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254701 Wow I actually feel a bit awful that I wrote this. I think I want to take the whipping out of it at least.
I will continue it after I edit the first 2 chapters to be a bit better written.
Okay, I have re-edited the first chapter. I took some parts out I felt guilty about writing, so that I can live with myself. This is my first time writing a clopfic and I didn't realise it could make my conscience hurt.
I just edited and extended the second chapter, in order to set up a cliffhanger for what I'm going to write next. I hope you guys will like it.
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Don't hurt her to much please.
I swear if this ends badly.
A few screw ups but still looking good!
"Her imagination ran across many more things, vibrators, ball gags, but plugs, anal beeds."
anal beeds (should be beads)
"He evidently liked the taste of her vaginal fluid, she didn't to give him more, but no matter how hard she tried she was so horny she could not stop leaking."
she didn't to give him more (you forgot to write "want" in there)
That's all I could find, enjoying it so far, onto the next chapter...
dude give her your all hehehe
"oh I am a bit horny"
WTF
582388 Oh, now she wants to kill dragons with her screams?
257179 Yeah I know it's a 28 week old fic but at the end it has:
"called back too Fluttershy."
it doesn't require the extra "o" in "to".
Fo/r some odd reason, this makes me laugh a bit. Not because I'm a sadist or aything, but more of its improbability and Fluttershy's attitude at the end.
Wow. Just Wow.
ewww...redblood likes urine?!
2164779 It's not urine... it's cum
redblood????? is it like bluebloods oppisite or something???????????????????????????????
sexaaaayI like this how do I like this?
Redblood is the name of the rapist and torturer? Well done sir. You get the creativity award.
wow im 10 and reading this stuf.......................good for me
5916106 .... o_o SHHHHH... dont say that on here! you'll get into trouble... >3>
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so am I!!!!
I have bad news to that guy. That's still rape.
2164779 It is CUM smart one
Well now I have his name, excuse me while I get Redblood's name engraved on a .308 round.