Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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I'm a bit confused here, is this a little bit of an AU story as well? Seems kinda like it what with the whole queen thing. Love the hint that Clover is an ancestor of Twi's. Can't wait for more of this
This chapter came out as soon as I finished chapter 4. LIKE A MOTHERFUCKING BOSSARU!!
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It is a bit AU, but then again we know almost nothing about the rule of Celestia after Luna was banished so I suppose we won't know until season 4 starts
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True enough... Please tell me I'm not the only one who squeed a little at the thought of Luna getting some more attention in cannon, even if it's just to show how she became Nightmare Moon.
OOH, BURN.
Hmm, I would have though that Clover would've been hot for Tia. Guess not.
Heh, I get it because he's a thres- Ah, nevermind.
Keeper: Why do I sense some side story alongside Luna's survival in the wasteland?
Me: Yeah ain't that the truth
wait hold on im going to guess the twist in a couple of weeks Luna/Nightmare will get a letter from an old clover the clever addressed to her telling her of her love for Luna before she dies of old age and thats when the reader finds out that time goes diffrantly between Equestria and the Wastes
Enjoyable little read.
No gripes with this chapter.
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Yay, I got approval
I was actually really worried about how people would take this chapter, but overall it seems to be going well so that's good.
so if i get this right if luna had kinky sexytimes with clover then this wouldd of never happened so the moral of the story is have sex or your go crazy and become evil?
Good chapter showing what's going on in Equestria. Are the Timelines in sync though, or is time passing faster in Equestria, since a month has passed already, thus meaning Luna won't have to stay a full 1,000 years in the Wasteland?
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Yes
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You'll see eventually
Well Clover I guess you arent very clever after all. I mean if you had told luna you loved her she probably wouldnt have gone down the deep end. So way to go clover this is all your fault.
3342632 your like god now
Awesome chapter. It just as hard hitting a chapter as I thought it would be from the 1st few lines I read.
REQUEST!
At the end of her adventures with the Lone Wanderer, and having come to terms with her inability to leave, Princess Luna decides to put her longevity to good use and try helping humanity rise from its ashes.
Will this be compatible with your Luna and the shenanigans plotted ahead?
Most likely not.
But, still. If ever in need for a side-story/omake/one-shot What If? concept, that could work.
"...If Tia wants to rule Equestria, then I will let her. I am needed here. Here I am appreciated. I might not raise the moon, or lower the sun, and though I can play with the stars in the sky, the people don't adore me for that. Rather, they adore me for the works I have done for them.. These people are hardy, stubborn, and sometimes cruel... But am I not so, too? If these people are willing take me in and treat me as their own, then I will do everything in my power to assure they are safe. If they want me as their ruler... Then I will rule."
And I probably did that thing again, where I start off with a good premise, then proceed to botch it up in execution. Sorry.
Additional apologies if I misunderstood your interpretation of Luna. In my defense, we haven't exactly seen all that much of her personality.
I can't even base it off of Canon!Luna, since Nightmare is still in her noggin, and this is without her 1000 years of rest/vacation on the moon/sensory deprivation.
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That would be interesting, but probably not what I'm going for
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I thought so.
Like I said, it probably wouldn't fit.
But, hey. The idea's there, feel free to use it if you want.
I am liking this story a lot and I am very interested to find out what happens next. Will you include a trip to the Dunwich Building at all, if Luna/Nightmare haven't seen scary before they will there?
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I'm glad that you're liking it
As for the rest...
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Clover had the hots for Luna, eh? Interesting.
Good so far, I have many fic ideas that will never be utilised after reading this chapter, good job monsieur.
I'm honestly starting to wonder how Equestria even keeps a population if every character is a lesbian practically. Don't ponies ever just have friends/idols; must everything turn into romantic feelings.
this was right on the edge of going into the pit of corny, but honestly I think this chapter was amazing.
the perfect amount of buildup exanation and emotion. so many stories go straight for the crying. you didnt.
What is she, Tumblr?
Awesomely well executed chapter my friend ^^ right amount of everything~
Good show my friend.
Man, I wish could just give Clover a hug. Yeah she'd probably stab me or something but eh, worth it.
Well again awesome work on this, and I just suddenly got an idea for another fic form this one... but I'm worried that if I were to go through with it I would be a copyer ;-;
Well, keep it up my friend :)
3343618 Would it be OK if I actually made a story about that once I finish reading the book?
A few chapters ago didn't the raiders have assault rifles? If that is the case than why didn't Sarah grab a few on her way out. I imagine a gun with sights would perform far better than her current weapon.
You know, it's quite funny to be reading this story after it's finished, and seeing this chapters author's note. No romance tag, heh, obviously something changes. Do look forward to reading more.
Saying the same thing literally the previous line, but slightly differently.
I'm going to fuck up, mutate, and torture your friends. Here, have a glass of chocolate milk! Oh, you drank it? Hooray!
Banana Butt was never a queen.
Still not a queen.
Too much use of the ellipsis in this chapter, it made paragraphs that contained it slightly difficult to read.
4554091 It seems you may have missed the AU tag. Sunbutt can be a queen all she damn wants and it won't change a thing in Equestria Prime.
4443881 The gun is useless without the ammo. Sarah probably sticks with the hunting rifle because it's what she has the ammo for right now. She hasn't been out in the Wasteland long enough to acquire the 5.56 rounds or the caps to buy them.
4554091 Sun Butt do what Sun Butt do. It's like Pinkie, you don't question it
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Clover the clever is Twilight Sparkle's ancestor isn't she?
And that's the tree of harmony, isn't it?
Damn, im such a fantastic detective due to realising what these very obvious things were pointing towards, its great. isn't I?
Les Grammarables
This just in; Celestia is dead. I repeat; Celestia is dead.
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Magic.
I am weirdly hoping that we get to see more of Celestia and her ward in the future. I want to see them interact, be in situations together, talk, all that jazz. I have no idea why this appeals to me so.
It seems that Celestia's love of tea is such that it's leaking out and infecting her vocabulary.
"Reads authers note" no romance tab huh man wonder how long it took to change that
just wondering, why do they assume it's a parasite? i mean, i know that it was in cannon, but couldnt luna have just developed a split personality? it would be a definite possibility, what with the emotional stress she was under, especially in this story. the elements didnt banish the nightmare parasite because there WAS no parasite to banish. it just sounds like an excuse celestia and clover came up with to deny how much of it was really their fault
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Apparently Nightmare was some form of dark magic manifest into a second form. Being inherently evil due to being created from negativity.
Mahatma Gandhi at one time said to a Hindu man whom had killed a Muslim man. That to find forgiveness, he must raise the Muslim's son as a Muslim and become the father that he had stolen. I'm paraphrasing of course but I believe that Celestia is doing the same thing here. She stole the nightmother from this child of the night and now as penance will raise him as such. Not to love the day, but to thrive in the darkness of the night.
It reminds me of what Watcher said in FO:E PH regarding mistakes that cannot be undone, "You do everything you can to make up for it, knowing that you will never succeed in getting rid of the guilt. You devote yourself to spending every second trying to do better despite the fact that it will never be enough. And you pray with every single good act that you do that somehow, when your life is over, that you came close to making up for the wrong you committed."
*Looks at tags and sees Romance set as a tag*
Hmmmmmmm.......
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Plans change, and sometimes a writer finds characters doing what they want, regardless of planning or intended outcomes.