Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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ahh, I never get tired of this story.
Praise the Sun!
*ahem* Whoops, too much Dark Souls.
Praise the Luna!
For some reason, listening to this enhanced the reading very much.
Even though they're just resting from a most recent worrisome issue, all these pleasantries makes me wonder if something terrible is going to happen soon.
What if... the "stars that aid in [Nightmare Moon's] escape"... only has room for one?
4221085 im pretty sure next chapter i going to be Sarah's dad dies.
I love what you've done with these Rangers!
So much more character development than I expected!
Well this was an interesting development, Sara and Luna joining Reilly's Rangers, awesome!
And I love you for posting chapters so often recently, even if they are somewhat short.
4221085 or it happens just as they confront the big bad
Big bad:you shall not stop what we have here
Luna: You shall die just like your .OH SHIT (vanishes)
Big bad: What? What!
GIVE LUNA A MINI-GUN
4221223 Dude no..... no dont give ed2481 any ideas. we know it happens but don't have it happen so early.
ya know... i'm curious to see what Sarah will be like when she gets to Ethan's level.
4224365 Haha I can only imagine.
4225122 4224365
Different. Very different.
When I first saw this story I was more than a little frightened by the length. I thought "Dang" there's no way a story that long could still be going, it'll never be finished and I'll be left wanting. Then I noticed that the updates have been very regular for a very long time, and that the story hadn't been abandoned. My excitement was without expression.
Then I gave the first chapter a chance and could not put the story down. Rare are those stories that manage to do justice to more than just MLP (some can't even manage that, despite this being FimFiction). This story not only managed to treat Equestria properly, but also depicted Fallout 3 with incredible accuracy. So much so, that it seemed this story was based on an actual playthrough of the game. I could practically see the levels and damage on the screen based on the different cues (such as the items they found, or the type of enemies they were confronting, to say nothing of the perks and such.
That doesn't even enter into the writing quality, which was absolutely wonderful, a sizable cut above the average fanfiction. The understanding of English demonstrated was wonderful, and the style was engaging. Never did the writing make me feel bored or tired, as some stories sometimes do. The characters were handled authentically, so that I could practically hear the voice-actors in my head as I read the story. Heck, many of the lines seemed taken straight from the game, which helps in that regard.
There is now one more eager reader, exciting for what is to come and looking forward to each update. I wonder how long you're going to march in-step with the plot of the Fallout game. All the way to the end? All the way to Broken Steel? It seems like time in Equestria is passing much too quickly for that. If the flow of time is in constant march, then it seems like they only have like, two more days at the most, before Luna gets pulled back to Equestria. Probably not even that.
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Thank you so much for this nice long comment full of praise! It always makes me feel awesome to know that people appreciate my writing and that I can bring smiles to their faces. I wish I could give you four paragraphs of thanks in response to the four you gave me, but it's hard to find words for how awesome you are so in return, simply know how much you brightened up my day.
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No worries. The story is way more than 4 paragraphs. ^^
4226620 obviously, its just i would love to find out in what ways. will she be more like Ethan or Cassandra? or will she change in an entirely other direction? either way since i doubt Luna will be in the wasteland for that long i would love there be a time skip after the stories over. just to show that
4227799 Look up 'Diaries of a Madman' by whatmustido. It's fairly regularly updated.
"You make us look so very foolish."
Foalish?
Another well done chapter my friend, good job on this one ^^
Now they're a part of the family, isn't that suuuuhhweeeeet~ XD hehe.
Good job again! :D
forgot to ask, sarah wukk be a regular loner? or a dlc loner.
4229291 Not to mention friggen amazing!
6917901 Hey look, someone else who uses colored text as a norm.
7052537 *ghasping sound*