Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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... YES.
I would have gone for a kick..
Ah , I was hoping for the evil option. I mean, I know you said it wasn't in Sarah's character, but it's not like her to be that observant. Dat character development would've been swaggy. Bah, whatever. Despite that, this is the strongest chapter you've written so far. You nailed the reaction to seeing Tranquility Lane for the first time perfectly, and the description of the place itself was graphic, which is always welcome.
But, I think what really made this chapter pull together was how you made Sarah slowly have to drag herself through each of ordeal, with Nim watching sadly. Sarah's anger slowly boiled over, which showed that she still had morals, even though she gave some of them up in her quest for her Dad. Despite the absurdity of the situation, you managed to keep Sarah in character in all the right moments. Although, when Sarah introduced Luna, you showed a soft spot in an otherwise iron character, which I loved. James's reaction was priceless, and I had to clean Dr. Pepper off my screen (thanks a lot) because his comment about the Grognak comics made me do a spit take. And finally, Luna's dialogue was the bow on the present. Lesbian Interspecies Romance/10 would read again.
glad to see she didnt have to go down the dark karma path. I hated having to kill the citizens of tranquility lane. Also I think her dad was maybe a little bit to understanding of her and lunas relationship. I mean he didnt even blink twice before he just excepted it.
I just wanted her to do the evil ending cause it could've been used as character development. But in this electronic world of words, you are God, so do as you please
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Awww, thanks man Glad to hear that you found so much to like/love
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In this case he'd just finished being turned into a dog and was still coping with the fact that he was a man again. Added to that his daughter who he hadn't seen in several weeks just tackled him and then began crying into his arms and 'father mindset' took over. Or, those are the reasons that I thought he'd be having, I could be wrong. (don't forget that he probably heard about Luna and Sarah traveling together on the radio)
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Maybe she isn't observant enough to know that on her own, but, she did live in a vault as a security guard for most of her life. She's bound to know this stuff.
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And, uhhh... Well, spoilers but he was looking at the GECK for the water purifier, and the GECK is uhhh... The GECK literally can create a Garden of Eden-esque paradise from a patch of radioactive dirt. That's pretty impressive.
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G.E.C.K
Garden of
Eden
Creation
Kit.
That was a nice chapter. I think you handled Tranquility Lane really well, especially how you made it so that Sarah probably wouldn't have made it through without Nim. It really makes it clear that this isn't a fic where they just happen to be traveling together, Sarah and Luna/Nim actually need each other.
Also, that ending . Well done, sir. Well done.
you know, i was pretty damn sad today considering my cat died, but this chapter did pick me up a bit (still sad tho), humor always helps me out. so thanks bro.
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... Yes. I know. I played Fallout. Not everybody, however, knows the acronym, and even so it's still useful to be reminded of just how powerful it is.
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Goddamnit, now i'm going to have to use that at some point just because of how epic it is.
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Just doing the Lord's work. Praise be to
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Her will be done. Amen.
I think Nim should stay in Sarah. That way they can all communicate between themselves.
That, and it would be funnier.
funny thing...she was eyeing the horses while imagining them as princesses.
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I'm going to second the applause for that ending, priceless.
>fence
Well that brings to mind some...things.
When the end comes, It'll be with tears because of how this story went out
The first thing I did in that sim was talk to everything except Betty.
And once I had found the right combination for the fail-safe I went to do all of the quests for Braun.
Dropping giant chandeliers on house wives and slaughtering a neighborhood with a rolling pin was really quite pleasent.
Then I remembered I left my XBOX on and had to go through Brauns quest.
Horse princess works too.
Oh Sarah and nightmare fun... Cant wait to see it happen.
Great chapter. I like this story and I'm really grateful of your quick updates.
BTW I found a typo:
3984772 Braun svitches W's for V's, because he has a Germanic Accent.
Luna and Sarah can have children, if luna used a pergancy spell on both of them that can get luna or sarah pregant and still be story driven.
Very nice chapter, though part of me feels sorry for Sarah with what is going to happen next.
Of course, that also means that we might be getting closer to a confrontation between Luna/Nim and Amata...
I'm an evil evil person. I did all of Braun quests then I activated the fail safe, and then laughed through the entire thing since I knew up until the fail safe that they wouldn't die. Loved the Chinese invasion sim, reminds me of the gear I keep stealing from the anchorage reclemation simulation.
even is he is just a character, for all i care Braun can spend the eternity on that hell, called "Tranquility Lane".
yes, i hate him and i gladly took the mesiah road.
All I can think of is Fang from Dave the Barbarian saying I'm not a monkey!
Hahahahahahaaha! XD I love it! Braun, such a dickhead.
Good work on this chapter my friend and awesome show! :D
And such lolz! XD I love it!
Keep it up!
4330916 I would punch him in face and he'd set my ass on fire. Slash him in the face he'd set my ass on fire. Still didn't stop me from doing it 20 times.
You have a magical sword...... couldn't you just cut them out¿
“And thank God you came for me... otherwise I’d still be on four legs,”
Luna: "And WHAT is wrong with having four legs!?"
"Holy shit a talking horse!"
4852918 Sure, take an enchanted magic sword to a super computer connected to your lover via literal plugs in her head and neck without knowing thing one about human neuro chemistry in a world with limited to no magic to heal your self, never mind another entity. That wouldn't kill her out right. No, based on her odds, she would wind up in a vegetative state, trapped in her own mind. Because Luna certainly doesn't know computers at all. Pretty much the same reasoning why Sarah didn't do it either. After all, dead men tell no tales.
That scene was like a really fucked up mixture of Pleasantville and A Wrinkle in Time. Spot on, since you didn't butcher either.
You know, for a wastelander with a combined (ghoul, human and super mutant) kill count of several dozen ...
Congrast on punching out Braun, I want to do that every time I do a play-through.
When I got to Tranquility lane, I didn't have a high enough speech skill to make the kid cry verbally, and I couldn't bring myself to attack him, so I went almost immediately for option B (without even knowing about it till the old lady told me)
I figured that there was some sort of fail-safe or different option, but I didn't know what it was, until I stumbled across the old woman. From there, trial and error lead me to the fail-safe, with no karma lost.
Looks like Liam Neeson is in for a hell of a ride.
(If you get this joke congratulations) *gives a cookie*
I thought that too till I was nuked for hitting 'god'
You know I got through this without listening to the fool.