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Diablomuerte2


The greatest source of inspiration for the stories I write is my insane day dreams.

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So Rainbow Dash decided to share the story of how she died saving Fluttershy's life. Her friends decided to humor her and listen along. As they hear the story they keep wondering why Rainbow Dash insists she has died. The ending tells them everything.

Picture used with permission and the artist name is ~BlackSonicShadow

Now with it's own some what sequel More hilarity here.

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BOOOO!!! thats the worst pick up line I've ever heard

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Then you must have not heard many pick up lines :rainbowdetermined2:

oh my god that was GREAT!!! hahaha!!:rainbowlaugh:

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Glad you think so. I was just randomly thinking it in my head and said "must write this out." :yay:

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What is the "what" referring to? :rainbowhuh:

3024295 I did not understand what happened.

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Ok well not to be giving any spoilers. Rainbow Dash is talking to them in the library and she is telling them a story. The story that is being told is being described by her with her "Awesome Filter" on. So the story is a bit exaggerated.

That was actually quite beautiful, I liked it a lot.

3024375 Why I am glad you liked it. :rainbowwild:

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by the seven hells how can something be hilarious,borderlin raunchy and daaawwwwww worthy at the same time.
excuse me whilst i upvote,fav,and bl0g post for people to read it.

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Aww you flatterer you. I am glad you like it. I just was picturing this in my mind while I was writing out a chapter for my other fic. I was just thinking about how Rainbow Dash lives with an Awesome Filter on 24/7 and how she would see things.

As evidenced by the Sleepless in Ponyville episode. The part where Scootaloo gushes about the story of Rarity's almost death and how she described the summary of it. I was thinking of how would Rainbow Dash tell a story about her own adventures? So I wrote it out and boom posted it. :rainbowlaugh:

Know how to make Rainbow Dash's story sound even more awesome?. Have James Earl Jones read it, that's the voice I read it in.

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Quick find me James Earl Jones. Is he even still alive? If so get me him now I just put the sound of his voice in my story and it sounded fantastic :pinkiehappy:

noticed I made some spelling and grammar mistakes so going to quickly fix that. No parts of the story will change though just letting you guys know :P

Intiresting.................... that was not what I expected..........:applejackunsure:

Ok that was cute, in a really strange way...

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Well was it a good not expected or a bad not expected?

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Yeah that is the consensus it seems. Honestly I didn't plan out this fic I just wrote what I was thinking in my head. I even have a Sequel in my head but not a sequel about RD telling how she died. Just a story about RD telling Scootaloo about Fluttershy's reading glasses... since the concept is in my head I can't really explain it but it's not a direct copy of this story's format instead it just follows the silliness.

diablomuerte2 Good unexpected

3025164 to reply to people, click the little picture of overlapping /\/\/\/\ speech bubbles next to their comment

3025164 :yay: best kind of unexpected

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You being a teacher bro? Also, shouldn't your ass be in bed?

3025479 L0L indeed.

Skimmed it, but that was still a funny story.

3025731 The positiveness you appear to be having is well deserved. It was really good storytelling.

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Ironically enough my more serious story To be a Wonderbolt was just destroyed in likes and almost in views by this one.

I wrote this story based off a 5 minute day dream that I sorta acted out... crazy stuff right? But yeah I love telling stories. I am glad people enjoy it. Honestly I put it out there to be read and if it's liked it's a bonus.

If you like this story give my others a shot. You don't have to just a thought see my other stories are more tragic based but I throw in some good humor from time to time. It seems this story has just taken off though. Unexpectedly I thought surely some laughs would be had but I truly didn't expect this story to receive this much attention and I am glad it did. I am humbled by you the readers who have decided this work was good enough to be given a like or fave. I literally have been seeing massive bumps since the story was posted.

Anyways that is my spiel.. now if I can only find an artist willing to give me permission to use a Fluttershy in Glasses pic I can write another short story with humor being it's base.. I have this idea in my head .. and I want it in story form.

Muhaha, dat ending !!! What and their friends are just going to stay there and watch, but they still get Spike out of the room ? Basterds :rainbowlaugh:

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Spike is a baby dragon according to twilight. So yeah she would send him out of there.

The rest will you get the gist XD

I called us all together to say I was killed by Fluttershy sexing me up. :facehoof:

Well I was entertained... I think? :unsuresweetie:

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You didn't get it. You see RD never thought she in her life would have a chance with her long time friend. It wasn't the sex... :flutterrage:

But I am glad you were entertained? :raritywink:

Ohhh... That was awesome :rainbowkiss:

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Obviously you haven't read the story or that question would have been null and void.

Edit: That came out harsher than meant. No offense meant

That was... Uhhhh... Funny. I think it was funny :pinkiecrazy:

I is slightly confuzzled:derpytongue2:

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Lol yeah well glad you liked it. It's not meant to be taking too seriously as it's just a random idea I had in my head. :rainbowwild:

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Still. I laughed a fair bit. V. Random, but funny because of it:twilightsmile:

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Read the sort of sequel it's a gem! :pinkiehappy:

Oh gawd, you already got me grinning from ear to ear at the first sentences :rainbowlaugh:!
Faved and liked, but its still totally mean how you characterized Rd & co :rainbowlaugh:

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In this story? I didn't characterize them out of canon.

Rarity loves gossip (Gabby Gums Episode)

Fluttershy is shy (almost every episode)

Twilight is inquisitive and sometimes oblivious ( almost every episode)

AJ has no time for shenanigans (Almost every episode)

Unless you meant something else? Care to explain? :moustache:

:derpyderp2:

Whaaaaaaa...?

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All I thought at the end was "well that escalated quickly"

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Yes most people just go .... "wtf?" lol. :moustache:

Holy shit 50 favorites. I am glad you guys like it this much :yay:

3025197 ok. that makes sence.

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