Flutterwhy4
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Good version of the story, quiet "steamy"
Well I'll be damned. If it would be possible, I'd love to see this ending as an episode! You've yet to disappoint me A.D. Woah nelly that was hot! >w<
Woah. Didn't see that coming.
Ice cream semen? What a coincidence, mine tastes like sweetened ricotta.
You'll never eat a canoli again with that knowledge.
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Me and three girls approve of this
this is the single most terrifying thing i've ever seen in my entire life
still, it was a sweet read
specially if i'm playing skyrim
Boner
stay down
you are just confused.
5 stars!
Just as in all things, only pony vaginas can save us it turns out
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Sorry had to wipe the jizz off my keyboard.
I GOT TO check this one out!
Wow.
Just WOW.
That was amazing. I love this fandom.
“Mmmmmm, sorry, it tastes like ice cream!! I can’t help myself!” BEST LINE EVER!
I lazily clicked on this link just to see what it was about. Then I saw it was a clopfic, and got excited. Saw it was written by Flutterwhy4, and read it immediately.
This was so brilliant that I seriously began to doubt my own skills as a clopfic-writer
But in all honesty: great work with this, the steam practically flowed through my computer screen and the ardor was unimaginably fantastic. Kudos to you, man
This was a freaking amazing story for a straight-up clopfic.
Only things I would address from my personal preference:
1: Have the progression to sex to be more natural, like the emotional resonance of friendship grew so strong it drove them to love and lust, rather than Clover just going "We need to fuck to win!"
2: Insert a blurb for Clover doing something like magically lubing her anus and rectum otherwise she should have been torn up pretty bad by all rights. Maybe cleaning herself out with magic at the same time so that Pansy's little scene is less squicky.
3: While fucking the Windygos it would be hot to have more of them watching each other and getting turned on by it. Maybe have the Windygos bring them closer together so they could interact a bit.
4: Would be nice if that giant flaming heart were in the story.
Also congratulations on writing a story that does not make me want to punch myself in the face for reading.
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Heh! I know what you mean.
115595 Heh heh. Coming. Yeah, none of them saw that.
Best 1-shot, er, 3-shot clopfic ever. 69 stars are for you.
118003 The giant flaming heart was in the story, It's just that Smart Cookie gulped it down, igniting a fire in her belly.
... to be honest, I was just waiting for them to realize they were having a threesome in front of almost a quarter of Equestria.
That would totally reignite Fluttershy's 'modeling' career. Purrrrrrowr.
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You're interpreting this as happening on stage during the pageant?
Or are you just trying to be amusingly meta?
118622 ... I dunno, the meta thing? I understand that the author wrote this as being the actual happenstance, but I'd like to see the mane 6 reenact it. Pinkie'd be so jealous, but 'Shy'd get to have a little action with Twilight.
Ah so just wishful thinking.
My headcanon is that the real leaders were male and the 3 retainers were actually their mates. This is why Equestria is a matriarchy now, the world was saved by girl power and pink hearts.
My god that was hot...
But they were ponies...
... I'm going to shut off this computer...
...and walk outside whilst pondering this revelation to a great extent...
After I clop to this of course, who do you take me for, a blueballer?
Stop it boner...
There is no single reaction face which captures my current emotions sufficiently, so I'll just go with
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I... Enjoyed this... I think.
115619 My semen tastes of cake mix.
WHO WANTS TO LICK THE WHISK?!
Thank you all for your kindness and feedback. I'm always amazed at the community here on fimfiction, you guys are the absolute best and the things you say leave me speechless. I'm glad the majority of you enjoyed my story and you can expect more from me in the future.
120309 me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't tell you how much I loved this
Not... bad...
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I think that's what happens when you let Trollestia write plays
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Well I wonder what the leader might have thought upon the discovery of female juices and semen everywhere in the cave
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that was the clopiest clop fic i have read that was amazing i loved fluttershys part just because i love flutershy
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good job loved it
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280770 I know that feel, bros.
226557 'Big sister, what are they doing? Is this a commom thing now or...
'Oh, you know, its...uh...artistic expression? Yeah.' *CLOPCLOPCLOP*
Wow. When you said this was cloppy I didn't know it would be THIS cloppy. It's about TWICE as cloppy as I would've assumed at first glance. Fantastic job.
DAMN... that was a lot hawter than i thought it would have been
Pardon me, gotta go torch my pants.
I LOLed at Private Pansy's tongue getting frozen.
Such a good story ;D
Hearth's Warming Indeed
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Nice story! Here is Sexy Librarian Twilight for you.
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damn that is awesome i would clop but i don't do that, very close though with this one. i love how this is a play for children and adults alike
tottaly awesome. no doubt about it. i love it
I feel like a bad man for liking this...
And the best part? Platinum, Puddinghead, and Hurricane were awake for the whole thing. With their eyes frozen open.
I can think of something other than a hearth being warmed.