Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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James still has to die... and that makes me sad.
..Will he die..or will there be a miracle...
.....Please, let there be a miracle..
Yeah, you better try.
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4260688 I don't get why though. At the start of Broken Steel, the Brotherhood saves you and stops you from becoming a ghoul at the same time. Why can't they do that for James? He's most likely suffering from radiation poisoning. The burns and such should have been healed by the stimpack Sarah gave him – even if only a little bit – so that shouldn't be a problem.
4260795 yes but his death cannot be prevented due to it being a fixed point in time
Well, James lived slightly longer than he did in the game, unless a miracle happens. Do you here me, Elements, they need help, and I'm fairly certain you won't allow Luna to die!
*red.
Erm. I'm on the fence about this chapter. I did enjoy it, but I don't think you really put enough meat into the chapter. It felt abridged and lacking in the aspect of action. But, I did like how James was ready to die. It seems like he thinks that Project Purity will never happen, so he's given up. It's pretty cool, actually. Overall, I give this chapter a Garza/10.
Asshole. You really are an Asshole. You are going to kill Sarah. She's going to sacrifice herself to activate Project Pur......
SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was not until the end of this long road that the Lone Wanderer was faced with that greatest of virtues – sacrifice, but the child refused to follow the father's selfless example, instead, allowing a true hero to venture into irradiated control chamber of project purity.
Okay I see a Broken Steel story path. So she's not going to kill herself like James was willing to do. I'm going to venture a guess and say its Fawkes? Who activates Project Purity and save the Capital Wasteland, but that's too easy.You're going to have one hell of a spin/twist on that aren't you?
Can't wait to read more.
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No, god-dammit No!
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I really hope he doesn't die. He could be a companion. He'll be useful.
4261114 yeah but he needs to die in order for Sarah to be motivated to destroy the enclave and finish project purity... or he could die in project purity instead of Sarah
They all die the end.
Don't make me feel these feels again! I got through it before but that was with him dying then and there and goddammit I will not accept you drawing out his death just to punch me in the feel!
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'Oh, you don't need to go in to push the button.' ::Telekinetic Push:: 'Done'
4260805 you know what else is a fixed point in time. luna not crossing dimensions. it could also be an alternate universe from the one james died in.
4261747 I agree 100%
Precision feels incoming!
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I can't get the thought out of my head that you're going to have Luna pulled back to Equestria just as they start to take back Project Purity. Then I keep going back and forth between ten different thoughts on after that, so please, for my mental stability, keep up with these quick updates.
Angtsy chapter, except for me laughing as I imagine the look on those Enclave troopers just before the grenades go off in their faces. I really hope James doesn't die, but if you must kill him off make sure he gets a long talk with Sarah and Luna first.
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Well, Ed has always taken a slightly more "realistic" approach to stimpacks in his stories so far. They're powerful, but they're not the miracle drug they are in the game where you can have 1hp, inject three or four stimpacks and be completely unhurt in a matter of moments. He generally has them fix non-critical wounds no problem, but for something like James' wounds (gaping holes in his chest and a burned out lung among other things) more serious medical attention is needed. He did kind of the same thing for Luna and Sarah at earlier in the story.
Oh, and he didn't get any radiation this time around. Luna teleported him out before the Enclave artard turned on the machine. It's just the plasma burns that they have to deal with.
4261747 Well that's anticlimactic.
Well, I am eager for more.
.......what race sarah is? Im just wandering...
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Caucasian, why?
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Nothing......ei.....will she and luna get power armor?
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Sarah probably will. Luna... no.
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Luna could use the Stealh Suit Armor instead ?
While it's nice to see Luna/Nim turning back from the whole "take over equestria/eternal night" thing, having her take all of it as totally her fault just doesn't seem right.
Awesome chapter and awesome work! :D
I do hope James makes it, he's a cool guy ;-; and Sarah would be destroyed, legit! and I hope Luna will be alright, using her own energy? damn... damn.
Good work again! keep it up!
I heard Lullaby for a princess while I read this It really helps on the feels
Enjoying the story, there is more for me to read, I just thought I'd say that sarah lyons is a sentinel, not a paladin.
> it’s non-ethereal blue color
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you are correct