This story just got alot better!

getting horny of not beeng able to much with blood seeping from her neck and nothing to do... she can mastubate now, can she? hehehe and gone is the boreddom

Fun fact: Horses can sleep standing.

man, that collar is baaaaad :3

Oooo clopfic

Those numbers Redblood said spell fluttershy in reverse
1A 2B 3C 4D 5E 6F 7G 8H 9I 10J 11K 12L 13M 14N 15O 16P 17Q 18R 19S 20T 21U 22V 23W 24X 25Y 26Z

Ok really? Swallowing the key thats a little bit to much.

"many of those author..."
"authors" not "author"

I will read and check for mistakes in every single one of your chapters. I've done it before. I think only 2 ever got featured by doing that. (It gives you views)

SPOILER WARNING

You should probably edit some of these earlier chapters for the ending you came up with. Right now it's pretty clear that Fluttershy has no idea what is going on, so you might want to alter it to be a little more vague on what she's thinking. The clop scene also needs a little bit of work; in contrast to the rest of the story in which we know Fluttershy's POV but not Redblood's, the clop focuses a lot on how Redblood's little stallion feels about Fluttershy's little watering hole, but not vice versa. Maybe vary the POV a little bit on the rest of it, and artfully dance around the fact that it's consensual, and definitely do some research about how Fluttershy's nectar maker feels with a 10 inch proboscis inside of it. Frankly, we female cloppers (it's not just me, right?) need a little more detail than a guy does to finish.

That wasn't clop at all and at the top of the page it said "[clop]"

539302 Yes, but ponies aren't horses.

2960272 Actually, yes they are. A pony is a small horse. Simple as that.

2965373Correction, ponies are different from horses. They have different builds and ponies are generally fatter/bigger boned. There is such a thing as a small horse, they were used in mines because they were small, thin and strong.

"she was so bored she started grting horny" me: "No sleep" ME: "swollowed the key" ME: THIS STORY ME: I'ts FUCKING BEATIFUL (())

When this piece of shit dies, they'll say his death was a big irony.

Because the only thing they'll find is a single drop of his blood.

Also, this guy is paranoid.