Today isn't just an ordinary day. At least, not for Scootaloo. She has everything planned out perfectly. She'll play with her friends, they'll laugh, they'll have adventures, and it will be the best day ever!
Won't it?
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(Written before Season 4, so some parts of the fic have and will be made non-canon. Not going to tag AU, since the fic was complete before this information was available.)
No please no don't this to me
*Feels mode activated*
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
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Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to celebrate the memory of Manes' feels. Manes' feels were very nice, and never harmed any pony, but they were unceremoniously slain by an inconsiderate fanfic author. May they rest in peace.
But seriously though, thanks for the comment and like! And don't worry, part 2 is a whole different type of feels mode.
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Great job man can't wait until part 2
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Oh man, got me right in the feels...
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My feels have been repaired. Thanks for sharing this with me.
And why no OC's in your next story? OC's are useful.
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Glad you liked it! I have a story currently going that has 7 OCs and had some... interesting... feedback. May have something to do with one of them being an Alicorn lol. But hey, some people can't tell the difference between a Mary-Sue Alicorn and one that is highly flawed. Meh
What I'm doing with the next fix is a reinterpretation of one of the most hated MLP characters in an attempt to explain his actions. Also, it's rather funny, if I do say so myself.
Doc
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Thanks! I think...
Anyways, have a moustache!
Doc
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Thanks! Keep it up!
Comedy and Sad are hard to juggle. Well done.
Question: How does no pony know about the fire? Has Scootaloo been sleeping in the club house all this time?
I only thought of it after, but it does seem to be the one plothole blip in an otherwise charming story.
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I really wasn't planning on going in depth with her backstory. I decided to just leave her past open for interpretation instead. This was really just meant as practice for me in writing a genre I've never touched before (Sad).
Thanks for the comment and fave bro! Glad you enjoyed it!
This is so sweet and sad. Well done!
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Thanks Dotter! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Yay! Thanks!
Well u did a good job got me right in the feels
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Thanks bro!
I cri everytiem
Oh. Oh.
You made me feel things. Good job.
Thank you for this epilogue. I prefer d'aawing at things than feeling at them.
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!