I think its copy and paste.

I totally called on the date on the calendar being Spike's parent's wake up call. Though it looks like Spike comes from a strong family. I wonder what is holding him back? Anyway another great chapter.

the idea of story is awesome, but the fulfillment of it - awful

Oh sweet crispity Jesus this is rich. Grammar in a few areas are off but other then that I'm hooked.

3038639 Sounds like a Night to Remember.

fullnovazero.files.wordpress.com/2012/01/skyrim-anighttoremember.jpg

My mind has this weird and unnatural way to dealing with characters (in stories) that makes me sad... it kills them in the must horrible way possible...

So yeah, I guess you now know what my mind is conjuring up for lil' old spikey wikey...

3038678 is it the grammar or the story by itself?

3038639 fuck the Gala, that's the best night ever, and thanks!

I only have one questing what is with the gore tag? Spike's parents going to get revenge for him after the heart break? we all know Celstia will just fuck his problems away with him

3040933 the gore tag wont be used until later, should I remove it until then?

3040996Ehhnope

“I-I hate her... yet why?” “Why can't I stop loving her."

Cuz you are a fucking moron. That's why.
I don't know what do you plan to do with Spike's parents. But I believe you're making them a bit too powerful for their own good. And that can become a problem in many ways...
But other than that I really like how you're making all the pieces get in place. I can't wait to see how will Celestia try to seduce Spike.
PD:Why would yu wan't to add pictures? They'll just kick us out of the immersion of the story.

3039479
grammar is fine, story need to be more... mature, i mean when i read it i have a feeling like 10-11 years old wrote it

Awkwardly enough, about a week before you posted this story I found that exact pic.

3042671 hmm... I found this pic one week before I wrote the story, interesting.

It's odd, as I read further, I start to develop a dislike, possibly a light hate, of Celestia...I mean, I'm not exactly partial to Sparity one way or the other but, oh, I don't know...

3042671 WTF IS WRONG WITH YOUR PICTURE!!?!!?!

3044064
Correction:

WTF IS RIGHT WITH YOUR PICTURE!!?!!?!

Also:
>Looks At Avatar Picture
>Nice Boobs
>Extreme Hard-on

3044064
Dear Pad.
It's just like a train wreck, you want to look away but you find yourself just looking at it more and more.

Yours Truly Thecakedevil.

P.S. I agree with Darcy on the matter of your picture , love it.

3045084 Its 50%against my will and 50% i agreed with this
P.s your pic is cool too brohoof /)

This is some Majora's Mask shit right here 25.media.tumblr.com/9d7eb3a19490c85741267d8a56611c2a/tumblr_mf97nnWfw71rvbbc0o1_r1_500.png

3048295 right on the money.

This story is quite fun to read.
It has the 'twist' but, what about the 'turn'.

FUCK'IN,Spike's parent sounded to (OP) overpower.
By reading Ch.1 and 2...You made me love Celestia more,I mean
I want to tap that plot and drink the 'enchanted water' All buck'in day.
She is my second fav pony.

3055858 who wouldn't want the enchanted water? and Spikes parents are OP for a good reason. you just gotta wait until later.

3056093 Okay

Spike does have a point. Six years of messing with him... But, I know she actually did like him until Celestia intervened. But still... For me it was a day's worth of two years when I asked a girl out.

3056093 FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

“I-I hate her... yet why?” The young dragon asked. “Why can't I stop loving her?"

the instant I saw this, i thought of this song: [youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=BpwCJzPlz8k]

well I think this song fits how Spike feels for Rarity