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Oh god no....
She better not stay with him, her friends would never allow it...
You are uploading new chapters alot more.
WHY ANGEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that part about him mastrubatin still makes me sad........
1 spelling error i spotted
bleedd
And now for some Downloadable faces. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/yay_red.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png
Where the hell does the Latex Pony get all this power!?
"She was worried she was going to bleedd"
Oh ffs.
It's nice to see Redblood's concern for Fluttershy in this chapter
This story can't get any better, can it?
Clop-wise, this chapter was not the best one, rather one of the weakest. Story-wise... Well. It was an interesting twist. I wonder where you are going with the new hidingspot. Maybe in the middle of the Everfree?
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Aww okay. thanks for being honest, and thanks for commenting on like every chapter.
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Hey, if I have been with a fic from chapter one, I will see it through to the end.
By the way... try and read your own fic, from chapter one through to the newest draft. You will be surprised how much your writing improved, you really got better at this.
What I should add to my criticism: "The Latex Pony" is pretty quick to agree on trying something risky for money she will maybe never see. Is she that desperate? If so, she should show it a bit more, maybe give her a few more solo-lines in the story-chapters. Also, Red Blood always struck me a bit as a man with a plan for everything. I am pretty shocked to see he (seemingly) did not at least plan a quick way out should Fluttershy's friends come and kick down his door.
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Well yeah I have been trying to improve and when my editor is being slow I just want to get the story down while I am in a creative mood and as I said I learn more from criticism on the drafts. Thanks.
I can't make any comments about the storyline until the end for obvious reasons. I may have left some plot holes I haven't thought of. Not sure. Hard to know.
my fans.
"Because I love blood, it fascinates me, scientifically. But if I ever see a living creature losing the precious fluid, It makes me feel really awful, I have a phobia of death, of seeing others die."
Well,Well,Well,Just Wait Until Twilight Kills Him!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_future.png <(I Will,Discord,I Will...)
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png <(Okay!)
Simple clop, which was rather fitting. And if anything, Screw the editor, i honestly dont care about grammar as long as it isnt "flttrshy ws straped on a tble..."
At this point they're just putting off the inevitable with a series of short term solutions. It'll catch up with them soon enough.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
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Just goes to show... even supervillians procrastinate.
I like how there falling in love this is the best story i have ever read you should make a another chapter today
No love, don't do it flutters, respect for life my ass! He uses you for sex and nothing more, he may care about you but that's just because he wants to use you for sex!!! Damn I hope twilight finds, and kills that mo-fo and flutters lives happily like she did before, and not as some toy for him.
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Ever heard of Stockholm Syndrome?
1023399 i do now
Four chapters in less than four minutes?!
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OK, a lot better than Chapter 22. I like how you characterized Redblood some more, that was great. However, it would be dumb if Fluttershy stayed with him. Oh, and Latex Pony is soooo Rarity. Keep up the good work!
I'm hoping that Fluttershy will stay with Redblood,but I know the odds to that are slim to none.
O crap, Fluttershy already loves Redblood. He's probably going to fall for Fluttershy too sometime...
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
1023399 Dude, Redblood's probably going to give in to her soon too... (probably :P)
I read this entire thing without taking a break, I hate and love this story at the same time, I feel so bad for Fluttershy, but I also like this story, guess I'm just a sick person. Can't wait for the next chapter~!
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FUCK YOU REDBLOOD
When are you uploading more chapters? o3o
Nice story btw. This was quite amazing.
redblood go to prison already drop the fucking soap...
was wondering when we can expect next chapter?
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I'm happy you are all looking forward to it.
As usual I don't even know, depends when I feel like writing. Thanks for enjoying it.
^^ lol anyone, i noticed that.
awesome... you broke her
1089137 Explain Rarity leaving early, and Princess Celestia not knowing horse squat about her whereabouts? 'Latex Pony' felt unsure about the dildo wrasslin' match, so it could have been Rarity. Now, bout the magic! Just because something is hidden by the public, doesn't mean it's not true. And about Sweetie Belle, it's not like she's sharing the same fate as Fluttershy, so I don't think she would feel that bad. Sweetie Belle is just being kept for awhile. Also, 'Latex Pony' knew about Scootaloo. Your reasons aren't all too great. Just sayin'.
1066303 Ah, well.. take your time, I can't wait for more!
It's been a while since you posted a new chapter..... just sayin.
I love the plot of it. Just, ohmagod, I don't even normally read clopfics but this, this has a story actually.
Ohmagod, I have mixed emotions, here they are, :pinkie happy: :rainbow kiss: :rarity starry:
cant wait for another chapter
okay, i think i figured out who the latex pony is. i think she's rarity.
Thank you for posting more chapters man, I'm always looking forward to them!
1111113 No shit mahn?
Honestly I find this story both disturbing and impressive. Not sure which is stronger. So good job on this fic and you're also a sick bastard!
Where did you get the coverpic?
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Found it on Google Image. A custom one would be awesome if someone could make one.
You just know that for all of Redblood's security Pinkie will for some reason just be able to appear in there...
Chapters 17-20 have been proofread and edited, don't have time to see how good a job was done. Instead i'm going to distribute them to the clopfic archive and EAD.
Then I should be able to write another chapter today
I want fluttershy to stay with redblood so baaaddllyyy Dx
Another amazing chapter! Well done!
But Only one thing
This is what it is
Hi The MysteryFluttershyFan
LittleMix Here and I am saying you are doing an amazing job!
May I Ask Who drew your profile picture
We all know its redblood
I THINK TEH LATEX PONY IS CELESTIA (Trollestia strikes again! )
REDBLOOD IS BEING CONCERNED AND CARING NOW I LOVE THIS FIC SOOO MUCH NOW