Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Yaaaaaay
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As I've said before (in the comments section so I don't blame you for missing it) Time passes in Equestria exactly as fast as it needs too
Now have fun, that's an order!
3851146 Yup. All the author really needs to do is avoid any of the following rookie mistakes:
1. Specifying the relative rate at which time passes before the novel is complete.
2. Specifying three moments of connection between the realms after specifying that time passed is proportional. As long as only two points of interaction are specified, Earth time can safely be a linear function of Equestria time.
So far, the author is doing an admirable job of avoiding these pitfalls, provided that the "peek into Equestria" chapters are not assumed to fit the surrounding chapters chronologically.
To summarize, leave it as "wibbly-wobbly... timey wimey... stuff" until all the writing is done. Then you can fit a mechanism to what you already have.
Only 250 pounds?
I almost got there once, and let me tell ya, I didn't look anywhere near that big.
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I'll keep those in mind
And that's how Sarah was made!
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Yep, hehe hehe
3851556 quite literally her origin story
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Maybe next time Pinkie Pie will tell us the story of how she got her cutie mark...
3851556 3851606 we could also say that's how Ethan was made, since there both the lone wanderer
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The version she didn't want to hear.
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I hear it's a gem.
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That's how ALL the Lone Wanderers were made. Sounds like they had fun...
Uh, trooped isn't the right word here. That means they're in a large group. Maybe when Doctor Li and all of them are together, I'd use it. But, swap it out for marched or something.
I think you mean "I-I'm fine, Luna,"
Not a correction, but, I'd say "uglies," or "Uglies" to refer to super mutants.
Giggity.
Not one to really question this, nor have I bothered looking into it, but have you noticed any rain during the course of the Fallout series? It was only ever mentioned to have appeared shortly after the bombs dropping, killing off or mutating a lot of inhabitants (black rain, from what I recall). So, although there are a ton of clouds and the properties of percipition is still feasible, it just... Never happens in the game, and if it happens in some back end side comic that I've never heard about, then I wouldn't include that.
We've seen the engine able to handle weather environments, and I'm backing up the lack of rain with the F:NV farming. They have to use pipes and stuff to feed water to the plants, rather than relying on rain. So it's difficult to justify rain actually happening.
Also, another thing, they're pretty deep underground. It'd have to rain super hard for them to hear it.
Anyways, probably my biggest nitpick over something so small. I enjoyed the chapter and hope for more.
One more thing: Super Mutants are probably 7 - 8 feet tall. I would not be surprised if you said they were 500lbs without armour.
3852091 rain shows up in new vegas if you have honest hearts. and honestly why would it not rain a little, there are clouds so it would have to rain to some extent, but i do agree about it having to rain pretty hard to hear it if there underground.
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Ah, yes, now I remember. It rained here and there.
I could argue that it's a canyon that was, for the most part, largely unaffected by fallout, but I won't because I can't.
Like I said, though, I've never seen it in the D.C. Not unbelievable, but, I just can't imagine it. Personal gripe.
That was a nice chapter. Still, you're a damn ship tease author. Pretty nice how frequently you update though, and a good read to boot.
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Well, it quite literally has to rain sometime. Even a nuclear war can't destroy the water cycle. The worst it can do is pollute and evaporate liquid water, and even then it'll still rain back down eventually. Plus, the fact that there are any bodies of water in the Capital Wasteland at all pretty much guarantees that there is at least occasional rain.
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Thanks for the catches man (I always just assumed that they didn't bother showing it in FO3 because it would be annoying to be constantly be irradiated in FO3). Also, I hope you enjoyed Nightmare's little breakdown, hopefully it gave everyone a bit more of a handle on just what she is.
Nice touch with the rain, I remember back when New Vegas came out their was a form somewhere by modders that the world engine would bug out or severely lag if a weather system was worked in. Think about the way rain happens to jump through the roof in modded fallout games, they may have wanted to add it in but the current game would make it nearly imposable. So I guess by all intensive purposes you can think and play as it rains outside because those lakes sure as hell didn't fill themselves. 3853457 Also great chapter, things are really heating up with the nightmare attempting to torment Luna.
Just how big is Luna compared to Sarah?
Well this was a cool chapter ^^
Poor Luna,*Hugs* I love hugs! ;-;
Good show my friend ^^ and nice touch with da rain~ :3
ya um I'm not going to go to sleep right after hearing what could possible be the moments before the making of me happened Luna pillow or not.(least not with out a fifth of something to make sure I have a dreamless sleep shudders)
Wow., never heard that simile before
"and it’s better then"
better than
3855805 same height