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Interesting turn of developments hahaha.
Suddenly... Update.
Just curious why the update took quite so long, No anger or anything, just curious *still love the story*
Still love the story, but I thought it ended and there was going to be a sequel....
Not going to complain...
And I had already given up hope....
Sorry but this is way out of character for many of them
Good job
You're trying to bring some order back into this story, it had really become ridiculous.
Please, keep going.
This is the most fucked up story I had ever read and yet this interest me in so many ways like
1-fucked up mind in the characters
2- Da Fuq I just read
3-a anal intercourse fetish really
4- ramdom update in 8 months and yes I started reading this 2 days ago and I'm up to date now.
Rather than that I will like and it give u for out of five mustaches. /
Finally an update!
6 months....
I hope the six months is a joke
That was great, even after the eight months or however long it's been, you're as good as you ever were.
Bravo Zulu
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3110012 meh
Certain episodes would show that these would be *approperate* responses.
YEQ FINALLY THANKYOU FOR MAKING A NEW ONE^^
3112944 Did you read my last blog post ;)
3109750 I had ideas for a sequel. But I have too many other stories going that I may never finish.
Looking forward to maybe getting further on The Maretress.
3109683 Wrote a blog post about it basically saying personal issues. Rut in my life killed my creative motivation.
Thanks to everyone who helped keep me motivated to write this story. I would not have gotten past the first several chapters if not for how popular it got.
Speaking of which...
If you look up clopfics by view count...
My Little Slave is on the first page as the 6th most viewed. Woooo!
And yeah there is one chapter left, the epilogue. Will take a week at max, I promise.
Here's an idea: don't treat your subjects like chess pieces. Don't put them into dangerous "tests", just to prove a point. Don't try to shift attention away from the actual problems if your scheme blows up in your face, or shrug them off when they have legitimite concerns, or pull rank once things become uncomfortable for you.
In other words: treat them like friends if you want for them to do the same.
Amazing chapter,Mystery
I cant wait for the next one!
well holy hell, I didn't know it had been so long..
3113722 cant wait for that^^ this was one of the best fanfics iv ever red i hope you make more in the futer^^
I really hope they don't end up kissing and making up. A life-long grudge for the stupid shit they pulled and Twilight being forever mistrustful of Celestia just seems way more satisfying.
Still, it was great to re-read this, and I can't wait for it to be finished and cleaned up~
FUCKING... NEED... TO... RAAAAAAAANNNNNT!
well if this is the end allow me to share my substitute for this "full retard" moment.
Celestia: So far Twilight Sparkle you are failing.
Twilight: I don't think you get this situation Celestia. I am not your student anymore, go find yourself another element of magic and fuck you all i'm out. Applejack you coming?
AJ: Buck yeah.
Celestia: But wait! I had this speech ready that would absolutely piss off off more. Wanna hear is first?
Twi: die burning *teleport*
I mean seriously. what people do behind closed doors is private and all but Twilight and AJ are obviously on the wrong fucking side of the door(TY for that Rarity). Fluttershy you are dumb as hell! Rarity you're right fucking behind! Celestia has gone so far into the Retard zone that the other kids on the short bus are avoiding her! And worse yet is that Twi and AJ are now looking like they are gonna FORGIVE THEM! DAMMIT! please make alt end where some serious blood is shed.
Twilight breaks redbloods limbs, yanks his tail out and leaves him in the basement to die slowly.
AJ beats Fluttershy lifeless and leaves her for dead in the everfree.
Sweetiebelle(or pinkie) axes rarity to death after slipping the remaining tranqs into her tea(or somethin like that)
Luna kills Tia cuz she's trying to force her ideals upon others in the most ass way possible. Luna may have killed people(and maybe i'm just used to it) but at least Luna didn't go "Oh you don't agree with what i say? well I am ashamed of you and you failed the test! IT WAS A TEST ALL ALONG! Yes. This was all a test twilight and not me getting my rocks off. Don't worry twilight you'll come over to my side or your life will get much harder. Least Luna let people die as who they were.
seriously rarity. You are very GENEROUS with other peoples stuff.
Lets see what the payment on this one is shall we?
Weeks of heartache for her friends
Sweeties horn
fuckin digging a hole in the ground to stage this farce
more magic than Houdini could ever make. (i lack magic metaphors, sue me)
and lastly (and I'm really hoping this one) Their friendships. (its really the only realistic ending i see coming)
EDIT: Oh shit yeah I forgot to mention the safety of everyone in equestria. With the princess supplying power she was left vulnerable and unable to protect that completely insignificant KINGDOM should anything come up. Great leadership skills there immortal god princess. truly a mind working for the safety of all. END EDIT!
Well rarity as long as Fluttershy got what she wanted right?
CELESTIA! *sigh* I can't... I just can't EXPLAIN all this stupidity! She has to realize it right? Nobody can exude this much ASS without catching a whiff right?
