desert Fox, what are you doing here?
3682959 Trying to elude the heat of Afrika.
Luna is adorable.
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Obviously.
It seems you know quite well how to capture the feeling that a fallout game gives you,Because whenever im reading one of your fallout fics,It feels just like the good ole adventures trekking around in The Capital Wasteland,.....And to a lesser extent the Mojave
Hehehehehee~ Luna lustfully thinking about Sarah's curves? X3 THIS IS TOO MUCH! hehe.
Good work on this chapter my friend, and awesome work as well. this is getting interestingly awesome ^^
Freaking Wadsworth though XD hehe.
Keep it up!
3682959 Omg if fallout ever works on windows 8 me try dat
4499223 if you want i can help you get it working (i have windows 8 and i messed around and fixed it) if so pm me
This chapter makes me think that Nightmare would get along fantastically with Bob the Skull.
As would Moira and Pinkie.
4565863 hehe bob I think you'd be right that or she'd grind him to make her tea.
4565863 That great introduce a perverted wind and intelligence spirit in a skull to a goddess of the night that could our skull and slice you into a thousand bits yeah good luck bob also are we talking about the same bob the skull.