Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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new threat to equestria or just some asshole waster?
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They are adorable, aren't they?
Please please please tell me you plan on including the Mothership Zeta DLC? I realize that it's not very realistic, but the reactions would be priceless.
me gusta Wandering moon it is so awesome
The heck is space battles?
4195987 Its a forum with a lot of good Scifi Fics on it. Or at least that's All I've ever seen on their.
Change to
Flows better, y'know?
I enjoyed this chapter immensely. I mean, Reilly's Rangers is my favorite quest in the game, but I really enjoyed how you fleshed each character out. I had actually forgotten that Carl and Reilly were a thing, and Donovan's observations at the end of the chapter brought a good laugh. I also took notice to Nim's comment on how doing good felt good. That adds a layer of character development which is crucial to the plot as far as I can tell. However, some of the romantic banter between Luna and Sarah felt a bit forced, so I'd try to chisel it out a bit. It doesn't detract from the story, though. All in all, this chapter gets a DIE PUNY HUMAN/10.
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Pretty much, though that is mostly for the creative writing section of the site. There's other sections as well to the forum (SB Main has had long running MLP threads, both discussions and picture threads). In fact, several of us FiMFiction authors hang out there.
Speaking of, thank you for the compliment ed2481. Sadly though, due to site rules not letting NSFW stuff (mainly sex) to be linked, I'm no longer allowed to give links to this story over there.
That said, I've been enjoying the last few chapters, so keep it up.
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Which llines in particular? I'm still trying to figure out exactly how they should address/talk with each other now so feedback on that would be great.
As always, thanks for the review man
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Awww, that doesn't seem very fair, it was only one chapter... oh well. Who am I to argue about the rules of a site I don't use?
Anyways, it's nice to know that you've been enjoying it, I haven't heard much from you for a while and thought you might have left.
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You can still put the title of the story along with the author name right? That's enough for Google to find it.
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That portion felt awkward as all hell. I get that Luna was worried about Sarah, but this paragraph felt like you pulled it just to get some 'feels' in there. Luna knew Sarah would live, anyways. That being said, it wasn't overdone, but it definitely felt out of place. This is of course, only my opinion, and I'm ruthless when it comes to romance, so take it with a grain of salt.
Well said. Very well said.
So which did reward Sarah choose? Please tell me she got the armor, that thing is friggin' wicked.
4196745 Everyone should feel happy when that place goes up in mushroom cloud-shaped joy.
Awesome, no epic battle but that's understandable ^^
Good work on this once more my friend ^^ legit :D
Heheh, too tired X3 and Butcher and Reilly? hmm, I like it ^^
Good work again :)O keep it up!
I know 'm a bit late but didn't one of the Rangers Die? I could have sworn there was an optional objective to recover his body.
4386218 Yeah, Theo. But they came in from the roof, not ground level, so they never came across the corpse
4386218 it was to get the ammo crate on his dead body for the other three squad mates.
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I was sarcastically humming "Star Spangled Banner" in my head. Mostly the part about bombs bursting in air.
Dammit I got to play DLCs or I may will get spoilers
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Oh no!