Wow. Just, wow. I love this little ending. Short, but sweet. I am really sad to see Flutters serve time for something that was only really remotely her fault But all good things come to an end. Thank you for finishing this The Mystery Fluttershy Fan. It has been an honor to read this story

a respectible piece of horse porn if i do say so myself well done

also any thoughts on possibly doing a sequal eventually because i have some ideas

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If anypony would like to write their own sequels I would be honoured.

I'm a bit burned out on this and look forward to writing something different. So no plans on a sequel although ideas for one do go through my head.

Not a happy ending, but a satisfying one.

...jeez, how long has it been since I remember seeing this fic first put up? In fact, I'm not sure if I remember seeing this somewhere else before it was even on fimfiction.

You finally complete it. Wonderful!
And I'm already excited about continuing of Maretress.

3255462 i just might grase this story with a sequel filled to the brim with the ottermost love and respected

im thinking of a two part story the first being the year of imprisonment and h the second being the rejoining of society with much less rape and more tender love and affection

if i do take it upon myself ill be pm you so you will still be very much involved and have a say so in the creation and presentation of the fic

That.... was...... AWESOMENESS pure 100% AWESOMENESS good work dude

(Stands up and claps.) Bravo my friend. Bravo. This was one of the first fics I started reading when I first became a brony, I've looked forward to this for a very long time. Keep at it, you have a gift with words.

Excellent work, been following this from the start.

After an eternity its finally complete. Epic.

and seeing that ending, I don't regret giving this a thumbs up.
It's not a perfect happy ending but a satisfied 'things will heal in time' one.
The perfect happy and perfect sad endings get old so it's nice to see a middle ground.

Thank you for writing this

Well I have to say this has been one of the more interesting rides I've been on for a story, and especially for a clopfic.

well i guess thats an ok ending. still raised my mood after last chapters rage fuel.

Man, I feel... kind of emotional, to be honest, to know that this story is finished. It was the 4th pony fic I ever read (I've only been a pegasister since March 2012) and it instantly drew me in (probably because I'm the most perverted girl the world has seen). Now that it's over, I'm thinking back to how good I found this when I started it.

Thank you, TMFF I enjoyed this story very much.

:D

That was quite awesome.
Good ending too. Though Celestia acted tiny bit weird, but not unbelievable

noo Fluttershy in prison

Well done, a unique story with a twist. It took forever to complete, but it's done and good.

I absolutely loved this story. Its very emotional and all the haters are just jealous of your awesome work. Haters tend to take everything out of its purpose. The Mystery Fluttershy Fan rocks!

YAY its finally complete i can die in peace

just want to say this was one of the greatest fanfics i have ever red it was so good that it is cupcake territory

i diddent think i would like the ending but i did you have done a good job and i do feel that justice was done in the story with out blood or murder wich is what i think everybody was expecting^^

i do think there is still some stuff left to be resolved its up to you but i think you should make another 1 or 2 chapters of what happens next i know you said you will proberly make another clop one its just i think something should be shown of how fluttershy fits back in withe the ponyvill if she does does she get together with blue blood? will twi always hate and never talk to ? what about sweatie bell and rarity will they get back together? something like the main 6 finally getting back together or something.

well its your call if you dont want to i will understand ill just let my mind fill in the blanks

thankyou for making this great fanfic it was truly amsing and i will never forget it i will always remember that big plot twist with fluttershy never saw it coming^^ i will defiantly read your new fanfics.

From your greatest fan

The wait is over

Ive been waiting so long for this! Thank you, Thank you!

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She acted like Trollestia, Didnt she?

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10/10. Favorite clopfic so far. :)

i loved this story my only problem was twords the end it seemed like it was gettin very rushed, redblood would have been put in jail, rarity and fluttershy woulda got community service or jail time as conspirators, while twilight may have lost her respect for celestia as her ruler she would have indefinitely still respected her magic and remained her student, celestia doesnt do things like that on a whim she would have stopped it before it got that bad unless something interfered, and i really dont like the thought of ending it with sweetie belle apparently hating rarity i can understand bein upset with her for a bit like a couple months at most but its just not like sweetie belle to never forgive her especially since what rarity did helped her in the end.

Nice Gilbert gottifried refference

Roses are red,
Violets are blue
This is best story
Do you agree with me too?

Seriously guys, I love these stories!

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Shut up. The story is PERFECT the way it is!

Sequel ..now

frankly I find the entire concept of this story demented and wrong .

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dont come trollin me its a waste of both our time

dammit, i was listening to some sad piano song while reading and couldnt stop thinking she was gonna kill herself before her time in jail was over >_<
THAT would have been a dark ending. "if you cant accept me for who i am, then i dont want to live with you any more" or something along the lines. And then everyone felt sorry because they killed her for how badly they treated her instead of trying to understand her, plus she's an element of harmony, so a bigger loss for them, And then maybe twilight feels it's celestia's fault and tries to murder her or at least overpower her and put her in the very same jail fluttershy was before her tragic death. Although that might be a bit too much. Maybe just feel bad for the rest of her life. Or maybe Pinkie could go cupcakes and go on a killing spree "because we killed her, so we must atone for our sins" and starts planing everyone's death in terrible and gruesome ways to finally end her painful guilt by killing the last of ponyville inhabitants, herself, in a very poetic way at fluttershy's cottage.......or maybe i should stop thinking before people start yelling at me

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Not for me. If you don't like the story well fuck you and get lost , Cunt

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seriously grow up kid. also you shouldnt admit that actin like an idiot like this isnt a waste of your time, thats just sad. either way i voiced my opinion and facts about the story. i have every right to do so. my opinion is between me and the writer your irrelevant, so im done with you.

3312679 Everypony has a right to their opinion. You won't see me silencing anypony.

People on the other hoof...

Ewwww humans.

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thanks and what do you mean by 'People on the other hoof...
Ewwww humans.' was that a comment about how some people act cause i can definitely agree with that XD

3313149 well everyone who uses this site is a pony right?... RIGHT?

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uhh yeah totally, im not a human...
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3313314 Whew good cuz ponies would never lie.

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yup ponies never ever lie >.>

Dafuq is a Human?

i have read this for a good 4 hours and i really like it so i give thee a like and a fave!

wait... Spike hasn't had a character appearence since the library some million chapters ago

3308800 You see, it's this kind of inexcusable behaviour that gives the fanfiction community a bad name...

<glances at description of fic again>

Oh no wait...

3345929 The first couple of chapters are pretty weak, I'll admit. But I've come a long way since my newbie beginnings so I hope you will read more and get caught into the storyline that so many have commended it for.

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Excuse me? Was I talking to you? No, I dont think I was....

3347539 It's a public communication service, dear. I can talk to and comment on whatever and whomever I please. Don't be so smug, darling.

3346155 I'll consider giving that a shot.

Nice ending and considering how many of the fics of this nature end up in death or completely unrealistic circumstances you did an amazing job. It was a fantastic ending and surprisingly enough everypony ended up... bett in the end in a weird way.

Sure SB and Rarity aren't talking anymore. However as you have excellently shown in the last chapter here: time fixes all wounds. Rarity has made sex more open, Twilight still has a teacher (of such old and ancient magic too) and she will be teaching Luna a few things as well (such as speech), Applejack has a worker who will do anything for Fluttershy's happiness, Fluttershy herself has a love and well everyone really just worked out.

Nice job!

I signed up for an account just so I could say how much I love your story and save it. It has a little bit of everything, and a plot twist. Keep it up! Looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future.