Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Dat cliffhanger though.
Sarah,She's a few hairs away from being a glass cannon,But at times,She shines bright enough to blind
4138022 Cliffhangr you say? Well then, guess I'm waiting until the next chapter or two comes out before I read the new parts.
4138218 One chapter should suffice, unless its a "Back to the wasteland, now Equestria, now Wastelan-Equestria again!" chapter.
I just realized: Nim is now acting like V.A.T.S for Sarah. That is the coolest reasoning for that aspect I've heard of yet. Great job, I'm loving it!
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Yay, someone got it
Stupid supermutants. Don't talk until you're sure the person is dead.
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Yay! Someone finally caught it!
4139145 Its an abbreviation,Like Inc. being short for incorperated.The period in this case doesn't end the sentence.
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I thought it was Pinkie then Screwball are more logical
You have an issue of typing "bored" when you mean "board."
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Dang... thanks Shadow
4141872 Your new profile pic is too terrifying for me to look at.
Almost there....
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Almost to what?
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to IT.
Phew, I finally had enough time to read through all of the chapters I missed. This chapter was good in all respects, and I find it cool that Sarah is actually injured. One point I thought I'd mention is that it feels like you're rushing to get to action. You gotta build up to it. I'd analyze further, but I'm gonna save it for the next chapter, since I can already tell that it'll be a doozy.
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Kinda hard to slow down when you swoop down into the middle of it, eh?
Another well done chapter my friend ^^ this was pretty good :)
Things are starting to swirl out of control! :O legitness.
SAVE SARAH!
Keep it up! ^^
Unless Sarah's 10mm is secretly a Styer M1912 in disguise (or similar) she emptied a magazine into the super mutant, not a clip. Furthermore, no, the two are not interchangeable mechanically or in (proper) terminology.
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5588493 Don't be a nitpick, no one likes a nitpick.
7051991 That is not an inconsequential detail, thus it is not nitpicking, but educating. Nuances are an important part of language.
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I blame the clip-fed M1 Garand and several million clueless draftees for such a widespread word misuse...
7527655 Why would you blame them of all people? They knew the difference because they had BOTH kinda of weapons in their arsenal at that time - clip-fed internal magazines and external box magazine. Not to mention the fact that the military tends to train soldiers on the proper use of their weapons.
Personally, I am going to blame inner-city gang-bangers, many of whom didn't get a proper education and think that shooting people is a fucking game. They seem more likely candidates...