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YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES!!!
http://mylittlefacewhen.com/f/605/
hate... Hate.... HATE!! HATE!!! HATE!!!
Poor Rarity
ohh so many words
but it's on my list
My heart says: "But you love Rarity, and clearly you would never dream of seeing her come to harm..."
My dick says: "TOO FUCKING BAD!"
MOAR.
I remember when I used to ignore rapefics, ha...
253914 soo true
BLOOD BLOOD BLOOOD!!!! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!!! DEATH!!!!! And that is how I feel about rapists.
the ending was sooo obvious
greate rapefic nontheless
I hope you make a sequel. I want to know what happened to Starry Night and Sweet Leaf. i hope rarity is pregnant with mercury's and they meet again
255118 Mercury didn't finish inside of her. Stranger things have happened, though...
So the black hooded pony didn't give contraceptive for the slaves, so what about Starry Night and Sweet Leaf?
And I think Rarity pregnant from the first pony who breaking her, because she is in heat when this happening.
(Sorry my english)
Ohmyholyfuckingshitbitchassdickfuckmotherkickahookertitsdamnshittyfucker.
The above describes my feelings. (as emoticons cannot)
Wether it is good or bad is, at this moment, impossible to tell.
And finally, to quote Maggie Simpson, "sequel?".
Rarity should have an abortion... Should be easier for doctors to preform with MAGIC!.
Quite sad indeed, was kinda expecting a happy ending at first.
Knowing you and your other fics, however, I should have expected as much!
Still, awesome read!
I'm going to comment on each chapter to let you know my reaction Trekkie....
Okay. So this chapter was good man, I liked it. Nice way to finish the chapter!
Huh. Well that was short.
That was brilliantly written and incredibly cloppable. I felt the pacing was perfect with the time lapses and the dialogue very well refined. I'm givin' it a 5/5, hope to see more of your stuff in the future!
Part of me wants to walk in, shoot everyone and save Rarity.
The other terrible half of me wants more
Stop this now!
No dashyy...you like it
Say huh? The story changed completely, making me want to actually finish the thing. The ending was predictable though, and much the whole chapter was. That being said though, The whole story was a good read, and I expected much worse coming from you. Once again, Bravo Trekkie, Bravo.
OK, this is gettin weird
that was weird but decent
Interesting.... I hope to see a sequel soon
You just ended it there?
What?
hot DAMN that was awesome i sat there and read the word dildo and slapped myself for some dumb ass reason then i nearly squeeled when she started fucking herself and i was all like
Me: this is fucking awesome...... oh damnit now hes awake.
My Dick: YOUR DAMN RIGHT IM AWAKE!!!
Me: go back to sleep damn it
My Dick: NO FUCK YOU!!!
Me: dont make me get the branding iron......
My Dick: HOLY SHIT WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!
Me: go back to sleep or ill DO IT!!!!!
My Dick: (snore snore snore snore)
Me: rotflmfao
that chapter was a bit short and sortta boring
you sir are a sick SICK SON OF A BITCH!!!!
but i congratulate you, applaud you, and worship you for finally allowing my mind to take in the thaught of not being the only one out there who would think of shit like this.... you sir are a FUCKING GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!
but i think you should have made her swallow more cum before ending the chapter cuz ive been sayin for a month: "rarity needs to get fucked NOW!" but thank you anyway
ive said it once ill say it again "You sir are a FUCKING GENIUS!!!!!!!!!"
YOU ASS HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!???! IF U DNT MAKE A SEQUAL ILL FIND YOU AND TEAR YOUR ARMS OFF YOU MAGGOT ASS PEICE OF SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg im srry i meant to direct that anger at the rapists but it came out at you cuz i commented you first my bad lmfao but seriously plz make a sequel or there will be hell to pay...... and for the rapist's i hope you come to my house and try to take my sister because IF YOU DO ILL CATCH YOU..... AND ILL TEAR YOUR ARMS OFF WITH MY FUCKING MIIIIIIIIID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Man, you're cruel! Not even an epilouge?
277497 MUWAHAHAHAHA
Very well done for a clopfic. RARITY IS OFFICIALLY MAMA
why is it complet?
352070 Because it is complete.
I read this story based mostly upon a mix of boredom and curiosity. I finished the entire story series in one go without break. After reading every last word and absorbing it all i can only say i wish i had a stick big and jagged enough to hit you with......... for not making a sequel. It's like making a incredible soap opera and getting everyone hooked then canceling it at the peak of the story line. As seen from you with your other works (that i plan to read over in great detail) there is nothing but excellence and delicious cloptastic story with heart wrenching bits that make me feel guilty for even being aroused. 6/5 because it was just that good.
254739 Slaneesh, however approves of this story. good work.
me like
360237 You can hit me with a stick as long as I can hug you!
Thanks for the comment, I know I can be a bit of a dick with my endings sometimes, 
I do have a trolly side. I'm glad you enjoyed the story though.
A sequel isn't out of the question, but probably won't be happening for a while.
365456 Does that rule account for all of us?
-SS
389703
*THWACK*
Me: Owwwwwwwwww WHO THE BLEEEEEP DID THAT!?!?!?!
Princess Molestia: me
Me: Oh...........wait..........0.0..............OH SHIT RUN FOR YOU MFING LIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND VIRGINITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*THWACK*
Me: owwww SHES HITTING ME WITH A FREAKING DILDO........................YEAH I AM RUNNING NOW.
Princess Molestia: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA
Me: wait i am alicorn too SWEEEET
Princess Molestia:0.0...................uh......................wait...................NOW I AM RUNNING FOR IT.
all other ponies: YAY
sad story but great ending, love you for the ending.
i was honestly surprised that u didnt just make it the worst ending possible where twilight and the doctors at the hospital being in on the whole 'ponynapping' thing and sending her back. (i like this ending better though) great story and some other stuff you've heard a million times before, blah blah blah.
Oh, thank Celestia she made it out! Now I don't have to feel bad about clopping to this anymore!
But, um, yeah. Great story. I hope it's at least Mercury's foal...
253914
Y'know, this was evitable when you came here but...
SWIPER NO CLOPPING! SWIPER NO CLOPPING! SWIPER NO CLOPPING!
Short Chapter=Short Comment.
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Continueing.
Mane 6, Spike, Derpy and Trixie altogether: WHAT?!!