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This is it. Chapter 30, it's not the last chapter, but... well...
I guess the comments will speak for themselves. Try not to make them too spoilery. Enjoy.
Oh poor Filthy, with a name like that he falls too easily into the role of a sleazebag villain.
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Okay I want to be angry really, really badly. But I can't, and I want to hate you for taking that away from me, and I also can't do that.
Now it won't be fair to sodomize Red Blood with a piece of coral!
I...just.....DAFUQ JUST HAPPENND??????
I dont know what to think anymore; its just crazy, it does makes sense with rarity, so im goin' to blame Filthy instead of Redblood
my emotions while reading
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MIND MOTHERFUCKING BLOWN!
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Great chapter man.... simply fucking brilliant!
TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXTi1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/210/403/OhCrap.png
Holy....shit......
IT IS ALWAYS THE QUIET ONES!!!!!
Fluttershy is so kinky, I'm real impressed by her.
(Realizes) so Redblood and Fluttershy CAN be together
Fucking brilliant.
You sir, are a hero to me. This fanfiction got sent to me from a friend as a joke. I immediately got sucked in. Hell, I'm not even a clopper but I absolutely love this story, while it became obvious that it was Rarity, the fact that it was all one kinky fetish Fluttershy paid for is astonishing and unexpected in every variation of the word. How they were able to use such powerful magic (and quite often at that) ties in with Celestial completely. Please update this as soon as you can, you have me wrapped around your fingers for more of this story. You best bet I will be reading the rest of your material from now on.
1284974
I would like to congratulate you on being the only commenter in 30 chapters to have guessed even close to the ending I had planned.
Congrats have a Fluttershy as a kinky slave for the night XD.
There are still more chapters to go, but it's mostly going to be tying up loose ends and questions now. I hope you all enjoyed the story and I hope you all follow me onto my next story. This fanbase I have, has inspired me to not stop here, thank you.
Speaking of which, can some artist ponies please make me an original book cover. I stole this image and it's not even very relevant, thank you.
That was the absolute stupidest plot twist I've ever seen. I don't even care, Redblood still needs to die.
On a side note, dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
Well I'm left to wonder what those three will think when they hear what happened to Sweetie Belle because of their shenanigans.
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WE'VE ALL BEEN TROLLED!!!
Holy shit man, this was magnificent. Hats off to you.
ok after a few minutes of cooling down myself i can only say, my good sir, that you got me. I would've never imagine that all of that was actually planed by those 3; still Rarity is goin to lose it when she knows about sweetie bells horn and what 1289919 say might be true, Redblood and Fluttershy can still be thogether, if Twilight or Pinky Pie doesn't kill him first
Filthy has a fucking daughter... then again so does Mikhail Faustin from GTA IV.
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ugh. You had such a good thing going and you had to go and ruin it with ... this, didn't you?!
mind fucked
but i fucking love it
What a crappy ending. The Mystery Fluttershy Fan, I redact my most recent private message.
t.qkme.me/35q1yv.jpg How did I know a twist like this would happen?
lol im guessing you made it a happy ending cause you felt bad? but is was really good.
1290739
I had this ending in mind the entire time.
I regret commenting "butterflies" on the last one
HOLY SHIT WHAT THE FUCK, WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO, OH MY GOD, I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS HAPPENED, HOLY FUCKING SHIT.
MIND BLOWN
20 minutes later
Okay, I admit, i wasn't expecting that at all, this made me mad, but yeah, awesome story, you sir, are brilliant, have these mustaches
Reaction while reading revelation:
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Yay, I earned a Nostalgia Critic face, high praise, thank you.
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Because Nostalgia Critic has the best faces for every situation.
To be clear: I was pleasantly surprised with the revelation. It's always the quiet ones who're the most raunchy, huh?
Oh, and you're welcome
Wow I can't say how shocking it all fits together. You my dear sir have done a very good job with this. At first I thought it was just a terrible pony who wanted to rape and hurt Flutters but now it turns out he wasn't so bad after all. This has truly blew my mind, and I can't say how much I liked this so far. I'm not a clopper, though I find that side of the fandom a little interesting artistic wise. But this... this isn't your usual clopfic no this is much more. It's like a clop/mystery. You my dear sir have in all words earned my fav. I am so glad to have read this, and I hope you come out with the next chapter soon.
I'm... Not quite sure what to make of this. Are we supposed to feel trolled? I ask this because I'm honestly confused.
1290755
Luckily for you I'm usually willed to believe others.
But honestly, this looked like you went completely crazy with what was supposed to be a normal rapefic and suddenly pulled the emergency brake. I mean, Rarity's little sister can't use magic ever again, and the other foals are probably traumatized. There is a legion of unicorns scouting the woods, and even Celestia joined in on the whole affair, only for Fluttershy to fulfil her completely crazy fantasy? ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME???!!!
Ya got me, brony
1291093
Thank you, it was my intention to cast cloppers in a good light. As the author it was agonising to hear all the Redblood hate while I slowly worked my way to this chapter and I couldn't say anything for the sake of spoilers. I can't believe I made it without blurting it out.
Probably would have abandoned this fic if not for the over whealming amount of positive comments. You guys kept me going.
