Fluttershy's pet bunny Angel forces Fluttershy to confront Rainbow Dash about her feelings. Will sparkes fly or will this venture blow up in Fluttershy's face? Read it and find out silly!
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The rarest and mightiest possession of the human spirit can only be discovered by means of story and by no other process of thinking; to know all this and to have it as your own is to have much.
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Cute! I like it a lot! You portrayed the characters well, which I sometimes find hard in romance. Great job!
Didn't you forget the Angel tag?
Very good for a starter one-shot.
Some of the character dialogue didn't feel exact, but was really close if this is your first.
The only thing that I felt was off was that they both slowly drifted farther from their actual personalities, it's subtle and is common in romance stories so don't worry.
Angel must have gotten one heck of a treat!
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I left it open to the imagination on purpose
I'm enjoying this story. This is what inspired me to make a love story.
i love it
and when will more chapters for this story come out
This story never fails to put a smile on my face
I'm writing more chapters as we speak, but I still don't know how I will end this story.
Although I'm leaning towards a sad ending.
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I'm working on the next chapter now.
3095934 ok
3095844 please don't make it a sad ending where a pony dies or Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy break up
please have Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy get back to together
i love it and yay Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash are back together now and what are you planing to do for your future stories on this website
This was a beautiful story I absolutely loved it
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(she was going to be missing for 5-10 years in the way I envisioned it at first), but I was convinced to end it happily.
Thanks I had fun writing it. I was going to make it end sadly for the two. I was going to have Fluttershy pass away while Dash was missing
This story was going to be a bridge for one of my other stories entitled The Letter. It was supposed to be the end of this one, but it really is better with a happy ending wouldn't you agree?
And a big THANK YOU to dream 1990 for convincing me to use a happy ending.
3097273 I do agree.
these 4 chapters u just made confused the shit out of me
3097273 I do read stories and post them on YouTube. I haven't had read any stories for a while and was wondering if it was okay with you if I could read and post your story on YouTube. All the credit will go to you of course. But before you reply. I started this reading thing just about a couple weeks ago and i'm not very famous. Maybe soon if I do get that anime studio I want i'll be able to make a cartoon out of this. Or i'll just draw it out myself. So the decision is up to you.
3097276 yeah
The story went by too fast, i was like "ok they got together way too fast but now they want to end this, why?", RD was out of character, just, well thats not the RD we know
in the end Scootaloo was my favorite, not many lines for her but at least she was funny
This chapter...it almost made me cry.
Sneaky sneaky with that RariJack there.
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I think I was going to write a RariJack fic, but never got around to it.
Thank you for noticing that. I myself had honestly forgotten about it.
Maybe I'll start it after my current fic is finished...
Wait, Angel approves?