• Published 9th Aug 2013
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Obsession and Avarice - John The Dragon

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Celestia you moderately evil genius:trollestia:

Well once again I am deeply disturbed. Well done Sir:moustache:. On an off note I keep finding myselg hating Rarity but then I just have to keep reminding myself that it's damn Celestia who is to blame!


Yours Truly Thecakedevil.

Blueblood got Double Burn!!!!!!

Seriously? Cole didn't tell you that simple thing!? Oh well she's been under a lot of stress lately so of course things clop past her mind. Anyways make it public on the share button then you copy the link and, on fimfiction, there is a little button near the top of where you write stories. Click it and paste the link and badabing badabom you got an uploaded story.
Oh yeah, I'll copy this story and fix it right now. Of Coles working on anything related to you I'll get it to you in a few hours.

3059485 I do the same thing when I'm writing the dang story.

spelling errors but....I LOVED IT:pinkiehappy:

As much as I enjoyed and do think this was a great chapter, I believe the scene at the chariot just before the cockblock was rushed. Maybe even forced, but not too much. Only one major problem. Two dicks? Seriously dude, you're gonna do that shit? Come on man. That concept is stupid even for fucking hentai logic's standards!
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Also, I'm beggining to wonder... How is Spike going to bang Celestia with his size? :twilightoops:
I don't know why, but every time I think about it, I believe is going to end up being some really awkward and unintentionally funny sex scene. :rainbowlaugh:

Yes! I want MOAR!

just one question though, is Celestia going to go Yandere on somepony's plot? as in Yuno level of Yandere?

Everything was going great until bucking Twilight casued the biggest Cockblock ever! That is why Twilight is not best pony:ajbemused:

3059640d ont worry about the two dicks, lets just say, spike is a special dragon. :moustache:

And I saw this pic of baby spike banging celestia on google... it was the funniest shit I ever seen; it would have been the cover pic for this fic, but it was NSFW

3059670 cock blocks are the bane of the planet

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d ont worry about the two dicks, lets just say, spike is a special dragon.

Then why the dragon of the movie also has two dicks? :ajbemused:
Are you talking about the picture made by cold blodded Twilight, by any chance? :rainbowkiss:

'Tia is determined for double dragon D. :moustache:

3059647 Very likely.

3059572 Serves the bastard right.

just two things:
1) why is there so much empty space at the end of the chapter?
2) what do you mean by "import from google docs"? because it makes me think that you're wanting a way to directly plant the googledoc document directly onto a new chapter on here... but that isn't possible with FimFiction because of the way they have to input text in a chapter, I find that it's best to copy from google docs onto a notepad then copy from the notepad onto the new chapter, but that's just what I do

In this chapter we had Twilight make breakfast for Spike, I'm assuming is trying to win the "best friend" position, only to to fail at the end via an ill timed scroll. :rainbowlaugh:

Then Celestia almost went postal on a couple of Canterlot nobles. Crazy Celestia is best Celestia.

The only thing I question is, did they get an actual dragon actor for that movie and what film company would cut the movie in half for a to be continued and expect audiences to not be pissed off?

"Blueblood, you shouldn't think like that, it's probably why most of the country hates you," said Fancy Pants

.

Pretty much sums it up and I love delusional he is about his popularity.

3059747the dicks are spoilers! :raritywink: it will all be explained later.

And I don't know who made the pic, I just typed celestia and spike on google.... the bam! I see a pic of him fucking her; holding on for dear life.

Okay...I'm really not,sort of disturbed of this chapter at all.:twilightsmile:

See,now I want to know of Spike's parents will even do.:eeyup::raritydespair:

HA,damn Blueblood.:yay:

Can you Italic the message from Twilight.

Celestia what are you planning you sexy mare

She's gonna announce to all the guests at the gala that she is loving spike.

This I gotta see.

3060552 the princess was a real actress but they used magic to portray the dragon. And you'll see what type of "film company" would do that later on.

I wonder what will happen in part 2 of that movie.

Was it a porno or a rated R romance movie?

3075626 only the last scene had any explicit content... so yes a porno; Celestia knows how to pick her movies. :trollestia:

Why is Celestia's unhealthy obsession with Spike so fucking hilarious? :rainbowlaugh: I laugh every time I see that cover photo.

I really like the idea behind this fic, but the poor grammar and spelling makes reading a painful affair. You've gotten better, but your work could definitely use a prereader.

i hope you update soon

Excellent story i can't wait for the next update!

Also, if you know how to import from Google docs, please tell me.

While using Google Docs, select the "Share" button on the upper right corner of the screen. Under "Who has access", select "Change" and in the options window that'll appear select "Public on the web". Click save. Copy the link located under "link to share".

When editing your chapter, click the button with the green arrow located to the left of the "Save" and "Clear" buttons. Paste the Google Docs link and click "okay". The chapter should upload with all the formatting intact.

Hope that helps.

dammit twilight you had one job :twilightoops:

NJEDS MOER PRONS
UPDATE?

Two things about this.
1) I want to punch Blueblood in the throat.
2) Oh snap!

I got into thinking what would happen if after 2 months when his parents wake up and find out that princess celestia wants spike as her husband?

What they react?

wow i really love your work

This is actually really good! :heart:

yah the stories interesting which is why it caught my eye. you have my attention sir please continue to do so

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So...Update maybe?

i know right thought i didnt know you read this zamaraic? cool

HOLY SHIT. Are you trying to scare people away with that pic. LOL. I'm just messing with you.

And this story is just completely creeping me out. Spike is bound to find out she's an obsessed stalker evetually. Hope he finds out about her turning Rarity lesbian for Pinkie too.

Please my friend don0t let this fic die in silence :ajbemused:

3163717 luna is best pony...
Molestia is best lestia...:trollestia:

3271442I don't know about that, Drunklestia has a shot at that title.

Well, there are both immortal...

3105811 Crying too much is fatal to a dragon...

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