Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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The car motor flail was in concept art but scrapped in the actual game. Can't imagine how hard that would have been to program properly.
Also, I think the chapter should have been called "Pew Pew Pew"
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No, just "Pew Pew" cuz then it references the Sarsaparilla Star Caps Reward Laser Pistol. It's awesome.
Oh the mini nuke launcher, I love those things so much fun to blow up Legionaries with them.
Just wondering, do you have all the laser rifles acting as lancing/cutting weapons instead of burning weapons like real lasers? Or was the super mutant's appendage dismemberment from the arm being burned off by the laser?
Thats the Super Mutants and BoS so far.
Now we need the Enclave.
I remember the first time I fought that behemoth, at the time I had Dogmeat with me, and that little dog tanked that monster while I wailed at it with a chinese assault rifle I got beforehand. Kinda strange considering the amount of armored bodies lying around the battlefield. Also only found out about the nuke launcher after the damned thing was dead as I didn't hear Sarah saying anything about it over the curses I was shouting.
No we don't. They all dead or in hiding. Fallout 3 enclave never happened nope
YEEEEEESSSS that epic fight plus Luna amazingness equals the best thing of all time 10 of these for you dear writer
Er... it's "gnat" not "knat"...
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HELL YEAH!!! TIME ZONE DIFFERENCE!!!
THE PACKMASTER IS PLEASED!!!
I suppose the chapter did end with a bang
I'm going to take a random guess and say that this is supposed to be fist and that you want some commas there(marked in bold). Other than that awesome chapter. I remember the first time I fought the Behemoth, it was a whole bunch of kiting while yelling phases such as "WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT THING!?" "OH GOD IT HIT ME!" and "I'm dead I'm dead I'm dead I'm dead". Then I grabbed the nuke launcher and missed. I was so pissed at myself. I still killed the thing but I refused to forgive myself until I managed to kill the one in the Dome with a burst from my Minigun.
3410187 now imagine luna taking the mini nuke launcher as a side weapon.
Heh, the first one of those things I killed I used all light arms and minigun fire. I don't think I ever ended up using a missile launcher or mini-nuke that entire game.
God chapter, though most other peoples wanderers would probably wait several months and loot everything from the wastes, then go see three dog. Also, you should have Sarah abducted by Mothership Zeta.
3409908 Probably wouldn't be too hard, just add a collision mesh around the head and have it run a damage script that causes damage to the target relevant to the force and mass of the impacting engines.
Commas could be moved.
Sarah, on the other hand, switched to her hunting rifle, and began to bring the gun to bear on the mutants.
Fired.
What angle is she shooting at? I can believe this if she was facing the mutant. Not if she was at the side of the mutant. If it drilled through its right eye, it'd most likely just cause it to go blind.
On top of that, these mutants are pussies. Like, I know the game is different from reality, but these things are built to resist damage. I don't think a .32, of all bullets, would cause its head to explode.
That's just me.
The blonde woman looked around in surprise before spotting Sarahwho was crouched in the shadow of the subway stationand giving her an unreadable look.
Easy, tiger. I think you mean "nothing."
I don't get the need for the second part of this sentence. I think it can be tossed, to be honest. Or add some detail about her pain.
Just say "where Sarah was hiding."
[quoteUnfortunately, that once more made her a target for several of the creatures and she bullets began impacting off of her armor once more with a loud clattering sound.Unfortunately, that made her a target for several of the creatures once more, and the bullets began impacting off of her armor with a loud clattering sound.
"Fine, you and your pet can tag along, local,[...]"
As Sarah and Luna reached the group, several of the soldiers turned to face Luna, and she felt their gazes staring at her from beneath their helmets.
Meanwhile, Sarah was busy attempting to kill the mutants above them.
This implies that lasers have a drop off, like bullets. I'm no scientist, but, I believe that's not how light works.
Brotherhood troops who were, for the most part, pinned down behind stacks of sandbags.
If it turned to fire on her, why'd it pull out its sledge? If you add a line about it running out of ammo or something, it'd make sense.
“That’s the way things are out here, Sarah,”
Sarah, on the other hand, wasn’t so fortunate.
I liked the chapter, for the most part.
3410699 Yes, but as a flail, the physics and animations would be incredibly hard to tune, as even in real life it can be incredibly hard not to hit yourself with one of those.
I'm guessing Nightmare liked that mini nuke.... i can see her drooling again.
