Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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smaug rely?
Oh snap! Reunion time!
And another chapter down! I can't wait to see how vault 101 reacts to Luna...
Heh. This is going to be fun.
Mmmmm. Delicious backstory. Makes something feel so much more real when there's an actual history to relate.
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I've always found that to be the case
Uwotm8?
Now I am seriously wondering if Johnny knows a certain spiny, orange dragoness...
Oh shit! This never ends out well. Unless you're a heartless bastard and leave everyone to their fates, exception Butch.
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What spiny orange dragoness?
4301887 You haven't read the Temeraire books? I remember asking something about almost the same thing in one of Ethan's stories.
oh shit! Wounder what Amana would say to Luna! Can't wait so pump up right now!
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Ah yes, that spiny orange dragon
Please give Sarah the "child at heart" perk for little light, it would be awesome.
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Watered whine, when one stands outside bitching in the rain.
Luna and Celestia certainly don't seem to want to have children........ not only do they sleep with other women but of other species as well.
Time to head home.
Its going to end in tears.
It always does...
Endless side quests Yay!
I wonder if the recommended shops were where they got their swords?
Keep going! ;)
*Raises hand* I'm Chemo on TV tropes. Happy to help with the page, although I haven't done as much as the edit history implies, since it's mostly small changes to wording demanded by my perfectionism.
As for the chapter, pretty interesting stuff. Would this happen to be where Luna and Celestia got their current swords, or is more like the Lone Wanderer's BB gun? Also, I'm calling it now: Amata is totally going to be jealous of Luna (even if she isn't into women herself).
You know, except for the raiders who charge you with tire irons or bats, which is all of them.
Ah, shit's gonna go down. I had to read this chapter twice to get everything, which, is tedious as it is relieving. It shows that you pack more than enough content into your chapters. Doesn't feel like filler, and hearing Luna expand on the Equestrian side of the story is always nice. Also, griffons are best birdcats. You dropped the bomb a bit too soon with the vault, though. I think it would've been better if you had started with some radio static as Luna was rambling, then have the signal slowly come through until Sarah hears "Vault 101." That's just my opinion. All in all, this chapter gets a Vault One-Oh-Done/10.
Luna ends up second best once again..... Sarah needs an immortality spell, cause Luna deserves a little more love in Equestria.
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Meh. Ironically, everyone in that vault is dicks except for Butch and his gang. They actually turned out to be pretty badass. But fuck Amata. She just whines and complains about everything no matter what you do.
4304063 Exactly, with the exception of the Butch and the Tunnelsnakes, I personaly found them to be rather "dense". Also, I hate bullies with a passion.
I love the idea of Lulu and Tia pranking Smaug. I also liked the Griffon/Pony couple. Little Luna with a great sword is an adorable image.
> still care enough
Anyone else see this as a bare-faced insult/attempt at guilt tripping?
Oh dang, I remember this mission... I killed everyone O^O Cause they deserved it! *evil laugh*
Good show once more my friend, this is going great! :D
Can't wait to see what happens now.
If I read that correctly then that means Luna and Celestia took the "fake" cup of Christ from Smaug. Well those two certainly get around.
4610780 Hardly, its a reference to The Hobbit, not The Last Crusade. According to the book, and the story of Beowulf that inspired the dragon Smaug, the dragon becomes enraged because his favorite treasure, a golden jeweled cup, is stolen.
Sun Forge.....
Kind of sounds like Sky Forge.
Am i right or am i getting something wrong?
4301576 * puts on M. Bision outfit* OF COURSE!!
I'm now imagining Woona levitating Frostmourne and saying "Snuggles hungers!"
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Woona sleeping with her hooves wrapped around Frostmourne is an even cuter mental image.