Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Well...I can't remember why I kept delaying reading, but this was a nice 20-chapter binge.
Well, given how these two operate, Luna is going to have herself a VERY swanky new Plasma Rifle soon.
On that note, I honestly can't remember if Sarah got hold of the Xuan-Long yet, because those two weapons in tandem would be so many degrees of unfair.
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She has the location but there hasn't been a reason for her to go look for it at the moment.
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Fair enough, honestly couldn't remember.
Heh, come to think of it, I'm guessing that Luna and Fawkes will get along swimmingly, what with their shared love of exceedingly destructive energy-based firepower.
‘Sniff, sniff’ I smell foreshadowing….
So the android was Harkness... good to know. I say that because I never actually got around to finishing that particular quest line.
Also, still waiting for these two to destroy Paradise Falls.
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I'm just waiting for Sarah to give Luna a Shishkebab.
*reads the first couple of lines of this chapter* you knew what you typed did you ya cheeky bastard?
4232516 That may be how she returns to Equestria, but it's just speculation at this point.
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If you ever go back and play it again, turn Harkness in to the dickweasel looking for him, and then kill the old guy and his bodyguard before they leave the room. It gets you a pretty badass perk. Then you can go talk to Harkness and play the hero to get the good guy reward as well.
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While wearing a Tesla Armor~
Nice chapter! *looks at number of likes* Uh oh... As of this comment, the like number is 666.
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Hmm? I have no idea what you're talking about.
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4233119 oooh suuuuure.
Anyway, this quest is going to end pretty well.
4233072 I saw your comment. Which reminded me to like this story. It is not 667. You're safe now tiny mortal.
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you're name only made that oh so sweeter.
4232502 Dont forget their penchant for speaking in "ALL CAPS!!!" (If Luna does not respond to his shouting with the royal Canterlot voice at least once I will be disappointed.) and their sense of justice. I think the two were a team made in heaven.
This is a good story, I started reading and was loath to stop for bed. Fun reading, but I want to see a few more of the events in Canterlot, especially Twilight's exam. I loved Shining's DnD group, especially having Fancy Pants in there. I can totally see the very successful Fancy Pants sneaking out for DnD games and acting much more immature than normal. I can also see Twilight pouring over the rules and creating a character that manages to be supper effective and takes out everything while armed with just a book.
One of the biggest thrills for me was the name of Celestia and Luna's foster father, Jonathan, since that is my real life name. And I love dragons. I hope to see him show up after Luna returns and meet his son. I can totally see him relaxing outside Ponyville and letting fillies and colts climb all over him while he tells stories or answers Twilight's questions about dragons so she can raise Spike better.
4235279 For some reason, I remember either him being at the tail-end of something and either he or his mate not being strong enough to ensure hatching... but, I'm too lazy to check...
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Dangit; not another one!
Every person who I've met, or in your case, overheard, with a name that is some variant of John likes/loves dragons.
It's getting a bit unsettling!
4236712 Yeah, but he said he'd wake up around the time Luna returned, so he'll get to meet everyone. And you know Twilight will have questions for him
Uh. What? Did you leave out a clause?
Besides that, erm, hopefully heartwarming compliment, I can already tell you're gearing up for something big. You pretty much nailed Pinkerton down, and I did get a chuckle or two out of Luna's pride getting in the way. I'll be honest, this chapter wasn't your best. There wasn't that flow that I'm accustomed to from you, and it was just... uneventful, I guess. While this isn't indicative of how the rest of the story will play out, it seems like you're beginning to just make this a slice-of-life, with each side quest just shoved in without and setting up. Just a thought. All in all, this chapter gets a Stereotypically Named Scientist/10.
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Thanks for spotting that, here's the correct version.
Also... yeah I know it's getting kind of Slice-of-life(y) with these sidequests... I plan to correct that soon.
On the bright side I'm glad to hear that you liked Pinkerton
Awesome chapter! ^^
And oh dang, I had that same expression like Sarah had when she found out XD legit!
Heavy armor, urk.
Keep it up! ^^
Hah! So that's why he could out-stare Luna!
Epic foreshadowing.
4560949 Unfortunately everyone who played fallout 3 knew that...
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It may be due to my idiocy or something else, but i didn't.
5674922 MY GOD MAN! DID YOU OR DID YOU NOT COMPLETE THE QUEST 100%!? if you did then you should have found out.
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not everyone is a completionist
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I never found out that the Android was Harkness, reason being that I put "The Synthetic Man" on the back burner to focus on the main quest. Eventually, I was approached by a member of the Railroad who offered me a vital component of a Synth (and with it, the Good Karma ending of the quest)
I still surprised of stupidity of such a quest. Whether or not toasters are slaves or not. Jesus Christ your protagonist is a railroad nutjob.