3410842 Its a super mutant,Whos saying they WOULDNT hit themselves with them?
3410939 I suppose it could be interesting, but there is still the issue of flail physics being so weird that it's almost impossible to hit something with non-intelligent animation sequences. There is a reason so few games have flails.
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Actually, I think he meant 'naught'.
Means about the same thing as 'nothing', but it sounds cooler, though.
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Fuck that,i think she came just by looking at it.
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We'll get to them eventually
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Why thank you
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Thanks for the corrections, my brain sucks at that stuff Glad you liked the chapter
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Heh, so can I
Good chapter, you write the fight scenes pretty well.
I really hope that Nightmare doesn't manage to bring nukes and lasers back with her if they ever return to Equestria.
On another note...
Even though it said it was in Nightmare's voice, was I the only one who heard it in Piccolo's voice from dragon ball Z abridged? Luna followed the advice much better than Gohan ever did though...
3409960 I hardly ever use it myself. Too much power, not enough enemies that would warrant that power, and the Big Guns skill gets put in the back seat most of the time... Until I get Vengence of course...
3410084 Didn't find out till the thing was dead... Yup, happened to me too.
And then Sarah will teach Luna/Nightmare how to work the laser rifle and she'll be like
And any that stand before them will die in burning agony before they become piles of ash.
i dont want to sound like im nit picking but in fallout 3 super mutants are more yellow than green
DC
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Classic
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Eh, I looked up "nought" and it said it's the number "0." It could be implied as the word "nothing," yeah, but I think just outright saying "nothing" drives the point home.
I'm pretty sure those were my exact words upon encountering the behemoth. Anywho, this chapter is the best by far, in length and in enjoyability. I do like how more conversation between Luna and Nightmare Moon took place, especially how NMM was helping Luna fight the mutants. The one thing that bothers me is how Luna keeps charging into battle. I understand that she only has a sword, but you'd think that common sense compounded with Luna's experience would dictate, "Sword + Charge < Bullets + Sledgehammers." I honestly think Luna would excel at sneaking, with Nightmare Moon giving warnings or helping her when shit hits the fan. Although, now that Lulu has a wazer wifle that might be a different story. Up to you, I suppose. Keep up the good writing!
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i'm actually partially colorblind... so to me, they are green skinned
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Luna keeps charging in because she's used to having super light highly enchanted armor on... she still hasn't quite adjusted yet. Once she remembers what it's like to not have that I immagine that she'll be more stealth focused
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According to Google, when used as a pronoun, 'naught' actually means "nothing".
It's an archaic word, but still correct in its definition.
3410084Once broken steel came out Dogmeat became the most overpowered literal son of a bitch ever in gaqming
3412797 I was playing the GOTY edition so there's that, but Dogmeat was still red lining before I finished the fight as my guns were pitiful at the time.
3410842 Chivalry doesn't seem to have that problem, if anything the flail is OP.
3413436 Good point, good point. Hmm. Must have been rigid animations or no self-collision.
MOAR!
Anytime Sarah Summers says her name I imagine a weather woman.
It would appear as if Luna's tactics need some modernizing...
I demand a funny and serious conversation between Three Dog and Luna. One thing I think would be interesting is if Luna's demand for a Night Everlasting changes overtime due to her experiences here.
3412314 Oh, I remember that one.
There was that one time with Ethen meeting Faust when you said her mane was brown.
But honestly the SMs from F3 appeared green for me aswell. Might be because I switched off Post-Processing.
Another great chapter well done my friend :)
Luna is kicking some major ass! legit, I can't wait to see her use a gun ^-^
And I love the Fat-Boy, that is one majorly awesome weapon alongside the prototype which is thrice as epic! :D
Keep it up!
3411847 When I see the comparison I truly realize how much of a failed experiment the DC mutants are.
OH i got ten bits says luna orgazamed over the fat man
"that sounds really wrong without the right context"
Chp 8
And that's a 'like' for the punny author's comment. I kinda wanted Luna's intro to go a little something like this.
Lyons: Who and what is this?!
Sarah: "Who's this? This is Luna. She's the Princess of Equestria and ruler of the night. She's here because of...... Magic?
Luna: Magic.
Sarah: Right, magic.
I like to turn random scenes into odd comedy bits. Fun story so far. Interested to see how you resolved the Luna/NMM issue.
Graham crackerz
"lopping"
I wonder why Daybreak didn't return to Luna's scabbard.
Y'know... Luna has a horn. She can BE the gatling laser.
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Nice reference to the season 2 finaly
Dear god.