3127382 dude where did you get that awesome icon?
my thoughts on chap 32 well as i sed on my first comment on this that celestia cant possibly say that this is a test if luna was kidnapped and was rapped and torterd would celestia really do nothing about it and just be ok with the story?
fluttershy is still to blame for all of this i understand if she is in to this sort of thing tell you the truth im not surprised but you never take advantage of your friends feelings twilight has been made in to a wreck she should defiantly not be ok with this and celestia should know better than to let this go on in the first place.
i did expect more from pinkie pie the last chap she was grey and burning with rage i expected something violent to suddenly happen not a comedy scene of pinkie pie jumping in with a cake
and sweatie belle wont ever use magic again i expected a big scene from that
glad the weeles are moving agine cant wait for the last chap
Lawl I'm the 500th up vote.
3120201 You're wrong. The definition of a pony is a horse that is under a certain height, though the cutoff height is a bit fuzzy. A horse can have any build, but if it's short enough, it's still a pony.
A pony is a horse just like a midget is a human.
It's pretty obvious that the writing ability of the author kinda died at some point.
fantastic story
I hope you have a good finish
Wait. Is the story over, because if it is I think it should be changed from incomplete to complete.
3113722 ahem it is 2 weeks later [no hate!]
You should make a sequel when they all get kidnapped and raped by the diamond dogs and their hounds, and Redblood goes apeshit and badass and kills them
3113720 This amazing story is probably one of the best Things i have ever read i literally got so happy for your story that i read the Whole thing with no pause sadly everything good comes to an end i just wish this would never end
unexpected in a lot of ways.
[WARNING: SPOILERS AHEAD. YOU ARE WARNED]
I was at first sickened by the whole idea of Fluttershy, as cute and simple and nice as she was, being raped and dominated to the point of mental and physical exhaustion. I have always loved Fluttershy as a character on the show, as she does reflect a lot of me in a number of ways. (Yes, I do feel a weird sort of connection with this fictitious character) But seeing her becoming hurt and wrecked and literally torn apart by Redblood pushed my limits to the point where I have lost sleep after reading a few chapters at a time. I couldn't stop reading this story though, no matter how much I wanted Fluttershy's nightmare to end. One point for keeping me hooked and interested at something I almost couldn't stand to keep reading.
As the story progressed (Ch. 25 and onwards), I could see what was happening in the story, that it wasn't just another clop fiction, another fetish clop with some random OC. This story had so much depth in it, and managed to develop the characters well, even showing a soft side of Redblood I would have never expected. Another point for somehow making a clopfic, that isn't JUST a clopfic with great characters to boot.
Now come chapter 30, you did the impossible and threw in a "Plot" twist (See what I did there) SO HARD that I nearly broke my neck. I was speechless (metaphorically speaking) and I couldn't comprehend what the hell just happened. That is a bonus point for not only turning a story completely on it's head, but then continuing to flip it in every single direction that just made me dizzy and confused.
On to Ch. 31/32, You seamlessly managed to employ nearly EVERY pony in this grande facade of senseless and selfish acts, each contributing and somehow making a huge impact on the story itself. That is a big point there for weaving a tale that incorporated characters from all over the pony universe.
Finally, I would like to point out how descriptive about everything that happened, how every painstainkly meticulous detail was taken into account. True, someponies in the comments have raged a bit, wondering how Flutters could possibly survive in the cage, needing to take care of certain bodily functions. Now those intelligent enough to read in between the lines, know that you left out thoses part for the sake of the story, and I congratulate you on managing to stick to everything that was written, making up for those small details that would have made no sense to put in. That is a fifth point for being so amazingly descriptive in so many ways, rivaling many great authors of today. Very few are able to sew together a tale that bring together the little things that people will notice, and sticking to them.
All in all, This is going to be a treasured story that I shall want to re-read over and over again. I am truly in love with your work, and I will probably save your other stories, once I am finished them. You mustn't stop now, The Mystery Fluttershy Fan. You have a wonderful talent and I am sure many look up to you, admiring your work as I do.
Final Score: 5 out of 5 scarred-for-life Fluttershys /
*As a side note, I did NOT clop to any of this (sorry to disappoint), I was just to scared to feel guilty, although many chapters I would consider Clop-worthy.
still waiting
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Thank you Slipmat.
I need to stop promising a chapter after a time limit. :(
My access to the computer is very limited at the moment, so I couldn't really find motivation to spend that time writing. But thanks to kind words from so many people about my writing in general, I have a plan.
I've decided I'm going to go old school and actually write drafts of these chapters on YE OLDE pen and paper and then type them up quickly when I have time. This will give me something fun to do when I don't have the computer and hopefully motivate me to finish not just this story, but my others too.
So no promises about when the epilogue will be out, but I'm probably gonna start writing it on paper tonight.
3230540 we completely understand take all the time you need good storys take time im very exited to know how this is going to end^^
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I think I must have gotten confused after a lot of RPing. It's not intentional. Will look into fixing it once it's finished and I start trying to get it more professionally polished.
HOLY MOTHER...! UPDATE! Damn I just, as in 5 seconds ago, recovered this from a kindle I haven't used in 10 months so I could check fics I'd killed. So glad I did!