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Chapter 25.
I cried while writing this one....
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If you kill sweetie bell I'll end you.
Damn it this freaken story just kept popping up every time Im on this site and I just had to read it.
You did not kill sweetiebelle... YOU DID NOT
Dont make the latex pony be rarity, it will just make ti shitty
I really hope that Latex Pony isn't one of the Princesses otherwise a certain Author might find Apollos Landing spot if you know what I mean!
What a shame.
She was a good mare. What a rotten way to die.
YES SWEETIE BELLE, DIE!
Otherwise, a VERY well written chapter.
I had to be stupid and read this chapter after finally getting around to reading the my little dashie trilogy. Stupid me!
~ Timid
Yay more sorrow and death! I feel happier now.
~ Scare
I didn't know that unicorns can explode their horns, it's an awful death.
If you kill Sweetie Belle, I WILL END YOU!
Wait a minute...
the ponies getting gray?
the seemingly endless powers?
the easy sending of letters?
The fact that celestia's gone missing?
I've figured it out...
It's... DISCORD!!!
NOOOOO SWEETIE DX She wasn't my favorite, but she can't just die
Liked it. Looking foward to seeing redblood die and NOT sweetie belle.
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I SECOND THIS MOTION! GODDAMNIT!
LIsten up.. MOAR.
Holy mother of sweet baby Jesus, if you kill sweetie belle...
Anyway, great read, I this story MOAR PLZ:
And if Sweetie Belle and Applebloom find their way into redblood's basement... I wouldn't object.
God, I'm going to hell. *LIKED*
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Hmm. I did not mean to imply that Pinkie was becoming anything like she did in the discord episode. I'm talking about her Party of One version. I probably used the word grey too much. Just want to clear that up for you guys.
that was sad but i loved it it made me cry and thats very hard to do keep up the great work
1173046 im about to cry WHY DOES SHE HAVE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!
Well I'm going to hell. I just Faved a rape fic..oh well
I give this 9 facehoofs out of 10! Oh and also
Let us take a moment of respect for Sweetie Belle.
Please don't let her die. Oh please, let the bad guys die, not the filly.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_shock.png Do not let Die!!!
Damn... I stayed up until 3 AM for this cliffhanger at chapter 25? Otherwise, its well written - though I have a natural ability to read through typos like they aren't there, so don't go on that.
Looking forward to more from this. Farewell.
More more more. I love your writing, and where I am its so early in the morning. Not surprised.
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with a vagina?
After reading this entire story:
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I'm crying no sweetie belle why did you have to sing that song it made me cry harder anyways the next chapter is clopping
Kill something no or I'm going to have to go reread this to make myself capable of laughter again
The Eperiments of Twilight Sparkle {http://www.fimfiction.net/story/7435/The-Experiments-Of-Twilight-Sparkle}
Chapter 26? i.imgur.com/McvqU.gif
You gotta make the latex pony either Rarity or Celestia
It'll make the story hella more interesting
13 chapters in, and I really want Redblood to get some form of payback, or change his ways and actually learn something from all this.
It's that kind of stomach-twisting evil you see, but under that evil is something that could actually become good. Not like he COULD become good...but who knows?
Hoping for some kind of bittersweet ending, instead of a lifetime of being his slave.
When are you updating? It's been a while. Also, what were your Google search terms? Also, I've (again) just realized that Redblood is a red and black OC...ha ha!
What a nice suprise. I expected Rape, but this is the first time you put humer in this! Bravo!
Sweetie belle's horn turned out to be as useful as a wooden toaster
I honestly cried while reading this...
1978291 YYYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUUUUUUP
WAIT WHAT
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FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
SWEETIE BELLE NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
1173046 OH GOD........ WHY SWEETIEBELLE WHY NOT APPLEBLOOM (Sorreh )
Is there any reason in particular you hop from third person past tense to present?
Sorry to all you guys out there, but Sweetie dear dying is her own fault.
Frankly I just started laughing a bit.
3436530 ha, I sung I don't care by icona pop...
Singin don't worry, bout' a thing, cuz every little thing is gonna end in flames!!
PINKIE PIE POISON PINKIE PIE POISON
NOT SWEETIE BELLE!!! She is the cutest!!!
NOOOOOOOOOO9OOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
FUCKING TENSES SWAPS!!!! I like this story but come on. This chapter almost entirely switched to present tense. I've been switching all the present tense words with past tense words because this story has been in past tense all up until now.
5413713 Yeah. I'm having the same problem. I think the author just got lazy with these later chapters.