Anyway... It's not quite over yet, the next chapter is called.... Loyalty. I think some obvious conclusions can be drawn from that
This is like watching a car crash in slow motion.
Can't stop watching/reading, but soo many bad things going on.
YOU'RE FUCK UP MY BRAINZ
I expect anything, but not this!
You're really cool
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HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!
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OH MY GOD.
Oh, Butterflies was a save-word. Who would expect that?
1284974
Oh it's was me.
I like it to be right.
Somebody could find that Fluttershy's enthusiasm for the situation was too far awaken.
Now I know why know the trues. Now I'm fill sorry, because I thought it was bad characterization.
But I hope I wasn't the only one how find Filthy Rich OOC?
Still It went a little bit of the edge in the end.
Terrible for Sweetie Bell to lost her magic, but she get her cutie mark. So we can call it a win-win-situation, may be?
I don't think so. it was cruel form you to make poor Sweetie suffering so much.
And if Fluttershy was get what she want it was it worth.
So why & how was Celestia involved
I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!
i wanted to see something about redblood geting killed by celestia but now it is f*cked up
(Great story though)
I just realized something more fucked up, if they were expecting Celestia , they she was in on it the entire time!
1290780 well its still a great ending
25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lowxh1l1Vc1qjkyjdo1_400.gif Congratulations, you just had to go off and ruin it like that. A FUCKING ROLE PLAY! SERIOUSLY! CELESTIA WAS IN ON IT! That would mean Sweetie Belle blew her horn up for... what? Nothing? Fuck Fluttershy being emotionally destroyed from the rape, Wait untill she finds out what she did to Sweetie Belle! FUCK YOU MAN! FUCK.......YOU! Now that my breif moment of rage is over, please, redeem this story, Give it multiple endings, one for where It wasn't a role play, please, at least let it seem logical.
Oh you!
no seriously, what the fuck is going on!?
No. No. NO. NO!
What the hell, man? That was a terrible twist. It was absolutely ridiculous in so many ways that I can't even list them all.
Why do I get the feeling that we've all been trolled really, really hard?
Hi. I just made an account in order to give you some feedback.
Overall, the story was pretty good for what it's worth. You made us feel Fluttershy pain, you showed us how wicked a pony can be, and... Oh wait, none of that matters!
I really did not like your Deus Exchange Machina ending you gave your story. It had so much going for it, and we were all waiting for a big climatic event to finally settled the story, and then?
"LOLJK we were just kidding none of it was serious. All those emotions and pity you felt for Fluttershy? Turns out, it was all fake and acted"
You have some talent, to connect the reader with the story, so whatever your next project is, please don't let it end like this one. Give it a proper, serious ending, not just taking the cheap way out.
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Plot Twist.
Just like In Batman ; The Beginnings, i Think....
batman ran over The Joker, He Kinda Stopped Doing Crimes And We Hate Batman.
this blew my freaking mind, but despite that i still wish for an alternate ending or something... Just to make a little sense?
i fucking hate you and this story
i used to love it until this goddamn chapter...
1290071
Unless one of these chapters is a "real ending", don't even fucking bother, there's really no further point. You've already wrecked this story and not to mention alienated your fans with this shitty ending. You've already had your unfunny laugh. You've already let down those who had come to love this story and those who were looking forward to the final, heroic confrontaion in the end. There is nothing else left to do. There is no more reason for readers to stay engaged in this disaster of a fic. The ship has already sailed. (or rather, it has already sunk.) The joke has been made. (and what a sorry excuse for one it was.) there is literally no reason to continue this story after the utter betrayal you just pulled here.
Well congratulations on achieving the exact opposite: you've successfully cast cloppers as good for nothing trolls who will turn on their fans for some cheap lulz.
Correction: this fanbase that you HAD, that you created by making an engaging, exciting, emotionally driving story, one that engaged the readers and drew their interests. A fanbase that grew to love to hate red blood, that looked forward to that bastard's imminent demise. A fanbase that, for the most part, loved it from beginning until now, a fanbase that you COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY STABBED IN THE BACK FOR A CHEAP LAUGH.
...yeah. Good luck getting us to follow ANYTHING you make in the future. I, like so many others I suspect, have un-favorited and downvoted this story in protest.
As such, I agree wholeheartedly with 1292380. If you actually DO have any real love or concern for your fanbase, and are not just saying that to be a troll, PLEASE dump this sorry excuse for an ending (or at the least, make it an alt ending) and give us the real ending we all crave, the ending we wanna see instead of this "Durr hur it wiz faek all along lul I sooo clevar!!" crap troll ending you've made.
Uhmmmm.... this.... i can take it.
allright guys, wasnt this supposed to be a trollfic anyways?
still, it makes all the rarity bullshit more reasonable and makes me not want to kill redblood anymore
still, it kinda dissapoints me in a way, as it kills the ability to make more clop chapters, and limints the lenght of the story to 1-2 chapters more
anyways, the fic had 20+ chapters already so i dont feel that bad about it.
in conclusion, I congratulate you for best troll in all of fimfiction, the story was really good overall, it had great clop, and i will follow you for future fics
sorry for any negative comments you may be getting these days, people may be really angry ad turn that thumb down, but you know... BEST TROLL EVER