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288234 There is more clopping.
I just finished another clop chapter, enjoy.
I intend to on average have 1/3rd or the story be non-clop. Should I label the chapters for those who don't care?
this thing in the end! I'm sick pervert?
I like the all story not only the clop parts, I can't wait for the continuation Maybe you describe part of this night in the next chapter?
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This:
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It is all good, I just think you are excellent at writing the smut parts ;)
um getting semen in the eye can damage it quite a bit, must hurt like fuck too, this is the only slave and rape story i like, this is the only part i cringed at but its still good...keep it up :D
Hmmm..I wonder... Is their enough space in Redblood's basement for the rest of the elements of harmony? And mabye the princesses? and mabye the Cutie mark crusaders? and Derpy? Or... How many mares live in Ponyville again? Any way NEED MORE!
I would have asked to see an anaconda or bear, have it beat the daylights out of that motherfucker but let him live, make him spit out the key, do the code, exc. Until she was free, ant hen either put him in jail or whoop his ass.
It's official. Redblood needs to die.
"Redblood mounted her and stuck his erect penis in her. He pumped her hard, real hard."
This is almost as pathetic as your attempts at writing Pinkie Pie and Applejack. I see now why you chose to limit your setting to a dingy basement with your shitty OC doing most of the talking. It's because writing Fluttershy takes no effort and you completely fail at representing the rest of the mane 6 (or any believable character for that matter).
Anyone reading this, I suggest you scroll up and search for 'Naked Singularity' instead. Not only is it an example of much better writing, but it is a parody of terrible clopfictions like this one.
Also, why author, are you starting a new chapter every 1500 words? It's stupid.
>On fimfiction
>My little slave
What is this?
>Contains bondage
Ok.
>Non-consensual
HA HA. NO. But I am curious...
>reads everything
Meh.
>reads this chapter
>Angel is comming
LOL. Redblood, you think Pinkie was bad? Angel has no soul.
He WILL notice that everything is wrong and he WILL call for help. And if you try to stop him? Well, lets just say that one does not simply escape's Angel's rage,
But if you do, one week before the royal guard apears on your doorstep. An element bearer cant jus vanish like that.
I am actually interested on how this will end. No pony in town will let Redblood live after this this.
Huh...so I'm not the only guy who favors black coated ponies, however, so far I believe I AM the only guy to make it seem like it a curse, in a nice, almost Hasbro-approved setting. I'm sorry, I rambled, I will now commence my thoughts to very gory and very agonizing murderous ones directed to our anagonist here. I do so ever despise sex slavery, and have constant murder fantasies that would drive one up the wall...but I guess that feeling of hate is something you intended on creating, otherwise, why make such a character? I failed to like the content, but I do enjoy the anger and vengeance that this fills my very soul with (no, I'm not being sarcastic). Thank you, sir.
what the fuck bag shit lemon orange flag spaghetti meatball mango tango sauce?!?!?!
296420 greatest. Response. EVAR!
Maaaaaaybe he over did it
Lemons exploding?
Cave Johnson would approve of this.
Okay I love this story and I'm down for some sad stuff but let me tell you, I hate sad endings and if Fluttershy doesn't get out of slavery by the end of this story I will take it upon myself to annihilate you.
everypony who has not stopped reading after the first chapter is a sick perv...
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OH COME ON!
309680 Good Point
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this..........this...........why am I reading this...............
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Guilty pleasure? Because thats why I'm reading it.
Okay this is off topic but it's REALLY nagging me.
Your OC looks a lot like mine and he has his attitude too .___. Though mine is a psychopathic serial killer and e could care less around rape..... He's black with a black mane with red streaks and his mark is a bloody knife and mine is a Pegasus >___> he's originally human though, so I guess it's sort of coincidental but seriously. Reading this I just picture Sanity and it's scaring me........
1291579 yea, but at least I admit it. Maybe a little to enthusiastic tho.
I wasn't turned on by this....this pain of hers Good story but its dark and sad but good story
The part when he came in her eye made me cringe.
I'm getting no pleasrie from this …so why am I reading it. Have mercy on my soul
1291579 Or trying to learn the weaknesses of their quarry.