Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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we all know whats going to happen tomorrow in equestria
I like this chapter.
I really love the dynamic between Celestia and Cadance.
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i get that clown line very clever!
Is that a Naruto Abridged joke?
Nice chapter as always, and I laughed when it was Fancy Pants that was the Dungeon Master. I know he was just a colt but I could just picture him twirling that boss mustache he gets later on all evilly as he watches the players fall into his traps and such. Mwahahahahaaaaa
Anyway adorable with how Armor acts with Cadence...always the adorkable little bugger like his sister at times. Just now hoping if and when Luna returns that our fav wasteland wander gets to come along, if just to see how the ponies react to such a woman.
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YES! Someone got it
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Yeah, I can see older Fancy doing that too; mwahahahahaha
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Hmm, are we nearing the end of our journey?
A minor hiccup I see.
Im pretty sure Shining Armors magic aura is actually purple (or light rose as the wikia states it).
By any chance this is a reference to Steven King It novel?
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Yep
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The many joys of being half colorblind
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AH, I remember you saying that sometime ago. I hope I didnt came over as offensive.
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Not at all man, don't worry about it.
4203677 Alrighty!
If I might add, apparently half the people one FimFic must be colorblind aswell in one form or annother. I was the only one so far to realise the little hiccup.
*puffs chest in selfpride*
*sniff*
Oh great, I forgott how much that stinks....
hmm, a quick question, what's exactly the temporal relation between Equestria and The Capital Wasteland? It's just that you've suddenly jumped forward almost a thousand years when it's only been a few days in the CW. So is it relative, or is there no relation? Still, great chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^
P.S. Shoutout to Stephen King's IT
*Assessment.
Okay, I see that you're getting into modernized Equestria. I was a bit thrown off by how you called Celestia queen, as well as Twilight Velvet being the author of Daring Do, but hey, head canons are head canons. There really wasn't much to say about this chapter. It wasn't outstanding, but it was enjoyable to read. I'm still trying to get a read on how Cadence is significant to the overall story, but I suppose I'll know in time. All in all, this chapter gets a Young Fancy Pants/10.
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Go down to the Time Dilation entry, whoever wrote it is spot on
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic.WanderingMoon
And yes, it was a shoutout
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Thanks for that catch.
Celestia is Queen for several reasons, off the top of my head they are that in all rights she should be Queen in the show and the only reason that she's not is the idea that 'Queen means evil' in terms of little girls and marketing execs. Also more to do with the story itself it makes her more commanding then 'Princess', in my opinion at least. As for Twilight Velvet being the author of Daring Do... well to be honest the idea of Daring being real just rubs me the wrong way.
As for Cadence's significance... well go back and read her introductory chapter a bit closer. She establishes precedent for something.
Gotta be a reference to Lilo & Stitch!
I love that movie.
Flare Blitz... A Pony Out of Place reference?
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Not that I know of. Haven't gotten around to that one yet
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Ah, I see you're going with Lauren Faust's Equestria. Not many do that, but it can work out well. I just reread Cadence's intro chapter, and I can see how she fits into the Equestrian half of the story, but not how she'll be significant in the sense of Luna and Sarah. I may just be unobservant, so correct me if that's the case.
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Yeah, I don't know why people don't use her version more often... it's honestly kind of annoying.
As for Cadence, to be completely honest, she doesn't really impact the Sarah/Luna part of the story. Like I said, she mostly establishes a certain precedent of the way Celestia does things. Don't want to say much more now though but I'll let you think about it.
Your Shining has gained points.
Nope. Cleric's have decent HP for a caster, and can wear heavy armour + shields. The front lines is where they belong.
Rangers built right can tough it out with the best of 'em, so that's not necessarily right. Bards, though...
Dear God they know about Heypennywise?!
For a Paladin, he has little faith.
If only she knew just how she does...
Also, missing an I here, or needs a rewording.
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It's because most HiE stories have the pretense that My Little Pony is a real show back on Earth, which pretty much sets the canon in stone. But as for Cadence, I guess I was looking a little too deep. Blegh, c'est la vie for an editor. Either way, keep up the good work, dude.
Oh..Oh my gosh, that Lilo and Stitch reference! I think...Anyway, it made me laugh so hard.
Quick, someone call Kakashi!
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Yes!!!!!!
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Stitch has a Glitch was too sad though, I had a feels attack watching that.
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Shhh! No spoilers!
I haven't watched that one yet.
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Here you go, in 720p: Stitch Has a Glitch
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Neat! Thanks.
So, Luna's gonna be back in Equestria soon? That'll be fun.
Also, filly!Cadence is adorable.
Cadence blushed. “Moooom,” she whined. “We’re ten, you’re not allowed to date until we’re thirteen!”
Uh, what does this line mean?
I was under the impression that Celestia was a princess because it was a Diarchy. You can only have one queen, but you can always have another princess, so Luna and Celestia were princesses together, meant to be equals. That was my read on it anyways.
Awesome chapter and awesome work my friend ^^ legit!
This was too adorable for my eyes to take! \)^o^)\ Ack! Baby Twilight, adorableness!
Good show once more! :D this is getting awesomer!
Keep it up!
aww i what to see them play Dungeon & Dragons lol anyhow Great chapter keep it up my friend
For half a second, I thought it said 'changeling' for the better then I was all like cuz I realized it said changing
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That they're too young to date? That Equistria has different laws?
4554940 Methinks it might just be one of those things young ones say that aren't actual laws but more of a socially indicated thing she noticed some of the other foals talking about, or it might be a self imposed thing by Cadence.
I was wondering how long has Luna been i the wasteland now since it very close to the 1000 year mark with Twi's test the next day. Love the story by the way
4204731 Now I haven't finished reading all of this, only up to chapter 40 so far, but I have to agree with the idea of Sunbutt being queen, for two reasons. One it was originally intended for her to be a queen, and two, even if Equestria was a Diarchy when first formed, it would have rightfully STOPPED being one upon Luna's banishment. There was only one ruling figure of authority, and even if you go with cannon Equestria, NOBODY ELSE KNEW WHO THE BUCK LUNA WAS. Even Twilight, who actually knew about Nightmare Moon as somepony real rather than a fairy tale, nobody knew about Luna.
As far as the Daring Do bit, I've always preferred the comic's version as well, where Twilight Velvet is the author. It explains both why they are Twilight Sparkles favorite books, and how she always knows when the latest comes out/always has a copy of the latest book.
4203799 I thought it was King's IT as well glad to see I was not the only one (Ever notice a lot of King's books cross over with the others through the Dark tower book set?)
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Or the line makes it sound like Celestia cannot date until Shining and Cadence are thirteen.
It's quite hilarious image, I think.
D'awwww
"who you might know and Lyra,”
"Lyra,"
http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120712095613/nonsensopedia/images/1/1b/96398_-_Giorgio_Tsoukalos_hand_heartstrings_human_behavior_Lyra_meme.jpg
She's just going to be so happy in the long run, I just know it.
Oh hell no!
Who lets an impressionable eight year old filly read IT of all books?!
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50 bits Shinning Armor let her read it.