YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES!!!
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hate... Hate.... HATE!! HATE!!! HATE!!!

Poor Rarity

ohh so many words
but it's on my list

MOAR.

I remember when I used to ignore rapefics, ha...

BLOOD BLOOD BLOOOD!!!! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!!! DEATH!!!!! And that is how I feel about rapists.

the ending was sooo obvious
greate rapefic nontheless

I hope you make a sequel. I want to know what happened to Starry Night and Sweet Leaf. i hope rarity is pregnant with mercury's and they meet again

255118 Mercury didn't finish inside of her. Stranger things have happened, though...

So the black hooded pony didn't give contraceptive for the slaves, so what about Starry Night and Sweet Leaf?
And I think Rarity pregnant from the first pony who breaking her, because she is in heat when this happening.
(Sorry my english)

Ohmyholyfuckingshitbitchassdickfuckmotherkickahookertitsdamnshittyfucker.

The above describes my feelings. (as emoticons cannot)
Wether it is good or bad is, at this moment, impossible to tell.

And finally, to quote Maggie Simpson, "sequel?".

Rarity should have an abortion... Should be easier for doctors to preform with MAGIC!.

Quite sad indeed, was kinda expecting a happy ending at first.
Knowing you and your other fics, however, I should have expected as much!
Still, awesome read!

That was brilliantly written and incredibly cloppable. I felt the pacing was perfect with the time lapses and the dialogue very well refined. I'm givin' it a 5/5, hope to see more of your stuff in the future!

Say huh? The story changed completely, making me want to actually finish the thing. The ending was predictable though, and much the whole chapter was. That being said though, The whole story was a good read, and I expected much worse coming from you. Once again, Bravo Trekkie, Bravo.

that was weird but decent

Interesting.... I hope to see a sequel soon

You just ended it there?
What?
I want to know what happens! Noooo!

YOU ASS HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!???! IF U DNT MAKE A SEQUAL ILL FIND YOU AND TEAR YOUR ARMS OFF YOU MAGGOT ASS PEICE OF SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg im srry i meant to direct that anger at the rapists but it came out at you cuz i commented you first my bad lmfao but seriously plz make a sequel or there will be hell to pay...... and for the rapist's i hope you come to my house and try to take my sister because IF YOU DO ILL CATCH YOU..... AND ILL TEAR YOUR ARMS OFF WITH MY FUCKING MIIIIIIIIID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Man, you're cruel! Not even an epilouge?

277497 MUWAHAHAHAHA

Very well done for a clopfic. RARITY IS OFFICIALLY MAMA

why is it complet?

352070 Because it is complete.

I read this story based mostly upon a mix of boredom and curiosity. I finished the entire story series in one go without break. After reading every last word and absorbing it all i can only say i wish i had a stick big and jagged enough to hit you with......... for not making a sequel. It's like making a incredible soap opera and getting everyone hooked then canceling it at the peak of the story line. As seen from you with your other works (that i plan to read over in great detail) there is nothing but excellence and delicious cloptastic story with heart wrenching bits that make me feel guilty for even being aroused. 6/5 because it was just that good.

254739 Slaneesh, however approves of this story. good work.

me like

360237 You can hit me with a stick as long as I can hug you! Thanks for the comment, I know I can be a bit of a dick with my endings sometimes, I do have a trolly side. I'm glad you enjoyed the story though.

A sequel isn't out of the question, but probably won't be happening for a while.

365456 Does that rule account for all of us?
-SS

389703

*THWACK*
Me: Owwwwwwwwww WHO THE BLEEEEEP DID THAT!?!?!?!
Princess Molestia: me
Me: Oh...........wait..........0.0..............OH SHIT RUN FOR YOU MFING LIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND VIRGINITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*THWACK*
Me: owwww SHES HITTING ME WITH A FREAKING DILDO........................YEAH I AM RUNNING NOW.
Princess Molestia: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA
Me: wait i am alicorn too SWEEEET
Princess Molestia:0.0...................uh......................wait...................NOW I AM RUNNING FOR IT.
all other ponies: YAY

sad story but great ending, love you for the ending.

i was honestly surprised that u didnt just make it the worst ending possible where twilight and the doctors at the hospital being in on the whole 'ponynapping' thing and sending her back. (i like this ending better though) great story and some other stuff you've heard a million times before, blah blah blah.

Oh, thank Celestia she made it out! Now I don't have to feel bad about clopping to this anymore!

But, um, yeah. Great story. I hope it's at least Mercury's foal...

5177533 wow late reply.much?

517507
Too late!

392046 LMFAO i had the same reaction after reading the book Molestia

519340 lol my OC is a Alicorn King named Bluestar but I am not related to the princesses in anyway. i am double the size of celestia.

519425 In more ways than one I have several OC's
1: Grimlock Val: 9-5 foot tall black dragon. Ruler of Equestria a thousands of years before Celestia
2: Nightwing Moon: 6-1 foot tall alicorn human. 1 of the two sons of Nightmare moon.
3: Nightshade Moon: 6-1 foot tall alicorn human. 2nd of the two sons of Nightmare moon.
4: Ocelot Striker: 5-5 foot tall pegasus human. Husband of Princess Celestia.
5: My real life OC Dante Sparda: 6-7 Demon human. Son of the leader of the armies of hell.
6: Artemis Core: 5-4 earth pony human. Brother of Twilight Sparkle and husband to G & P Trixie.
I have many more but i wont bore you with them.

519500 dang it i forgot to mention i am the king of the void.... FAIL!!!
and if #4 is a oc then would'n it be Queen Celestia and King Stricker? because once a princess marries she becomes a Queen.

519896 Eh, he's not really royalty and their not married yet. Their wedding is in a few days..... Or whenever i can get around to writing on the story next.

520714 ok um i never read any of your stories before. but i think it should be good.

521000 DONT read the two i have up. They both suck ass. I have four more being written right now. Imma let you know when their finished alright?

521067 uh why do they both suck? what are they grimdarks or something?

521072 No they just....... They just both suck ass..... Like i cannot even begin to describe the amount of ass they suck. Just the way they were written. I edited one chapter in the first one yesterday and wanna know how many things i had to fix? 194. I edited 15 chapters in one of my newer books and wanna know how many things i fixed? 3. Seem like a difference?

521101 sounds like you need a proofreader man.....and your talking to a editor/proofreader right now!! :)

521120 Well as much as i would LOVE the help, it makes me vomit to even look at that crap compared to my newer work.

Having fun? YAY! SO many comments on mah story!

Fuck all rapists... Poor Rarity!

But, good story!