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I just realize, the last chapter was a lot like Fifty Shades of Grey...and I didn't realize this immediately...
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Never read that, but from what I've heard it's a pretty famous erotic novel.
Chapter 31. Enjoy.
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I knew Celesta was in on it, but now i'm more confused than I ever was.
btw Can't wait to see Pinkie and the CMCs try to kill Redblood. Even though he's not the main villain anymore i still hate him.
And so the rage will be redirected to Filthy Rich... That will be fun.
I still think it would have been better had it been a true kidnapping, but if you view it as an alternate universe I guess the changes in personality could make sense and by extension the rest of the story.
Yay a new chapter
i love this story
i can't wait to find out what happens to RedBlood, FlutterShy and Rarity
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“Yes, I agree Celestia, but right now my daughter and her friend found the house and I think Scootaloo escaped to tell everypony.
That should be sister, but yeah, another great chapter,
Incoming!
“Yes, I agree Celestia, but right now my daughter and her friend found the house"
I guess that should be sister?
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Oh please no. He's hardly anything to do with this directly.
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Yes but isn't he the one helped made this all come to pass? I don't know I am not even thinking at the moment... Derp.
Okay if this was a more crappy story i would have to bitch about the whole flashbacks inside flashbacks thing. But since it isnt a bad story i will keep my peace... for now.
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In a sense:
He put Rarity to work in a sex shop. Fluttershy approached her during work. They cook up the foalnapping scheme. Now, I'm not certain he's liable for the things that came out of Rarity's idea... But I do know he's not the one who almost raped Applejack.
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True true, but I feel like the repercussions will be far and wide.
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Seconded; that would only be adequate!
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Thanks for pointing that atrocious error out, fixed now.
So, Celestia drained herself of her power to help Fluttershy with her little rape-fetish scheme? I'm sorry, but this isn't getting any better after the trainwreck that was the last chapter.
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i cant wait to see what rarity dose when she finds out about her sister cant wait!
well this can only end well
If they don't kill Redblood then I will find and murder him. Even if this was all Fluttershy's idea.
~ Scare
*sigh* I might not like the direction this turned in but I will see it through to the end, for closure.
~ Timid
okay.... this whole thing just sort of started going down hill a few chapters ago.... oh well... I will still see it through till the end.
I would laugh my ass of if it ended with Fluttershy dating Redblood.
So, Celestia drained her power even after Equestria was invaded by a massive army of giant pony insects who would obviously do it again if givin the chance so that her star pupals best friend could play out her wierd rape fetish? I mean thats OBVIOUSLY what all geat leaders would do, I mean, Im surprised George Bush didn't give free airline miles to Al Quida after 9/11 in exchange for a vibrator. Why dosn't Celestia just slap a "PLEASE INVADE" sign on the border of Equestria and saveus the time? You know, for stating this isn't a trollfic, it's begining to sound more like one every chapter.
this is my reaction
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of course, that's assuming that the pinkie/the CMC or even the pony populace in general doesn't throw her incompetent ass out of office in glorious ponitariat revolution! After all, they'd have the perfect opportunity and the perfect reason for the insane idiocy she lowers herself to and the kind of bourgeoisie scum she allows to populate equestria!
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In all seriousness though, I can't help but agree, and after seeing a lot of the other comments here and on the last chapter i'm starting to that you and me, we're among the only ones on this site that aren't complete fools.
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....and establish Luna in her place.
For a Clop-like fic this has a decent lesson to be learned. One many of us can learn, in a lot of ways it seems like one of those stories you sit and read are like. "Derp, derp, this is a clop fic, derp derp" But not only is it that, but it has suspense, action, and a deeper morale to it. So you have done a good job with this, and either you put a lot of time into coming up with the story or you just know how to write something like this well.
1359433 I find that making up bogus "Deeper meanings" and other shitty theroys help with the hurt that comes from a good Book/game/movie etc having a shit ending. Here are some of my favorites.
1. The story as a whole represents the Mass Effect series, and the stories end represents, well, Mass effect 3's ending.
2. The last three chapters were a dream Fluttershy had while asleep in her cage and the rescue never happened,
3. Fluttershy represents society and RedBlood represents technology, depravity, and other negatives the media has brought upon us and the shitty ending represents how fucked up our lives will become if we don't change and are less reliant on technology.
4. Fluttershy represents America and RedBlood represents China/Middle East, and the ending will show how backwards our lives will become if we don't lesson our need on foreign goods/Manufacturing/Oil and they inevitably either Invade or buy us out.
Please in no way think I actually believe these, but rather am just trying to find SOME solace in this horrid ending to a great fanfiction.
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i still fucking hate redbloods guts and i cant believe I'm saying this...i hate rarity and celestia but i still want red blood to die and be burned and rip to shreds and applejack lost her virginity thanks to that dick of a man whore so i hope she gets to kil him
I KNEW IT WAS RARITY ALL ALONG! I JUAT NEW IT!
I don't care what everypony's reasons are, I wanna see him dead.
I want them to grind his bones to dust while he is still alive to feel it.
I want them to disembowel him and hang his organs from the rafters!!
RAWRGH
I have never been this angry at a pony in any story I've read.
Damn I hope someone skewers Redblood.
I don't know why,
But I LOVE it when Fluttershy gets raped.
Flutterrape is so..fun.
(in applebloom's voice) when's da conclusion coming? i wanit nooooooowwwwww!!!!!
IT'S BEEN A MONTH GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS
please
That was amazing.
I very much enjoyed this story. The format of labeling clop chapters was much appreciated in knowing what to expect when. I am not a big fan of OCs but yours is well written and fulfills his role well. I look forward to reading your next story soon.
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If you look at my profile, my next story has started.
Thanks for the feedback.
...so, when are you going to finish this?
Rarity: Sweetiebelle? What happened to your horn darling?!
Sweetiebelle: Thanks to you it's broken.
Rarity:
Mrhappyface, I agree with you. Not that the story should end this way, but seriously, I don't like how all these Fluttershy fans come here and bombard the comments with hate mail.
Why do you guys like Fluttershy so much??????
EBecK, I love your Venegance Guide.
Well didn't see That coming.
Well I hated the story, yet was drawn to finish it. I must be some sort of masochist. But now after seeing that it was all just some twisted slave rape fetish it seemed to...end out of place. but its still better than butterflys saving the day. Now all I'm waiting for is the distress that Rarity will go through when she sees what she did to her beloved little sister while playing along with this. I must be part sadistic too...wonderful
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Love that story.
1685771 Ah ha thanks
the ending was unsatisfying.