Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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I really would love them to talk to those ghouls in the museum some more. Let them tell Luna more about the whole Lunar landing event.
Very nice.
Are you going to include any of DLC's in this story? I'm not sure how it would work out but that's just because I have never played Fallout 3; it would be cool to have them though
Ah yes, Luna/NMM takes her first step in the long and painful path that is realisation.
Actually I can see a certain situation up ahead. There might come the time when it will look as if Sarah betrayed Luna (probably when the Enclave goes active) and the mare would be furious but instead of reprimanding her Nightmare Moon will insure her that everything is fine and that Luna should have faith in Sarah. At this point the two (three?) of them already had their share of adventures and side quests.
Moira, dammit, MOIRA!
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... I did it again didn't I?
Ah, Xuanlong Here we come!
And teddy bear in a shopping cart surprise as well?
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You most certainly did.
'Moaria', seriously?
IN Luna's life.
Too big a space, there.
Personally, I'd start it with "Meanwhile, Sarah"
I think it would've been nice to see a bit of that tour, to let Luna understand Sarah a bit more and what her home life was like.
Luna*
It was a nice, quick, chapter. I assume that Prime and Jiggs sidequest is something that's going to be addressed later (try not to forget). What I would've liked, though, is Luna listening in and commenting on the speech terminals (at least one of them) of the Vault-Tec showcase vault. Although most Fallout fans know about that stuff, it would've, like I said before, helped Luna understand what Sarah's life might've been like, then she could use it later to try and relate in some way.
I really love how you have Nightmare Moon fixated with the idea of conquering Equestria, mashed up against Luna's changing ideals. It provides a stark contrast that adds a whole layer of meat to this story. Awesome work !
I think the Nightmare is beginning to realize how futile fighting Celestia would be...
...But we will see in due time, won't we?
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Yep, expect there to be a lot of that, can't drop it on her all at once.
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Thanks
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I have plans, but what those plans are... you'll find out eventually
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I won't forget, in fact there is a specific time I have in mind for when all that type of thing will be tackled.
Now that you mention that, that's a good idea... I should have done that! Oh well; I moslty glossed over it because I couldn't find a transcription of the overhead speaches and they only played once for me in game so I decided to give it up as a lost cause.
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Yeah, searching for walkthroughs for that specific part is very annoying. It took me an hour to find an audio transcript of James talking to "you" about Megaton exploding. :x
Don't forget to name the location they head to Get the Xuan Long Chinese assault Rifle Joury Street Metro, they don't have to worry about regular super Muties or The raiders hiding in the metro itself. Though there might be a few Talon Company Mercs Waiting for them there. I really wonder how you're going to portray Fox in this run through? I can't wait till Sarah Gets the Assault Rifle of Epicness.
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I belive it... I had to actually go into the museam and listen to the recording of the auditorium seven times in order to get it all down. Anyways, glad you liked the chapter
A question though; am I making Sarah and Luna's freindship progress nicely? I'm usually a little off at these things and I'd like a second opinion.
3532797 Fair enough.
3532455 Oh you little piece of mechanical junk, better hope that I dont find you. Because if I do Im going to rip your spine out and beat you to death with it!!!
( Yes, I play Warframe)
Solid chapter, I liked it.
Though it was no Red vs Blue Super mutant parody.
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I personally think Luna could speak a bit more during idle bits. They seem to quiet and reserved during combat. There's no rushing to survive, here. I get that mutants are dumb, but, they do learn. I assume these are just the grunt mutants and not the brutes, so, I can shrug it off then.
Personally, I'd like to see some injuries taking place soon. Or maybe them just camping out in the Monument and gazing at the night sky (they're high enough to actually see it). It'd be nice to see.
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Also, Luna can then see Sarah actually appreciate the night sky. Listen to Sarah talk about it and what it makes her feel like. Luna just recently heard that humans appreciated the night (at least Sarah) and even went as far as to go to the moon. So, it'd be great to have something about that.
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I think I'll do that next chapter, great suggestion
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Why you delete my posts?
Nvm
I have a feeling that moony would just fawn over the boomers.....Or be one.....hunh,Yeah,Moony's basically just a boomer who likes other things too,but still is awed by the mini-nuke
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Might be a problem, given that the Boomers are a few thousand kilometres to the west of them (and may or may not be established at Nellis yet, depending on the timeline).
Still, nice chapter. And nice touch at the end. It'll be interesting to see the nature of Nightmare in this storyline..
3534041 im giving a what if scenario....And plus,Fo3 and New vegas are like 4 years apart canonically if i remember my lore
ha if DLCs are included sarah/Lunas reaction to being taken by aliens will be...... FUNNY AS BUCK!!!!!!!
Hooray for Luna being amazed at our technology and space travel! Must have more please.
I can't wait to see Luna's slow realization over the course of this story. One more excellent chapter read.
3533683 Because he has every right to do it.
3533673 Sry for that.
3535701 He did. This conversation shall move to your user page !
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It's no prob guys, I understand how it is sometimes (That being said, don't do it again and don't bother replying to this)
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Okay. I won't reply. (he lies)
...Huh, this idea actually came to me one time when I was taking a exceptionally good dump.
Thanks for the story!
Still, I'm a bit puzzled with this one:
Shouldn't it be morning, as of "sunrise"?
By the way, it's not 'unconsciously,' it's 'subconsciously.'
Unconscious means asleep. Subconscious means below conscious thought.
Interesting. I like it, it would appear Luna, and perhaps Nightmare are having second thoughts about waging war on their sister... hmm.
I like it ^^ good work on this chapter :)
I foresee a painful ending to this story :(
Keep it up! ^^
You know... there is an odd beauty to be found here, she observed quietly as the sun's dying light illuminated the large domed building.
Funny thing about that sentence is that long before I read it I was thinking about how you could find beauty in an apocalyptic setting, watching the sun set over the destroyed buildings.
On an Xbox, you are lucky I even bothered, but it is imputiny (or however da fuck it is spelled) not impurity ( control F, wish all the other authors got the memo)
4377019 thought the same in a sad haunted way
Glim glam grammar grams
It always seems to hit her shoulder.
I think you mean "impunity".
Damn, no moment with the spacesuit and such?
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Yes, after all; beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
nightmare moon being reformed by just observing humanity